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Posted by : a May 17, 2013

بِسْــــــــــــــــمِ اﷲِالرَّحْمَنِ اارَّحِيم
السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ

NARUTO CHAPTER 631 PREDICTION
The strongest soldiers are ready!
(flashback to before minato got to the battlefield)
(The scene shows the the four edo hokages onto top of the hokage monuments)
[B]Hashirama:[/B]lets go! Tobirama fly us out of here
(Tobirama creates a space time barrier)
Tobirama;ok everyone jump in
Suigetsu:I'll be the first to go I might be able to get away from these monsters if I make a run for it
(just as Suigetsu is about to jump in the space time barrier it begins to move weirdly but it then stabilizes again)
Hashirama:Tobirama is something wrong
(Tobirama seems disturbed by something)
Tobirama:no nothing at all
Sasuke:well then i will go first Sasuke switches to Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan
Sasuke:lets see if Madara lives up to his name
Orochimaru:kukuku (thinking) how will sasuke hold himself against the great madara
(taka,hiruzen,and minato disapear into the barrier all that is left is Hashirama and tobirama)
(Hashirama and Tobirama jump into the barrier arriving on the battlefield)
Hashirama:Wait a minute were is everyone else where is madara?
Tobirama:Hashirama listen
Hashirama:Tobirama I swear your always up to something why can't...
Tobirama:Tsunade she's...
(Hashirama expression changes)
Tobirama:dying
(The scene switches to Tsunade is shown in her frail state healing the kages)
(All the kages seems to know what the fate of tsunade will be tsunade knows what they are thinking)
tsunade:Iam more embarrass that all of you saw this state of mine rather than the fact that i am dying
Gaara:don't say...
(Tsunade looks up to the sky and breathes in a heavy sigh her vision begins to blur)
Tsunade:In the end I failed my duty as the hokage
Hashirama:you did not fail
(Tsunade smiles)
[B]Tsunade:[/B] it looks like its my time I can even see my grandfather and granduncle
Gaara:no they are real everyone stand back
Hashirama:we are here to help
(Hashirama places his hand on tsunade but nothing is working)
Tobirama:she has used mitos jutsu
Hashirama continues to try and heal tsunade
Tobirama:brother its impossible her cells have reached their limit let her die in peace!!
Tsunade:Grandfather its alright let me die
(Tsunade grabs Hashiramas hand which is shaking)
Tsunade:There is someone who has your will as the hokage that is all I ever can hope for my only wish is to remember his name Naruto Uzumaki he will bring peace to the shinobi world.
(Tsunade body lays lifeless in her frail state)
(kishi does flashbacks for tsunade)
(Tobirama begins to comfort his brother)
Tobirama:lets go brother
Tobirama and Hashiramas both spike their chakra which is felt across the battlefield
(Madara finally shows a sign of fear)
the end.
Prediction 1
Minato: Am I late?
Naruto: No you were just on time dad!
Sakura: ...What the hell, that is your dad, Yondaime Hokage is your dad?!?!
*Sakura lightly punches naruto in the head*
Naruto: Ow! what was that for??
Sakura: Why didn't you tell me?!?!
Naruto: I just never got to tell you, haha, sorry..

*Madara, sits on the Juubi*: More pests, at least this will be kind of a challenge..

The 1st, 2nd, 3rd, Sasuke, Orochimaru and the rest of Taka arrive.

Sakura and Naruto: SASUKE??
Sasuke: Oh.. hey Naruto, Sakura... I'm sorry...
Naruto: No need to apologize, we have already forgiven you.
Sakura: Yeah, glad to have you... wait... is that.....
Naruto:...Orochimaru
Orochimaru: Its been a long time you brats.
Naruto: You better not be up to anything bad..
Hashirama: So this is your son 4th?He is the jinchuuriki of the 9 tales? He also seems to be completely in sync with it. He seems to be great shinobi, from what I am sensing.
Naruto: Who are you?
Hashirama laughs: I am the first hokage.
Naruto: The first! What an honor!
Hiruzen: I always knew you would surpass me Naruto, way to go!
Naruto: Old man!! Nice to see you again, even under these circumstances.
Tobirama: A fine shinobi indeed, but we need to get to the fight.
Karin: I am sensing some faint chakra sources, it seems to be of The Hokages, Tsunade's chakra is getting very weak.
Hashirama: Tsunade?!?! No, not my grand-daughter, we must get to her immeiately Tobirama, use space time jutsu and get to her immediately, also take the girl who was with the medical ninjutsu.
The Shodai Hokage and the Nidaime Hokage use Space time jutsu to teleport to Tsunade's location.


The scene changes to the Kamui Dimension

Kakashi: So... your decision stands..?
Obito: Yes, I do not choose to go back to that desolate, cruel world, it has nothing for me.
Kakashi: Please come with me Obito, I don't want to lose you as a friend. If you do not come with me, you will not longer be my friend, and thus an enemy to the Shinobi Alliance.
Obito: Insulate dog. Screw your alliance, there will always be war no matter how tightly bonded your villages are! There will always be that one person who is not satisfied with the current ways and will want to disrupt the order. But with this Eternal Tsukuyomi there will be no rebels, just eternal peace, I will give everyone what they have always wanted!
Kakashi: But at the cost of what? Thousands of lives have been ended!
Kakashi: If you are not with me, than you are against me, and against the Shinobi Alliance... I cannot allow you to live.
Obito: You fool, you cannot defeat me...
*Kakashi performs seals, activates Raikiri*
Kakashi: Those who break the rules are trash, and those who abandon their comrades are worse than trash, but he ones who abandon their friends' feelings are even worse than that. I cannot allow you to live...
*Kakashi Darts toward Obito at full speed...*


THE END
The Yellow Flash unleashed!
[Chapter starts at the battlefield]

Minato: I'm not late right?

Naruto: No dad, just in time.

(Minato picks his marked kunai up and momentarily turns to Naruto)

Minato: My son, you have become a great shinobi. I'm glad i made the right decision back then.

Naruto: Dad, I.... (Gets interrupted)

Minato: The Second is bringing the rest of the reinforcements, but his technique takes a little preparation. You must get healed in the meanwhile. I will face Madara, do not interfere until you are 100% and the rest of the gang arrives.

(Naruto looks at his dad worried)

Kurama: (to Naruto in thoughts) Don't put that face, you are about to see a true legend fight. Your father will not be defeated that easily, even if Uchiha Madara is his opponent.

(The alliance looks surprised at the Forth)

Minato: Whoever's in command, tell everyone not to interfere in my battle with Madara. Try to keep the Juubi occupied instead. (Thinking) if I defeat Madara here, we can deal with the beast later.

Madara: (thinking) No doubt about it, that was the Flying Thunder God technique. But much faster and on a bigger scale than Tobirama's.

Madara: Hmph! So you are Obito's sensei. He used to talk a lot about you when i meet him. You must be a small challenge at least. I will have fun with you until the real challenge arrives.

Minato: (thinking) How is he related to Obito? (Out loud)Its been a while since I fought an Uchiha with the Mangekyu Sharingan. Let's test your reflexes. (He throws a lot of marked Kunais all over the battlefield).

Madara: I've fought that technique before... (Engages Susanoo and grins) and its never worked on me.

(Minato flies at max speed towards Madara, who uses EMS to barely see the Forth's movements)

Madara: (thinking) Another annoyingly fast shinobi (remebers the forth raikage), but even faster.

(Madara slashes Susanoo's swords in a circular pattern, to protect himself from all angles, however Minato jumps and sees an opening from above)

Minato: Now! Fuuton Piercing Tornado! (A horizontal tornado comes out of Minato's mouth. Inside it are millions of little wind knives. The jutsu hits Susanoo with its full force)

(Susanoo cracks but no major damage is done.)

(Madara smirks and uses one of the Susanoo secondary arms to grab Minato before he lands on the ground)

Madara: I am disapointed Forth Hokage, you could not even amuse me for a little while)

(Susanoo's gigantic hand crushes Minato, like what Sasuke did to Danzo in their fight)

(However, instead of ashes from the Edo Tensei body, a cloud of smoke appears)

Madara: A clone? When did he?

Real Minato: (teleports behind Madara's Susanoo) That bought me enough time!

(We get a whole page panel of Minato's eyes in Perfect Frog Sage Mode)

Minato: Now for the real attack. Senpou Massive Rasengan Barrage!

(Last page shows Minato slamming to giant Rasengans infused with Sage energy against the back of Madara's Susanoo, destroying it completely)

Chapter ending text: The Yellow Flash shows his true power!!
Father and Son
Page 1
War
Naruto: Thanks for coming dad.
Minato: Well I son I can finally protect you with all my heart.
Naruto: Hehe *big smile*
Sakura: Naruto is that your father!?
Naruto: Yupp! He's the 4th Hokage *big smile* *thumbs up*


Page 2
Sakura: Wow! That's amazing, you must be proud to be the 4th Hokages son.
Madara: Well 4th Hokage, where is everyone else? I sensed more chakra then just 1. I know the 1st Hokage is with you.
Minato: *Stern look* Yeah, but I speeded up knowing my son might need my help.
Naruto: Who else is with you dad?
Minato: Well the 1-3 Hokages, some guys named Suigetsu, Juugo, and Sasuke. Oh and Orochimaru..haha long story.
*Everyone with surprised faces*
Naruto/Sakura: *Surprised faces* Sas-sasuke!?

Page 3
Dimension
Obito: I'm not denying anything. This reality is just cruel world.
Kakashi: Obito you can still be that one kid you once were.
Obito: *smiles* No, Kakashi. It's to late for that now.

Page 4
*Obito runs to Kakashi with a Kunai*
Kakashi: Ugh I'm almost out of chakra. I gotta save up.
*Kakashi runs to Obito with Kunai*

Page 5
Forest
*Running at high speeds*
Sarutobi: Are we there yet?
Tobi: Yeah, just a little longer, were almost there.
Hashi: I hope the 4th Hokage is doing good. I can sense this chakra, its feels really bad.

Page 6
Oro: So Sasuke since you're not destroying the village anymore, does that mean your friends with Naruto again?
Sasuke: I don't know yet. I'll just have to wait and see.
*Kirin remembers some flashbacks about Naruto*
Suigetsu: Ugh I gotta make a run for it soon. I don't wanna get myself killed.

Page 7
War
Shikamaru: *Smirks* Great now that we have the 4th Hokage there is still some hope.
Minato: Even though i'm here this is really going to be a tough opponent.
Naruto: No doubt about it.
Madara: Lets see how strong the legendary 4th Hokage really is!

Page 8
*Rushes with Susano'o*
*Minato grips his Kunai*
*Minato gets grabbed and thrown*
Naruto: Dad!

Page 9
Minato: I'm okay son, I don't feel any pain in this body.
Madara: Hehe what a sorry excuse for a Hokage.
Naruto: *Mugs Madara*
*A piece of tree hits Madara*
Madara: So you're finally here..

Page 10
*Alliance w/ surpised faces*
1st Hokage: It's been a long time Madara.
2nd Hokage: This time I'll do the honor of destroying you!
3rd Hokage: So the Madara is back and 10 tails is really alive..This can't get any worse.
Sasuke: Naruto!
Naruto: [Sasuke...]

Page 11:
Kirin: This isn't possible. It couldn't be..
Suigetsu: Well I'm dead.
Oro: Hehe I guess Madara was able to summon the 10 tails.
Madara: [That kid, he's an Uchiha. Seems to me that there isn't many left]

Page 12:
*Foot appears*
*Stomps*
Anonymous voice: Hahah so the war resulted to this..
Madara: I thought I finished you off already..

Page 13
*Kamui portal starts opening*
*Everyone turns*
*Foot steps out*
*Madara & Alliance in shock*
The New Power!
The new power

Minato: Hey Naruto How you doing?

Naruto: A little bit hurt but fine

[Minato Charges]
Minato: Madara ARGH !! {Angry face}

Minato: You dare to hurt my son ! [Uses his kunai and came behind Madara –RASENGAN-!]

Madara: [-Susano’o guard-] Humph Fourth Hokage huh? Don’t make me laugh. What comes next the Third Hokage?

Minato: If I were you I would bother our fight first.

Madara: HEHEH I murdered those stubborn Kages all at a time and you think you can defeat me? Even the lady Fifth..

Minato: Fifth? Who?

Madara: What was her name again?.. Tsunade and some other stupid Kages. Amuse me Fourth ! HEHE

Minato: [-Rasengan-]

[ Madara uses his Gunbai to stop the Rasengan]

Minato: He can read my movements with those eyes.

Sakura: Naruto that’s your father?

Naruto: Yup.

Sakura: wow ( They look the same and he’s strong to)

Naruto: Don’t worry Sakura he will be fine it’s my dad after all.

Minato: EVERYONE LISTEN! For now I will take care of Madara, Handle the Tailed Beast!

Shinobi Alliance: ?!? That’s Impossible.

Naruto: DON’T BE SCARED I HAVE BEEN PROTECTION YOU ALL AGAINST THE JUUBI.

Shinobi Alliance: … Let’s go!!

Bee: [-BIJUU DAMA-] YEAH..

[At the other Dimension]

Kakashi: I’m still protecting Rin in my heart.

Obito: …

Kakashi: How could you let go Obito? You loved Rin more than I did.

Obito: {Losing mind} STOP THIS ..

Kakashi: Our team went different path’s, two died but still bound by friendship.

Obito: [-Banshō Ten'in-] This eye has waited too long.


[Obito pulls Kakashi closer what is he up to. He really intends to kill Kakashi.]



Hashirama: Go .. I have something to do.

Tobirama: Don’t be reckless Minato is about to summon us soon.

Sasuke: Humph let’s go.

Suigetsu: Those Hokages are always doing this on their own.

Hiruzen: Watch it .

Suigetsu: …

[They go off without Hashirama]

Hashirama: [Focuses his jutsu and freed himself from Orochimaru]

Orochimaru: (He did it..)

Hiruzen: What is wrong Orochimaru?

Orochimaru: Hashirama freed himself

Tobirama: Stupid Orochimaru did you really think you can control my brothers power?

Orochimaru: Don't worry I knew it just wanted to test something out hehe

Tobirama: (Shit he is way too smart) Hiruzen You rised him the wrong way he could have been a fine Shinobi

Hiruzen: I know ..

Hashirama: This should be good enough to face the “new” Madara.

[Hashirama went off to. Does he also has a new power before his death? The fight between past Friends and foes will begin.]
HOKAGES GATHERS!!!
(Minato directly teleports where the kunai is)
MINATO : (holding the kunai) Was I late?
NARUTO : No...You were right on time, Dad!!
SAKURA : Dad? That's (Minato's coat falls down and the Sakura reads the written part) Yondaime Hokage?
(Minato removes the kunai from the ground and stands up. Turns back at Naruto and winks)
SHINOBIS : ?!!
SHINOBI 1 : That's....That's Konoha's Yellow Flash!
SHINOBI 2 : He's long dead.
CHOZA : Minato? That's Edo Tensei Jutsu.
SAKURA : He's so handsome...Hmm.(suddenly remembers and hits Naruto on his head) (clenching her one fist with which she hit him and with a scary face) Naruto!!
NARUTO : Ouch...(holding his head) What's that for? (turns his head to look at Sakura) Woahhhh(scared)Saakura?
MINATO : ?!!
SAKURA : Yondaime Hokage is your father and you never told us. Bastard!!
(Minato smiles by looking at Sakura and Naruto and remembers Kushina's behavior)
NARUTO : Heheeh. Sorry Sakura. Hmm.
MADARA : (looking at Minato's back) Yondaime Hokage? Quite an impressive ability. [ For a moment I saw him on the TBB but then....what happened? ] Where's the Bijuudama?
SFX : BOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!
(A bright light falls on the whole battlefield from high above)
MADARA : ?!! (looks above)
SHINOBIS : (looking up) ?!!
(A heavy wind pushes everyone on the ground because of the impact)
MINATO : (looking above at the blast) [ More than expected ] (remembers)

[
(teleports on the top of the highest wall, located at third position from behind, made by the ASFs)
(His body is regenerating)
MINATO : That's huge than thought.
(The TBB is approaching crushing the walls)
MINATO : They came in handy.
(Puts his hand in the ninja pack at his backside)
SFX : METAL CONTACT SOUND
(removes two of his special kunais having those teleportation markings on it)
(holds one in his mouth)
SFX : CRUSH!!!
SFX : THROW!!!
(Before the TBB reaches the wall on which he is standing, Minato throws the other one)
MINATO : [ Now, to send this one ] (makes hand signs)
(TBB crushes the wall and approaches for the remaining two walls)
(Before the wall gets completely out of the TBB's way, Minato slams his left hand on the TBB while holding the wrist of his left hand with right hand)
(The seal emerges from his hand and starts spreading over the TBB)
(The walls gets out of the TBB's way)
(Minato's left hand starts dismantling because of the TBB)
(Minato is still in contact with the TBB on the support of his left hand while the TBB is about to crush the Shinobi forces)
(Hachibi gets into the way and tries to lower the speed of the TBB with its tail along with changing its direction towards sky)
MINATO : ?!! (looks at Hachibi in the way of TBB blocking it and then looks the spreaded area of the seal) [ This would be enough. ]
SFX : WOOSH!
(A Yellow Flash)
(Minato and the TBB is vanished)
(He is teleported back along with TBB with a yellow flash high in the air where he threw his first kunai)
(The thrown kunai goes inside the TBB)
(Minato in the air holding the TBB with the seal and moving up in the sky, removes his hand from the surface of the TBB and is now floating in the sky leaving the TBB to move away from the ground)
(His left hand is regenerating while he removes the other kunai holding in his mouth with his right hand)
(Turns his body towards the ground and throws the kunai towards it)
(Meanwhile his left hand completely regenrates)
SFX : WOOSH!
(Yellow flash)
(On the ground near Naruto)
]

NARUTO : Where are the other Kages, Dad? And how did you get here? There were no markings here on the field.
MINATO : Yes true, Mabui send me here with her Teleportation Transfer Jutsu.
CLOUD SHINOBI : Lady Mabui?
BEE : That busty little chic-
(Hachibi hits him within their psyche)
BEE : Ouch.
DARUI : She's still alive? But the HQ was destroyed by the Juubi.

(Minato remembers)

[
SFX : RUNNING!! JUMPING!! TAP!!TAP!!TAP!!TAP!!
(The four Hokages and the Team Taka)
(They watches the birds flying in the opposite direction away from the battlefield)
(moving towards the battlefield through the forest with great speeds)
TOBIRAMA : We must get into the range to teleport to the battlefield.
MINATO : I need the markings to teleport to the field. But I can't sense them on the battleground.
(Suigetsu and Karin are falling back but still keeping up with the others)
HASHIRAMA : The Kyuubi kid and the Shinobis are still defending the Juubi and Madara.
TOBIRAMA : ?!! I sensed Tsunade's chakra along with others. But she's not on the battlefield.
HASHIRAMA : Take us there.
TOBIRAMA : Ok.
(Everyone is teleported to the Five Kages place)
HOKAGES : ?!!
TEAM TAKA : ?!!
(Tsunade is cut in half lying on the ground now.)
(Katsuyu is healing her)
(Mabui is shown at the place along with some medic ninjas healing the Kages)
MABUI : ?!!
MEDIC NINJAS : ?!!
KATSUYU : ?!!
HIRUZEN : You're Raikage's assistant, Mabui.
MABUI : Yes. But Lord Sandaime? Yondaime? Niidaime? Shodaime?.....Uchiha Sasuke? and Orochimaru?
HIRUZEN : That'll be explained later.
KATSUYU : Shodaime Hokage, Madara Uchiha has been revived and he did this to the Kages.
TOBIRAMA : That bastard is within range from this place.
HASHIRAMA : Tobirama, wait. Katsuyu, what are the conditions of the Kages now?
KATSUYU : Lord Hokage, Lady Tsunade summoned me here to heal the other Kages. She can be merged... but the time is running out of my hands and I am unable to heal the body organs of her stomach smashed by the tree.
(Hashirama remembers Tsunade's childish face)
(Tobirama feels sorry for her)
(Hiruzen remembers few happy moments with his team of Jiriaya, Tsunade and Orochimaru)
MABUI : When we got the news at the HQ about Madara's arrival at the Jinchuurikis location, Shikaku send me here with the medics. He ordered Katsuyu to heal Tsunade and the medics to heal the Kages. But a huge black sphere destroyed the HQ killing all of them present there.
KATSUYU : I'm sorry, Shodaime, Niidaime, Sandaime and Yondaime Hokage. Lady Tsunade's life is still in danger.
HOKAGES : ......
SASUKE : .....
OROCHIMARU : .....
SASUKE : Karin, will you able to heal her?
KARIN : Sorry Sasuke, it is same situation when your chest was wounded badly while fighting Hachibi.
JUUGO : I'll heal her. If Sasuke wants to save the Hokage then I'll transfer my organs.
SASUKE : ?!!
OROCHIMARU : ?!!
KARIN : ?!! Yes you saved Sasuke back then.
SUIGETSU : Oh boy.
(Juugo walks towards Tsunade and transfers his organs into her and his body shrinks)
HOKAGES : (looking at Juugo) ?!!
(Katsuyu continues her healing process)
SFX : ROAR!!!
SUIGETSU : (covering his ears) What's that noise?
MINATO : That chakra? The Juubi is creating the TBB to release it on the Shinobis.
TOBIRAMA : I must go there to stop it.
HASHIRAMA : Wait. Even if you directed it away from the Shinobis on the battlefield, you won't be able to stop it from destroying the other region where it will explode.
MINATO : Then I'll handle it. I can teleport it into the sky. Nothing will be harmed.
HIRUZEN : That's right. He even send the Kyuubi's TBB away from the village.
MINATO : I need the markings to teleport there.
TOBIRAMA : I'll take you there.
MINATO : You must stay here to bring others on the battlefield once I send the TBB into the sky. That would be my signal.
MABUI : I can send you, Yondaime Hokage. I did it to the Raikage and Lady Hokage. I know the location of the battlefield accurately. Since you're an Edo Tensei you can regenerate back.
MABUI : Are you ready, Yondaime Hokage?
MINATO : Yes!!
MABUI : Teleport Transfer Technique!!
SFX : WOOSH!!
]

MINATO : (who was still facing Naruto, while turning towards the Juubi and Madara) Others will be here in a (approaches) moment.
SFX : LAND!!
NARUTO : .....
ASF : ?!!
MADARA : (rape face again) Its payback time.
JUUBI : .....

[
(The huge blast of the TBB high in the sky is visible to everyone far away)
TOBIRAMA : That's the signal.
SASUKE : Juugo, Karin and Suigetsu stay here.
HASHIRAMA : Lets go. (take a look at Tsunade before leaving)
]

(In attenadance)
(The outfits floating in the wind)
(The black hair floating with the wind)
(The black ribbon floating with the wind)
SFX : SLAM!!
(The staff is slammed on the ground)
(The licking tongue tastes the blood in the air in excitement)

(The Hokages, Sasuke and Orochimaru arrives in front of Minato as soon as he turns)
(They stand in order from left to right : Orochimaru, Sasuke, Hashirama, Tobirama, Hiruzen with his staff)
(Hashirama is at the center while Minato is standing just few feets away)

(Panel showing Sasuke and Naruto and Hashirama and Madara)
(The start of a new battle.... and the old rivals!!)
Tag Teams
Minato - Am I late..??

Naruto - You are right on time....Dad..!!

(The entire Shinobi Alliance is shocked)

Sakura - Dad..??(Looks confused) Isn't that the Fourth Hokage..?? So Naruto....

Rock Lee - (Exclaims loudly) Is the son of Fourth Hokage..!! [No wonder Naruto is so strong himself]

Shikamaru - He is an Edo too.... But he protected us.... So he can't be one of Kabuto's Edoes.... But then who revived him..??

Minato - Orochimaru sama revived me....(Everyone flinches on hearing this)

Shikamaru - What..?? (Looks confused) But Orochimaru is long dead too....

Minato - I don't know about how Orochimaru sama came back to life.... But he brought me,Lord Hashirama,Lord Tobirama and Lord Hiruzen back from The Reaper's Belly and used Edo Tensei....

(Again everyone is surprised but then some Alliance members start looking relieved)

Those four are with the injured Kages and - (Madara cuts in)

Madara - Fourth Hokage.... That was quite impressive.... (Smirks)

Minato - (Looks seriously at Madara)
[Since we both are Edoes.... We have unlimited amount of Chakra and our bodies will keep on regenerating.... I can seal him.... It's very difficult but yes.... Tsh but The Alliance and Jubbi.... The Jubbi.... Yeah....]

Madara - I know exactly what you are thinking right now Fourth Hokage.... (Minato frowns) You will try to Teleport the Jubbi along with you away from The Alliance.... Am I right..?? (Madara smirks)

(There is a moment of Silence and then Madara suddenly spits huge fireballs in every direction at The Alliance.... Minato jumps in and uses FTG to protect the Shinobis from the Fireballs.... But some Shinobi are reduced to ashes before he can reach them....)

That will keep you busy.... Fourth Hokage....

(Madara sends the biggest and fastest Fireball towards Naruto and Sakura)

SFX - Blast

(Madara's fireball blasts on something huge)

(The screen is cut into two.... The first part shows Sasuke with EMS activated in his Susanoo.... Behind him are Jugo,Karin and Suigetsu covering Naruto and Sakura.... The second part shows all major Konoha characters like K11 and Gai and Bee and his Cloud Shinobi Karui,Omoi,Darui surprised....)

(Madara stops attacking with fireballs and Minato goes towards the Jubbi)

SFX - Clang

(Minato is seen fighting with Madara's clone while the Real Madara looks at Sasuke and Taka without the slightest hint of shock or surprise.... Rather he looks irritated)

Sasuke - (Deactivates his Susanoo and looks back) Can't take on a single opponent without me as usual.... Naruto you loser....(Smiles)

Naruto - Showing off as usual huh....(Smiles) Sasuke.... (Sakura looks really happy)

Sasuke - Karin.... Heal Naruto fast.... Jugo and Suigetsu guard them and I'll fight Madara....

(Sasuke goes to fight Madara)

Karin - (To Naruto) Hurry.... Bite my hand.... (Naruto is confused)

Naruto - Are you sure..?? (Still wondering whether he heard correctly what Karin had said)

Karin - Yes.... Bite my hand.... (Naruto bites her hand)

SFX - WHAAAA BAAAAM GHAAAA

Karin - YOU IDIOT....!!!! Be gentle.... It's my hand.... Not a piece of meat....

Naruto - This girl is crazy....

Karin - (To Jugo) His Chakra is still not restored....

Jugo - (Keeps his hand on Naruto's Chest) Naruto.... Please stay still (Jugo says that cause Naruto is still comically traumised by Karin's punch)....

(It takes Jugo a couple of minutes to restore Naruto's energy completely)

Kurama - Naruto.... I'm done collecting and Moulding Chakra.... Seems like your energy is restored as well....

Naruto - (To Karin, Jugo and Sakura) Thanks guys.... Okay Kurama.... Lets do it.... (Enters Bijju Mode) Shadow Clone Jutsu.... (But creates only 1 clone.... Both Naruto and the clone rush to fight)

Meanwhile

Madara - An Uchiha brat with EMS.... You must be really strong....

Sasuke - You are lucky that you are dead....(Sasuke frowns)

Madara - (Madara raises an eyebrow) Lucky..?? Is that so..?? If you think dying is lucky then I'll gladly send you to the other world....(Sasuke looks like he is really mad at Madara)

Sasuke - (Shouts) CAUSE IF YOU WERE ALIVE I WOULD HAVE GIVEN YOU THE WORST POSSIBLE DEATH.... I WILL OBILITRATE YOU....

(Sasuke runs towards Madara with his sword.... Madara takes his Gunbai and charges towards Sasuke as well....)

SFX - Clang

(Both Sasuke and Madara are in mid air.... Their sword and Gunbai clanging at each other)

(Both Sasuke and Madara use Fireball Jutsu at the same time and both are thrown in opposite direction.... Madara lands effortlessly on his feet while Sasuke tries to slow down his speed by thrusting his sword into the ground as he is dragged backwards due to the impact....)

Madara - My bad.... I thought an Uchiha brat with EMS would be strong.... But you are weak as hell.... Time to finish this little game.... (Madara activates his Perfect Susanoo)

(BM Naruto reaches Minato and they both defeat Madara's clone and rush towards The Jubbi which goes on a rampage as soon as it sees Naruto in BM....)

(Back here Sasuke is activating his Susanoo as well.... BM Naruto comes running towards Sasuke and jumps when he reaches Sasuke.... He performs a cart wheel in mid air and....)

SFX - Clap

(Naruto gives a clap to Sasuke and Sasuke's just activated purple Susanoo gets a Bijuu Cloak....)

Face Offs
BM Naruto and Minato vs. Jubbi
BM Naruto and Sasuke vs. Madara

Naruto - Now you are done for.... Madara Uchiha....
Fulfilling a Fathers Role!
Minato: Was I late?

Naruto: No, You were right on time Dad!

Minato: I see..

Sakura: Is this...Naruto's father!?...the Yondaime Hokage!?

*Minato stares at the Juubi*

Minato: I'm impressed you sensed even when I had my Meimei Chakra Gikou (Invisible Chakra Technique) on.

Naruto: Your chakra was clearly visible..

Minato: Eh?

Naruto: Haha!

Minato: In other words, Back then when I was being revived I sensed your Kyuubi Chakra...It seem's you managed to control it..What happened?

Naruto: It's a long story...Long story short..Kurama and I are friends now!

Minato: !?

Minato: *I see...So he managed to get this far with Kurama...*

Minato: I knew he would be the one..

Minato: Naruto...

Naruto: ?

Minato: It's time...

Minato: Time for me too fulfill my role...a Father's role!

*Minato's chakra unleashes*

Naruto: I see...Then lets do it!!!

*Naruto's chakra unleashes*

*Meanwhile*

Kakashi: Obito..

Obito: Hmmm??

Kakashi: Deep within that empty hole...Do you still have your remaining Will of fire inside of you?

Obito: !?

*Obito clenches his fist*

Obito: Why are you saying such rubbish things?

Kakashi: I may not be the one to be saying this...but..

Kakashi: I consider you my friend..

Obito: !?

Minato's will has ignited! The true role of a father has been said! a Father and Son alliance has begun! What is Obito's answer?
Entrance
Minato: "Am I late?"

*Naruto smirks, not surprised in the slightest at Minato's Arrival*

Naruto: "Nope...Right on time, Dad!!"

Chapter Entitled: "Entrance"

Actions: *
Talking: "

*Minato pulls out the FTG Kunai from out the ground. He turns his head to give naruto a happy smirk.
*Sakura notices the writing on the tall, handsome blonde man's clock. She reads, "The Fourth Hokage"*

Minato: "Your old man still knows a thing or two about arriving at the knick of time"
Naruto: (*smirks*) "It wouldn't be much of a hero's entrance if you didn't"

*The battlefield is at a standstill*

Sakura: "F...Fourth....but...but how?"

*Madara is seen at the top of the Juubi. His smile is sharpened to the core, and his eyes draw bloodlust to the rest of his face and body*

Madara: "I sense him!! But where!!!"
Hashirama: "Long time no see!"

*Madara tenses up. He diverts his rinnegan eyes towards the full blown, ominous red moon in excitement. Hashirama is seen in his splendor with markings starting to surround his eyelids. Hashirama begins to form hand signs*

Hashirama: "Wood style: Sage Art!! Titan's Blade Limbs Jutsu"

*Tree limbs begin to spiral out of Hashirama's right hand, forming into a spiraling sharp swirl. The tip of it glows with a consuming fire, but doesn't seem like it burns the tip of the sharp strong wood at all. It lunges towards madara*

Madara: "FINALLY!! THE REAL GAMES BEGIN!!"

*There is an explosion on contact, and dust rises to and fro atop the juubi, however, the juubi itself seems to look pestered by the events occurring on top of it*

*Scene switches to The faces of the shinobi alliance*

Cloud Shinobi #1: "What the hell is going on.."
Leaf Shinobi: "I thought the Yellow Flash died long ago...What the-"
Cloud Shinobi #2: "Who's fighting Madara?!"

*Minato scratches his head with a nervous stance*

Minato: "He's the First Hokage of the Hidden Leaf"
Sakura: "!?!"
Shikamaru: "?!?!"
Hinata: "!?!

*Naruto stands up, forgetting about Sakura's healing procedure*

Naruto: "So that's who he is, I was wondering who that was, considering that I sensed someone stronger than you dad"

*Sakura hits Naruto across the head, and pushes him down to the floor again for treatment*

Sakura: "You idiot! Stop moving around! This is a delicate procedure Naruto!"
Naruto: (*In terrified thought*) "You would think the war would have changed her temper, geez"
Minato: (*chuckles at the staring shinobi*)"It's a long story really...." (*looks over to Naruto*)

*Minato slowly moves towards Sakura and his tattered up and beaten down son*

Minato:(*bending over to gain eye level with Naruto*) "but first....I have a gift for you Naruto"

*Scene changes to Madara and Hashirama atop the juubi. They stand with clear fighting resolve, but with excitement drawn strongly on there faces*

Madara: "Seems like we progressed pretty far in the shinobi universe to be both standing here now"
Hashirama: "Agreed. Although I would have hoped it were under more honorable circumstances."
Madara: "....."
Hashirama: "You haven't changed one bit, Madara"
Madara: "Same goes to you, Hashirama"

*scene changes to the skies where a large summoned hawk slowly carries on near the red ominous moon. The hawk carries Sasuke who stares with the full blown sharingan at the battle scene below him. He notices Naruto from the sheer height, along with Sakura. The absence of Kakashi seemed to bug him. Along with him stands and sits Karin, Suigetsu, Juugo, Orochimaru, Tobirama, and Hiruzen*

Hiruzen: (*looking down from the birds right flap*) "Look at all the carnage...how horrible..."
Orochimaru: (*shrugs*) "It's common for these results...after all it is the juubi"
Hiruzen: "...."
Tobirama: "Not to mention Madara Uchiha in the mix...DARN THAT HASHIRAMA!! If it wasn't for his idiotic orders to stay out of the battle I would be laying waste on that damn Uchiha as we speak!"

*The juubi gives out a LOUD roar*

Suigetsu: "!!?"
Karin: "!?!"
Juugo: "!!?"

*Sasuke stands wide-eyed as he looks down at the battlefield below him*

Sasuke: "I'm heading down there"
Karin: "Sasuke! You heard the First Hokages orders, we can't just-"
Sasuke: "Team Hawk takes orders from no man"
Karin: (*blushing*) "He's so cool..."

*Sasuke puts one foot onto the Hawk's large yellow beak, prepared to plunge down towards the battlefield*

Sasuke: "Anyone who doesn't want to stay can follow me."
Orochimaru: (*smiling*) "humph"
Tobirama: "Now you're talking kid"

*Sasuke stares directly at Naruto who seems to be talking to his father*

Sasuke: "I have certain things to settle anyways"

BOLD WORDS AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER: "The plunge towards carnage! What is Sasuke's intentions with his old teammate!!"
Arrived At Las
Minato appears before Naruto!

Sakura: (Thinking) D-Dad?...

Shikamaru: That person...the Fourth Hokage?!

Madara: ...Yondaime Hokage...it seems someone capable has arrived...What did he do to the Bijuudama?

Juubi: GWAHHHH!!!! (Absorbs energy)

Madara: Hmph, it doesn't matter. Let's see if you can take this one.

Naruto: I sensed your chakra earlier on Dad! How did you come back?

Minato: Orochimaru revived me and the other Hokage.

Naruto: Orochimaru?!! I thought he was dead!!

Minato: No time to explain Naruto! It's gonna attack!

Everyone stares in fear as the Juubi absorbs more energy to form another Bijuudama!

Shinobi: It's coming again!!!!

Minato: I'm going to handle this for now.

Minato vanishes. The Juubi fires the Bijuudama.

Shikamaru: Everyone!! Stand back!!!

Minato appears on top of one of the rock walls and uses his kunai to absorb the Bijuudama. The bomb is then sent to a faraway location; the explosion is visible by a flash of light in the distant background behind the mountains.

Madara: So that's how he does it. Fourth Hokage...you surely live up to the name...
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Meanwhile, in Konoha. The three Hokage, Orochimaru, Sasuke, Karin, Juugo and Suigetsu stand in a circle holding hands.

Hashirama: (Opens his eyes) ?? What?!! The Fourth Hokage just left us here!!

Tobirama: It seems he hasn't perfected the technique huh?

Orochimaru: I guess it's a limitation of the Edo Tensei. He can't teleport all of us.

Hashirama: Geez this sure is troublesome.

Hiruzen: We'll have to go on foot then! There's no time to waste!

Sasuke: (Takes the lead) Let's go.
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On the battlefield.

Juubi: GWOOARRHHH!!!!!!!

Minato stands atop the rock wall and looks at the Juubi. Bee who is behind the rock walls begins talking to him.

Bee: Fourth Hokage, we meet again yo!! I heard Naruto calling you his father!

Minato: ?? You're the Eight Tails Jinchuuriki. (Recalls his encounter with A and Bee in the forest). Tell me what's going on.

Bee: That beast is the Juubi! The enemy has captured the seven other tailed beasts yo!!

Minato: ?! (Thinking) No wonder... it has immense chakra!!

Hachibi: Yondaime Hokage! We have to stop it now before it transforms into its final state!

Minato: (Zooms in on Madara)....I will fight the one controlling the Juubi. The rest of you shall take down the Juubi!

Minato vanishes.

Bee: Yo!! Let's do it!!

Bee and the Hachibi charge forward. The shinobi follow suit.

All of a sudden, a kunai flies past Madara. Minato appears in mid air beside Madara with a Rasengan!

Madara: ?! (Turns and looks at Minato)

Panel 1: Minato twists his body and directs the Rasengan towards Madara!
Panel 2: *Scene from 16 years ago* Minato appears above Obito and directs the Ransegan towards him.

Madara, this time I will stop you!!!
The Fourth Hokage
obito: so you'll kill me? is that how you intend to honor my memory?
kakashi: the obito i used to know is alive in my heart. my treasured memory of your old self will never fade. but for the sake of the village i have to stop you...for i inherited the will of my master. isnt that right...sensei?

darui: what was that? the bijuudama just vanished!
sakura: ...is that...the fourth?
kitsuchi: it was some kind of barrier.
naruto: how are you here?
minato turns.
minato: ill explain later. but this new body suits me. you sure grew up....naruto! you even mastered kyuubi.
he grins.
madara: .....who....
minato: so...that's madara uchiha is it?
naruto: yeah...
minato: im sorry i wasn't there for you. i hope you met your mother.
naruto: i already forgave you dad! and i know why you sealed the nine tails inside of me.
minato: i see.....is kakashi....gone? i can't feel his chakra at all.
naruto: oh. oh no. he got sucked up into another dimension. him and obito
minato: ! obi...to?
minato *thinking* ho...well ill need to deal with that as it comes.
madara: i'm not in the mood for games. i can tell your rather strong so tell me who you are.
minato: the fourth hokage!
the alliance all look shocked.
fodder: i don't believe it..the yellow flash here?
shikamaru: his eyes...edo tensei. so kabuto wasn't taken down?
minato: ill take madara. the rest of you have to stop the juubi.
madara: oh? then come on and try it.
he smirks evilly and activates susano.
madara: not like it makes any difference who you are, fourth. your trash, like them. die.
madara uses yasaka magatama but minato warps to another kunai to avoid it
madara: your pretty fast.... the same jutsu as the second.
juubi continues to transform. its flower form is sucked up. massive tails sprout, crashing and destroying the ground.
juubi: WOOOOOAAHHRRRRRRRRRR!
kurama: this is bad! if we don't stop its last transformation we're done for.
minato *thinking*: the nine tails is speaking through naruto? hes come farther than i ever thought possible.
madara goes perfect susano.
madara: to think i had to bring this out again...
the tengu susano's massive blade raises up, then aims at minato. however something stops the sword. smashing apart the ground, a massive wood hand catches it and forces susano back.
madara: so you finally showed yourself.
darui: the wooden hand stopped that huge monster!
??: hehe you havent changed, madara.
madara: ....
hashirama lands on the ground, next to minato.
hashirama: GYAHAHA! sorry im late!
hinata: sakura san, is that...
sakura: yeah. theres no mistaking the legendary mokuton of shodai hokage sama. its like the history books are opening up in front of our eyes.
naruto: amazing....
behind minato, warp in tobirama, sasuke, taka and orochimaru. the alliance shinobi all look on with awe and shock. madara does his most epic rape face yet. tobirama draws his sword.
tobirama: madara....GET DOWN HERE!

text: the strongest are here!
Edo Hokages arrival
Edo Minato arrives !

PAGE ONE

[In top right panel Edo Minato is shown standing at left side of ditch made in earth created by flying Juubi's bijuudama.]
[Minato's blonde hair are shown blown away behind his head as he keep calm face expression]
[His both arms extended forward with both hands connected together formed in triangle shape(his index fingers and thumbs of both hands connected together and between them his special kunai placed).]
[In middle top panel is shown Huge seal in circular shape positioned vertically in air few inches above ground]
[Dust is floating around ground close to seal]
[In top left panel Edo Tobirama is shown standing at right side of ditch made in earth created by flying Jubi's bijuudama.]
[Tobirama's silver hair are shown blown away behind his head as he keep calm face expression]
[His both arms are extended forward with both hands connected together formed in triangle shape(same as Minato's)]
[Bottom right panel Huge seal in circular shape positioned vertically in air fade away]
Alliance Shinobi(shocked): Bijuudama vanished ?!
Alliance Shinobi 2(concerned): But where ?

PAGE TWO

[Huge seal in circular shape positioned diagonally forms in air high in sky]
SFX: SHSHSH
[Juubi's bijuudama is shown slowly comming out from circular seal and fly high into sky]
[Everyone rise their heads and look up, watching as bijuudama come out from glowing in circular shape seal ]

Naruto: *That Bijuudama has huge radius ?!* Everyone! fall on ground fast !
SFX: WSSS
[Suddenly bright light fill entire sky over battlefield blinding everyone as all shinobi alliances fall on ground]
?????????: Wood release: Wood dome pretection !
???????: Earth release: Earth barrier !
Everyone: ?!
PAGE THREE

SFX: BOOOM
[Huge explosion in shape of gigantic sphere reaching almost ground occur.]
[Powerfull heavy blows of winds push everything and everyone in all directions.]
[Ground being to shake beneath shinobi bodies from power of impact.]
SFX: FSHSHSH
[Explosion of Bijuudama cause dust to rise from ground floating around completly covering battlefield.]
SFX: TSHTSH
[Broken pieces of wood and rocks are shown flying in different directions]
[Some pieces of wood and rocks crash into dome made of wood and earth]
PAGE FOUR

[Some Shinobi are slowly opening their eyes as they rise their heads up while standing up. ]
Alliance Shinobi(slowly stand up then raise his head to look up): Ugh... ?!
Alliance Shinobi 2(slowly stand up then raise his head to look up): That it ?!
[Big panel from bird eye view at huge and wide dome made of wood covering everyone with holes scattered around where smoke is comming from.]
[Under dome made of wood, huge and wide dome made of earth is visible with holes scattered around it and smoke comming from it.]
[Under earth dome Monster made of chakra is shown protecting many shinobi along with giant snakes falling dead on ground around.]
PAGE FIVE

[Close to Juubi location Madara is shown in Sussano Complete form]
Madara(look around): This was quite powerfull able to wipe out one country at one blow from explosion radius at leats I can say, heh ?!(spot Huge dome made of wood) That is
[Madara's face is not shown, only his back as his body is shaking]
Madara(rape face): Hashirama ?!
?????????: Wood release: release !
???????: Earth release: release !
[Remains of dome made of wood and earth are shown slowly moving down and sink into ground]
[Big snakes dissapear one by one and Monster made of chakra dissapear as well]
[Smoke completly cover small part of battlefield from where voices were heard]
PAGE SIX

[Madara's back are shown turned to us]
Madara: *Multi-layered dome and then even used snakes as shield to protect Shinobi. However the most interesting is that I saw monster made of chakra for brief moment, Sussano ?!* very clever tactic and powerfull abilities
[Madara bottom part of face is shown as smirk appear on his lips.]
[Edo Minato is shown at left side of ditch made in ground by Juubi's bijuudama then disappear in smoke. ]
[Edo Tobirama is shown at right side of ditch with his head turned to where Edo Minato were as smirk appear on his face]
Edo Tobirama: *He was fast enough to create Shadow clone for us to use Space time barrier technique, while he appeared to help his son.* Clever Man...
PAGE SEVEN

[Edo Minato is shown going to his special kunai being in ground, as his coat is falling down]
Sakura(read characters written on Minato's coat): *F O U R T H, FOURTH ?!* Fourth Hokage ?! (recall Naruto calling this man his dad)
[Flashback]
Minato: Was I late
Naruto: No... you were right on time, Dad !
[/Flashback]
Sakura(snap out from her thoughts): Naruto, did you say dad to Fourth Hokage ?!
Naruto: Yeah..., ?! oh sorry I forgot to say you that, my bad...(moves his hair with his hand nervously)
[Edo Minato is back are shown as he slowly stand up from ground with his kunai in his right hand.]
[Sakura pat Naruto in back of head]
Naruto: Oww ! for what (gentle rub his head)
Sakura(mad): Naruto, how could you ?! I didn't know you was Fourth Hokage's son
Naruto: sorry but I don't have time to tell you, besides I don't have to announce to everyone that I am son of great Hokage, have I
PAGE EIGHT

[Edo Minato turn around to face Naruto and Sakura]
Edo Minato(smirks): I was worried Naruto...
Naruto: or Son of saviour of The Word(smiles)
Edo Minato: but looks like you were doing well(smiles)
[Obito and Kakashi are shown in other dimenssion.]
Kakashi: That enough Obito, finish this genjutsu and let's settle this once and for all.
Obito(schocked): ?!
Kakashi(serious): You don't want to listen to me and I won't give up and join you, that is clear.
Obito(angry then become enraged): You fool, In this world nothing wait you other then pain...
Kakashi(angry and concerned): Even then I will be able to share my feelings with people I care about. Not like you who will talk to your illusions. I say it once time more and last, stop deny reallity Obito !
Obito: That is your last word Kakashi, I see... (lower his head)
PAGE NINE

Obito(rise his head up suddenly as he sent death glare to Kakashi): I wanted to give you chance but now... (shouts)There is nothing you can do Kakashi, to stop me !
Kakashi(stares at Obito calmly with his sharingan): *I know he caught me into Genjutsu and looks like I can't release myself from it via using my sharingan* This is only way then !
Obito: ?!
[Kakashi pull kunai from his pocket and hit himself in left hand with kunai]
SFX: TSHSH
[Obito is shown complelty schocked and caught off guard]
[Blood is shown dropping down on ground from Kakashi's left hand]
SFX: DRIP DRIP
[Suddenly image of Obito begin to dissolve to be replaced by Obito without hole in his heart]
[Kakashi open his eyes as he notices Obito hand reaching out for his sharingan]
Kakashi: What the ?!
(Kakashi lean at left side as he send powerfull kick to Obito's guts sending him backwards)
Kakashi(restoring his balance): *As I thought, he used genjutsu on me to make me join him. He used my raikiri for me to think that this hole was real and made by me...* Obito let's finish this once and for all
Obito: You will die, Kakashi !
PAGE TEN

[Kakashi and Obito are shown taking battle stance as they stare at each other with serious glare]
[Kakashi and Obito take out and swallows shinobi pills as they continue their glare]
SFX: GULP
Kakashi(shouts angry): Your last hours are counted, Obito !
Obito(shouts angry): I will erase your existence, Kakashi !
(Kakashi and Obito are shown waving through few handseals)
(Obito takes deep breath and release fire stream at Kakashi while holding tiger seal)
Obito: Fire release: Fire stream
Kakashi: ?!
(Fire stream completly engulf place where Kakashi was, then slowly fade away)
SFX: SHSHSHS
[Kakashi is nowhere seen as Obito notices Kakashi abssence and look around nervously]
Obito: come out trash, stop hiding !
SFX: TRSHTRSH
(Suddenly Kakashi right hand come out from ground and catch Obito right leg.)
Kakashi: Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique ?!
(Suddenly Roots come out from Obito leg and come at Kakashi' right hand, with which Kakashi try to pull Obito into ground)
Kakashi: ?!
PAGE ELEVEN

(Kakashi free Obito's right leg from his tight grip and pull it back as he barerly avodis roots piercing his hand.)
(roots stop moving as they slowly retreacts back into Obito's leg)
Obito: You thought that I would fall at such stupid trick, stop understimate me Kakashi !
(Kakashi suddenly jumps out behind Obito's back and try to kick him in back)
(Obito blocks Kakashi kick stepping at his side and catching Kakashi's leg with his right hand)
Kakashi: Bastard !
Obito: I will finish you trash !
(Obito and Kakashi are shown in close hand to hand combat exchanging their punches and kicks)
(Obito sprouts root which come out from his right sleeve and aim at Kakashi as he lean forward )
Obito: Wood release: Piercing root
SFX: WSSHH
(Kakashi activates Raikiri in his right hand as he aim at Obito's heart while leaning forward)
Kakashi: Raikiri !
SFX: CHICHICHIRI
PAGE TWELEVE

[Dust cloud fall down and smoke screen dissappear completly revealing seven figures ]
Alliance Shinobi: That is...(spot his red armour) First Hokage-sama
Alliance Shinobi 2: This another one is...(look closer and spot old man in Hokage robes) Third Hokage-sama
Alliance Shinobi 3: But (spot Sasuke) there is enemy there (points at Sasuke)
Alliance Shinobi 4: There is another one too ! (spot Orochimaru ) and three peoples we don't have information on.
[Some Shinobi take out kunai and shurikens with some others pulling their hands together to prepare some handeals]
Alliance Shinobi: ?!
SFX: TSH
PAGE THIRTEEN

(Minato along with Naruto and Sakura land on right side of Orchimaru, Sasuke and Taka, while Tobirama land close to Hashirama too)
Naruto: Stop !, they are not enemies so please lower your weapons down
Alliance Shinobi: Naruto-sama, but ?!
Naruto: Naruto-sama ?!
Sasuke(smirks towards Naruto): You got quite nice reputation, dead last
Naruto: Sasuke bastard !
Orochimaru: *Naruto changed and grown up a lot from what I remember him..., interesting boy * (smirks)
[Minato is shown from Naruto back with proud face as tear fall down from his eye.]
Hiruzen: Hello Naruto, long time no see ,how are you ?!
Naruto: I am doing well, and you look good too
Hiruzen(cough): ehm...
[Everyone sweatdrop]
PAGE FOURTEEN

Hashirama: So you are nine tails jinchurki, Fourth Hokage's son right ?!
Naruto(smirks): yeah
Sasuke: ?! *Naruto is Fourth Hokage's son..., I see*
Tobirama: You fought against Madara... you are tough one...(smirks)
[Orochimaru comes towards Shinobi Alliance as he keep smirking]
Orochimaru: I came there to help you, so don't worry. I ressurected all four hokages but I give them free will to aid Shinobi Alliance against them ?!
[Suddenly Sussano sword is comming at Naruto and rest company]
SFX: two Metal clash sound
[Madara is shown in Sussano with suprised and curious face]
Madara: ?! *How can he ?!*
[Madara's Sussano sword is being shown blocked by another Sussano's sword]
Sasuke(enraged as he looks at him): Who are you ?!
Madara: ?!
Naruto: *so Sasuke doesn't know* he is reall Uchiha Madara, Sasuke !
Sasuke: Real Uchiha Madara ! but then *so that masked man called Tobi is imposter, I see...*
PAGE FIVETEEN

Madara(bored): Ahh... you are talking about Obito..., Yes I am not him and he went somehere with his friend
Minato: Obito ?!, * How that can be * He died in battle of Kanabi bridge where he was crushed by boulders
Madara(smirks malliciously): Unfortunetly he fell to my hideout and I opened his eyes
Minato: so that masked man was (pauses) Obito ?!
Naruto: Yes and he took Kakashi to other dimenssion to fight him
Minato: That bad... *that masked man was very strong shinobi* I am not sure if Kakashi handle him *nervous and serious*
Naruto: I believe in him besides he is my sensei(smiles)
Madara(interested): who are you and how can you use Sussano ?!
Sasuke: I am last living Uchiha and only one who stops you !
Madara: ?!
Madara(moves his eyes from Sasuke to Hashirama): Hashirama, fight me ! (rape face)
Hashirama: Ehh... You didn't change at all Madara. How are you doing my friend ?!
Tobirama(face palm): Oh boy, it begins again
Madara: I am good, very good. As you see I got your cells, and awake Rinenngan but that not all. I and my ally recreated Ten tails, and I fought against five kage but I left them in not-ok state (smirks)
Hashirama: ?!
Tobirama(turns to Hashirama): Brother, Didn't Orochimaru say that Tsunade is current Hokage ?!
Hashirama: ?!
Madara: Ahh... That was her name. I remeber her but she is laying down in almost death state cut in two parts by my wood release
Tobirama: Bastard ! ?! (feel powerfull aura then turns to Hashirama)
Hashirama(with death glare): I will never forgive you, Madara !, What did you do to her ?!
Madara(hides his smirks): well, I was doing a lot with her, it depends what you mean, friend (smiles)
PAGE SIXTEEN

Hashirama: You freaking bastard, you will pay me for that.
Tobirama, Minato and Naruto: ?!
Tobirama: Actually I feel very weak source of chakra close to us..., there is even four more but even more weak...
Hashirama: ?!Take me there asap Tobirama !
Tobirama: But, Madara ?!
Sasuke: I will take care of Madara along with Orochimaru and rest Hokages until your return, First Hokage-sama and Second Hokage-sama
Madara: Big words for small boy, let's play then a little
Naruto: Look out Sasuke, he is very strong...
Sasuke: ...
PAGE SEVENTEEN

[Hashirama put his hand at Tobirama's shoulder ]
[Tobirama and Hashirama dissapear]
Minato: speaking about strength..., I have gift for you Naruto (smiles)
(Minato comes to Naruto and put his hand at Naruto's stomach)
[Naruto's inner world]
(Minato appear where Kyuubi gate where, but nowhere can't spot gate.)
Minato: What the...
Naruto: Here dad !
(Minato look around and spot Naruto and behind him Kyuubi)
(Minato slowly walk towards them)
(suddenly Kurama is speaking as he is shown gathering chakra)
Kurama(sad and gulity): Welcome back Fourth Hokage... I am sorry for your death... it is all my fault
Naruto(looks sad): Kurama...
Minato(smiles): Heh. Kurama, yes. you don't have to be guilty Kurama, you was under genjtusu so I am not goona to blame you. Besides I am happy that you and Naruto are partners now and supporting each other
Naruto/Kurama(look at themselves then back at fourth and smile): hehe
Minato: So you met your mother Kushina, Naruto
Naruto: yeah, but Kurama and I are friends just recently
Kurama: It is true but we expierienced a lot positive feelings, don't we Naruto ?
Minato: Hehe, You are interacting with each other very well
PAGE EIGHTEEN

Kurama: ?!
Naruto: What is it, Kurama ?!
Kurama: It looks like Juubi is gathering huge amount of nature energy. I can already feel as nature is dying in around us... It is trying to reach it perfect form so it won't attack or move for some time.
Minato( become serious): Then we don't have time for chit chat for now. I want to give you back someting Kurama
Kurama: ?!
[Minato come closer to Kurama, then weaves through handseals as he rises his shirt to shows seal slowly opening up]
SFX: TRHRHRH
[Seal completly open up as suddenly Kurama Yin chakra come and sink into Kurama]
[Kurama begin glowing bright light as Minato is shown being proud]
Minato: You grown up a lot Naruto (smiles)
[/Naruto's inner world]
[Juubi's is shown evolving as black sphere slowly envelopes it closing for inside.]
END
prediction 2
The Yondaime Hokage has entered the fray! What is the next move for the ninja alliance!?

Minato: Hope I wasn't too late.

Sakura: *reads the back of his shirt (4th hokage)* Ehh? Dad? 4th hokage? Naruto you're the son of-

Random leaf ninjas: It's the fourth hokage!? But how is he here?

Madara: It appears that man moved the bijuu bomb away. *Looks closer* Hmm? He seems to be under edo tensei. Is this Kabuto's doing?

Minato: *looks up and sees Madara Uchiha* Well Naruto, I told you Madara would return some day to threaten the village, but he seems to be an edo tensei figure, did he die shortly after the kyuubi's rampage?

Naruto: Madara was not the masked man! He is another Uchiha named Obito.

Minato: O...bito? *flashback to the Kyuubi attack 16 years ago*

-------------------Flashback------------------------------------------------------
Minato: Someone that broke through the barrier, and killed anbu assigned under direct control of the 3rd hokage. Are you Madara Uchiha? No....he's long dead.

Obito/Tobi: Maybe I am, maybe i'm not. This could be for war....or maybe peace.
-------------------Flashback end--------------------------------------------------
*jump to Kakashi and Obito*

Obito: You seem to have a knack for reciting lines from the "memories of your old friends"

Kakashi: How does it feel to make Rin's death meaningless!?

Obito: As I said before the girl of my dreams that died was an imposter! Mokuton!

Kakashi: *cuts through the Mokuton wood, kicks Obito backwards*

Obito: *falls to his legs, while Kakashi stands before him*

Kakashi: This is the end for you Obito, goodbye old friend *tear drop* *Prepares to kill Obito but he goes back to the real world* Damn

*In the real world*

Minato: *Minato teleports next to Madara on top of the Juubi*

Madara: *catches a glimpse of his jackets* (fourth hokage) Ahh, the yondaime ehh?

Minato: You must be Madara Uchiha, but I think this is a bad time to become acquainted wouldn't you say?

Obito: *as he returns through kamui* Lets hurry this along i'm getting impatient for infinite Tsuku-!? Minato sensei!?

*Sasuke, Juugo, Suigetsu, Orochimaru, 1-3 Hokage appear*

1st Hokage: Well sheesh the 4th hokage beat us to it huh!?

2nd Hokage: It's not my fault my space time jutsu can't keep up with the yondaime!

3rd Hokage: Finally we've arrived! It's time to put an end to Madara once and for all!

*The final panel is a collage of shocked people*

Naruto/Sakura: Sasuke!?

Madara: Hashirama and Tobirama! It's about time!

4th hokage: *turns around* Obito!?

A three way reunion on the battlefield! Naruto Chapter 631 end
No man's land
Naruto Chapter 631: No Man's Land

Naruto: I knew I felt your chakra! I held off the Juubi and Madara as long as I could, looks like you came just in time!

Sakura: Dad..? Naruto that is the Yondaime Hokage you are talking to!

Naruto: I know, Sakura (smiles)

Minato: Naruto, you've become strong just like I have always imagined.. I'm proud of you! (smiles)

Sakura: But..(looks down) Naruto, no offense but I thought that he died after the attack on Konoha..

Naruto: Dad.. I'm glad you're here and all.. but how did you come back?

Minato: Right.. I guess I should explain that huh? (scratches head) I was brought back by the Edo Tensei just like Madara.

Naruto: Edo tensei? But how?

Minato: Orochimaru pulled me and the other Hokage out of the Death Reaper seal.. Then brought us back with the Edo Tensei

Naruto: Orochimaru?? Why the hell would he do that for?

Minato: Well Naruto, it was because of your friend Sasuke

Naruto:?!

Madara: Finally.. Things are starting to get interesting !! (Evil smirk)

(The Juubi is shown starting to transform again)

(Scene switches to Obito and Kakashi)

Kakashi: Obito you are worse than skum, you might as well be dead now because you are nothing more than trash

Obito: No... Kakashi YOU ARE THE ONE WHO IS TRASH!!

(Obito aims a fireball technique at him as Kakashi uses a suiton technique to counter)

(Obito then rushes at Kakashi with a Kunai attacking him with a flurry of slashes)

(Kakashi is shown dodging them all and then he jumps back)

Kakashi: My friend Obito will always live on.. and I will show him his dream thru my eyes!

(Kakashi sends many Raikiri dogs at Obito)

Obito: Tsk.. ! (Obito dodges them but while do so he looks up as Kakashi is about to pierce him with a Chidori)

Obito: (Thinking) He is not hesitating anymore...

(Obito uses Kamui out of the dimension as a last resort)

(Kakashi is shown standing here panting)

(Obito is phasing back near Madara)

Madara: Obito.. that took longer than expected.

Obito: Shut up.. the Juubi is almost in it's complete state.. I came back to finish our plan (looks down)

(Kakashi warps back to see Minato)

Kakashi: Minato-Sensei!?

Minato: Kakashi! Sorry to see you under such circumstances..

Naruto: What happened Kakashi?

Kakashi: I tried to reason with him.. but Obito has changed..

Minato: Obito?!

Bee: Not to be a party pooper yo! but we got other shit to be worried about, Naruto!

(Juubi is shown curling it's tails all together with a dark energy manifesting around it)

Madara: Obito, you had your fun. Now it's your turn to babysit the Juubi

(Madara stands before Naruto and company)

Madara: It's time .. to clear the battlefield! (Scene ends with Madara activating his Perfect Susanno and creating 3 other Mokuton clones)

Madara enters the fight as the Juubi enters it's final state!!

END
prediction 3
irst off. This is my first real prediction. It might not be that good xD

*Madara stares at Minato*
Madara: So this is the famous 4th hokage i’ve heard so much about.
Minato: and you must be Madara...
*Ninjas around Naruto confused*
Sakura: Naruto? Is the 4th Hokage really your dad?
*Naruto smiles*
Naruto: Yeah... He is.
Sakura: Well how do you know him? He died when you were born didn’t he?
Naruto: Yeah... He died together with my mom protecting me… I’ll explain it later! We have to focus on taking Madara and that tailed beast down!
Sakura: Yeah you’re right!
Minato: Naruto? I don’t see Kakashi anywhere… is he..?
Guy: Minato sensei!
Minato: Who are you?
Guy: Its me! Guy!
Minato: Guy?? You’ve grown alright..
Guy: There is no time for that right now! Obito is fighting Kakashi!
Minato: What?? He was brought back to life too? Who’s the one controlling him?
Guy: He never died! Obito was the guy wearing the mask!
*Minato shocked*
Minato: But... He couldn’t have survived.. He was crushed by the boulders!
Madara: enough of your reunion!
Minato: Girl behind Naruto! Heal Naruto while i’m going to buy some time, the rest will be here soon...
Sakura: What do you mean with that?
*Minato smiles*
*Scene changes to Obito and Kakashi*
Obito: This world is full of lies! You only live in this world to get hurt!
Kakashi: The illusion world will do nothing! You know that as well as i do!
Obito: Shut up! You’re nothing but a fake... The illusion world is the answer to everyones problems! Its not like a fake would understand!
Kakashi: If someone here is a fake it must be you! The Obito I knew would never do the things you have done!
Obito: Enough talk… Let’s finish this!
*Scene changes to Hashirama, Tobirama & Hiruzen near the 5 kages*
Tobirama: I don’t know how good the 4th hokage is, but he won’t stand a chance against Madara! We should never have sent him alone!
Hiruzen: Don’t worry. Hes better than you think.
Hashirama: He looks like a reliable guy too!
Hiruzen: Is this it?
Tobirama: Yeah we’re close…
*They arrive at the place the 5 kages fought*
Tobirama: So these are the people I sensed...
*Tobirama spots Katsuya*
Tobirama: Katsuya!
Katsuya: Lord second!
Tobirama: What are you doing here? And who is that woman?
Hashirama: It can’t be.. Tsunade is it you!?
*Tsunade near death*
Tsunade: G-Grandpa.. What are you.. doing here?
Hashirama: Don’t worry! Everything is gonna be alright!
*Hashirama starts healing her while Katsuya brings the other kages to Tsunade. Tsunade starts healing the kages while getting healed herself*
Tobirama: Who are these people? And what happened here?
Tsunade: These.. Including me... W-We’re the five kages! We we’re all taken out by Madara… Madara used your jutsu grandpa…
*Hashirama smiles*
Hashirama: Don’t worry Tsunade.. I will take care of him.

Suigetsu: THEY FREAKING FORGOT ABOUT US!!
Sasuke: Wheres the battlefield? LOL
Orochimaru: No idea.. Wanna destroy the leaf instead?
Sasuke: Ok.
Reunited
Sakura :D.. dad
Minato :i'm glad i came in time
Naruto :me too dad.
Sakura :n..naruto.that's 4th hokage why do you call him dad.
Naruto turns to sakura and smiles)he's my dad alright.
Minato turns to them and Smiles)yeah.that's right i'm his dad.sakura right.
Sakura thinking)he knows my name too.but i thought his parents died when he was born how do he know him.
(remembers what she said to sasuke naruto's stupid because he don't have parents)
Naruto's
friends and others:yellow flash is naruto's father
Minato looks at sad sakura)why do you look sad you don't like that i came.
Sakura :no.thinking if you are his father why he is so stupid.
Naruto :sakura chan!
Minato and sakura Laughs skratching their heads)hah..ha.
Narutoangry) What are you guys luaghing for
........ :yeah.that's true you idiot
(sasuke and taka jump in shocking everyone except minato)
Naruto and sakura:S ..sasuke.
Karin :hey.you two.
Sakura:what are you doing with him.he tried to kill you arn't he.(points finger at sasuke)did you come to help madara.
Karin :it can't be helped and he didn't come to help madara he came help you guys
Sakura:like i'll believe.
Karin angry)Why you
madara:cut that sweet reunion will you.(activates his perfect susanno'o)
Sasuke:so your madara uchiha right.i'll stop you once and for all(begins to activate susanno'o)
madara:you.your are an uchiha.(he looks like izuna but much powerful.sees his etenal mangkiyo)
Madara:impressive brat.you remind me of me when i was young.
Sasuke:i'm nothing like you.(fires a susanno'o arrow at him.while running at him)
Naruto try to standup but can't)sasuke.
in kumui demension
(kakashi and obito fights head on)

Kakashi:i won't let you insult my friend.
Obito:then die kakashi.
(Again to the battlefield)
(madara and sasuke exchange blows with susanno'os)
Naruto:damn. i'm out of chakra.if i had chakra i could help sasuke
Sakura:it'll take time naruto besides he can take care of himself he's strong.
Minato:stop sakura.i'll replace his chakra.i've a gift for you naruto.(seal other half of kuruma chakra through his seal)
you've change your seal aren't you.and you to your low on chakra too(gives sakura some chakra)
Naruto:dad.sakura-chan.let's go help sasuke.
Taka:we're coming too.
(scene changes to where tsunade is)
(hashirama,tobirama,hiruzun and orichimaru):what the hell happen her.
kages been healed:hokages and orichimaru
a disaster.what happened to tsunade.
The end.
No world at all.
SFX-Smoke Clears
Sakura-The Fourth Hokage
Shinobi Alliance-Is that the Fourth Hokage?
Shikimaru-Thank Goodness somethings finally going our way for once.
Naruto-Right on time dad
Kurama-It’s about time....Minato
Madara-The Fourth huh?
Minato looks at Madara
Minato-So your Madara Uchiha?
Madara-Fourth Hokage were is Hashirama Senju I don’t see him with you.
Minato-He's right behind me with a little back up.
Scene changes to the other Kage’s
Third Hokage in his thoughts-Were is Minato?
Orochimaru-We should be close...Karin!
Karin use her sensing abilities
Karin-I have picked up five fading chakra’s and one of them is almost gone.
Hashirama-The chakra that is fading is similar to mine it must be Tusnade we must go faster.
Scene changes back to Battle Field
Madara’s thoughts-So Hashirama decides to avoid fighting me...no matter he will fall before the juubi anyway.
Minato throws Legendary Kunai at Madara then teleports with it.
Madara switches to EMS (no susano) and sees Minato's attack.
As Minato is trying to perfect flying thunder god technique it is thwarted by Madara’s Sharingan power.
Minato-He see can my attacks with his sharingan.
Naruto-Damn I can’t sit around all day.
Kurama-Naruto stop let that girl finish healing you so I can focus more on gathering chakra than using it to fix you up.
Naruto!
Kurama-He is your father after all he was able to hold his own against me he should be able to at least run Madara’s chakra down.
Naruto(smiles)-Hmph
Minato-Don’t worry Naruto I can subdue him until your 100%.
Sakura-I will try to speed things up Naruto.
Naruto(thoughts)-Finally we have an advantage.
Scene changes to Obito and Kakashi
Kakashi-Obito..the true Rin will never return even if you use a genjutsu it won’t bring Rin back you’ll just be making a fake world.
Obito-Kakashi
Kakashi-.....
Obito-Can’t you see we are living in a fake world already.
Kakashi-No Obito the fake world you are talking about is no world at all.
End
The Hokages Vs Madara
When biju dama vanished every one surprised.

Madara is standing on top of a rock.

Madara ** : Biju dama vanished ? and Who is this blonde guy ?

Sakura : Dad ? Isn't this Fourth hokage ? ( In manga Sakura don't know about Minato's relationship with Naruto )

Killer bee : Yellow flash ?

Shikamaru, Ino,Chouji : It can't be.....

Then Madara hear foot steps and he looks down to see who is this person.

Hashirama : Long time no see Madara . Wood element birth of trees!.

Then a lot of tree and root came out of soil and capture the juubi.

Juubi : Graaaaah! graaah!

Juubi tries to resist....

Ninja 1 : It will break out of that jutsu.

Minato try to use food cart destroyer technique but hesitate


Minato : { There is no frog in mount myoboku large enough to defeat this. I need to find a better way to defeat this.Even If I teleport juubi to different dimension it still cause problems. }


Suddenly shikamaru's and Nara clan's shadow bind juubi.


Shikamaru : I don't think it is enough...

Minato suddenly remember about Shikkau.

Madara : Humph your wood element is as strong as before and you have got some friends.How ever you are not the only the one who can use it.

Hashirama : { I am not the only one ?} What do you mean Madara ?

Madara : Mokuthon birth of trees...

The tree came out of soil and attack Hashirama.

Hashirama : The same technique ?

Tobirama appear and Use hiraishin to hit Madara but Madara after getting hit regenerate.

Tobirama : He has got brother's element plus he is an edo ?.

Hiruzen : Shodaime sama and nidaime sama you two cake care of Madara.Me and fourth are enough to defeat
juubi.

Every one surprised too see edo hokages especially konoha ninjas.

Naruto : Dose any one can explain to me what happening ?

Sasuke : You are as dumb as ever Naruto...

Sasuke appear with Taka and Orochimaru

Sakura : Sasuke kun ?!

Naruto : Sasuke ? Why are you here ? Don't tell me that you came here just to talk with me.

Sasuke : You will soon know it .

Orochimaru : Sakura you are now a medical ninja ? You remind me of Tsunade.

Suddenly Juubi breaks the wood element and Shikamaru's and Nara clan's shadow.

Shikamaru : Just as I expected.

Jubi : Graaaha ! graaaha !

-END-
وَ السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ

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