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Posted by : a January 05, 2013

بِسْــــــــــــــــمِ اﷲِالرَّحْمَنِ اارَّحِيم
السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ

The Door and Key
*Naruto's pure kyuubi mode rages on again. It forms into the shape of Kurama, but seems to be a lot taller than before, however, still the same. hinata rides all the way up, still holding onto Naruto's hand with a smile. Her hair is sent into a tantrum of sways by the movement of the winds power. Suddenly, they stop at a good distance up from the alliance, such as the juubi was presented*
Hinata: "This chakra....it feels wonderful"
Naruto: *letting go of hinata's hand* "Hinata, you stay still here. I wouldn't want you to get involved with the bloodbath I have in store for those two. Kurama!"
Kurama: "I'm already on it!"

*Hinata looks down to see some of kurama's chakra forming into a sort of golden chakra-like thread. It begins to stitch up some of Hinata's bigger wounds, since her smaller wounds were healed from the first blast surged upon her from the kyuubi's chakra, along with the smudges on her face disappearing as well. The thread managed to fix some of her wounds almost instantly*

Naruto: *smiling towards her* "Until Kurama makes you fully better with the more delicate wounds, I'll take care of the enemy, and-

*Naruto stops at the sight of Hinata grabbing his left wrist with an intense glare*

Naruto: *smile fades, but comes back again in understanding of the gesture* "Kurama, what do you think? Is she well enough to fight?"
Kurama: *with a grin* "It can't be helped. Your girlfriend seems to have already convinced you."
Naruto: *blushing shyly and nervously* "Why did you have to go ahead and say it like that?"
Hinata: *giggling* "Oh Naruto-Kun"
Naruto: *In his thoughts as he looks at Hinata smiling* "It's a shame I didn't notice that laugh before...it's beautiful."

*As Naruto and Hinata stop and stare off into the current predicament with Kurama's chakra at full power, the alliance stare at Kurama's spectacular form in awe*

Shikamaru: *amused* "Impressive Naruto..."

*Shikamaru looks over to Neji's corpse, and appears to be saddened. Suddenly Lee, TenTen, and Kiba/Akamaru appear before Neji, along with Gai and Hiashi Hyuga*

Lee: *teary eyed* "Neji...I can't believe-"
TenTen: *getting panel time with tears in her eyes as well* "It can't be true.."
Hiashi: *anger on his face*
Gai: "......Neji"

*Shikamaru looks down from the scene in what looks like hurt*

Shikamaru: "I know the pain they feel....I can sense now what we all are beginning to share...."

*Shikamaru looks around, at the many deaths on the battlefield. He begins to clutch his chest in pain*

Shikamaru: "Naruto, you and Hinata are the key, and my father's strategy is the door....we will all walk into this door together right into a unified future....but it all depends on you..."

*Shows a panel of Naruto standing epically atop the kyuubi with Hinata*

Shikamaru's voice along with ^that Naruto epic panel: "You will lead us into the doors of peace!!"

*Obito stares from afar, frustratedly towards Naruto/Hinata/Kyuubi*

Madara: *amused* "Interesting....your words didn't seem to affect him at all.....what do you suppose we do now?"
Obito: *turns away from Madara's line of vision, and looks over to Kakashi*
Kakashi: *angrily staring at Obito to begin with*

*Sakura turns to see her sensei's actions*

Sakura: "Kakashi Sensei...are you-"
Kakashi: "Sakura, I need you to do me a small favor."
Sakura: "...."
Kakashi: "Can you tell Shikamaru to postpone Shikaku's strategy till I get back. I know he'll think less of me for it, but just make sure he does so."
Sakura: *wide-eyed* "What do you mean till you get back? Where are you-
Kakashi: *stares at Sakura and smiles behind his mask* "Trust me on this one."

*Sakura stares him down, but then nods at the odd request. Suddenly Kakashi uses Kamui to go into the other dimension. This surprises Sakura, but she remembers her Sensei's words, and begins towards Shikamaru*

Madara: *looks to Obito intently, knowing his next move* "Don't give in to soft words Obito. Remember where personal feelings led you before in the past."

*Obito begins to go into the other dimension with kamui*

Obito: *to Madara before disappearing* "I thought you would know me by now...butt out"
Madara: *grins*

*Obito disappears, leaving Madara alone to control the Juubi. Surprisingly, Madara has enough power to control it on his own*

Madara: "That Obito is starting to be a hindrance. I don't even need him to control the juubi, my power is sufficent." *looks towards Naruto* "All I need is to have my body, and I will end this ridiculous farce."

*Naruto and Hinata catch his line of vision*

Madara: "But in the mean time....let's see what the Juubi can really accomplish."

*Scene changes to Obito appearing before Kakashi in the other dimension. They stare at each other intently once more*

Obito: "It seems like we've hit the crossroads Kakashi"
Kakashi: *runs towards Obito in an unreal speed and punches him square in the face*

*Obito finally stops skidding along the nothingness that is the other dimension, and stands up. He wipes his bloody lips, and starts to wipe his eye."

Kakashi: "It's too bad you don't have your goggles this time around, maybe some of that dust wouldn't have got into your eyes."
Obito: *annoyed, but collects himself as he stands up straight* "What is it that you want Kakashi"

*Kakashi raises his fist towards his heart, and plainly sticks his thumb out to point at it. His eyes filled with rage*

Kakashi: "I came to confirm if my hero is really gone from this world, and..."
Obito: "...."
Kakashi: "...If my dreams died along with him!!"

BOLD WORDS AT THE END OF CHAPTER: "The final confrontation of two crossing paths!!"
A Hawks prey
Obito: ...*he's holding her hand...and she's holding his....I see.*
Obito: Naruto, if I were to kill that woman beside you, what would you do?
Hinata: !?
Naruto shows an angry face at him
Naruto: Come and try.
Obito: You don't know, do you? You would be so fueld with rage that you would lose control, and kill everything around you wouldn't you. Just like I did, when I saw the one I loved killed by my best friend.
Kakashi: *!? So...back then...you killed those mist shinobi...*
Naruto: IT WILL NEVER COME TO THAT! You won't lay a hand on her, or anyone else from here on out!
Obito: ...
Madara: He won't, but I will.
Madara claps his hands and a giant meteor comes from the sky
Obito: !? What do you think youre doing?
Madara: Excuse me? You just aimed the juubi's bijuudama point blank at them and you're complaining about this?
Obito: That's not it, I want to prove my point.
Madara: Ha, you really are a child.
Kakashi: It's too big for my Kamui!
The army starts running for it
Naruto starts creating a bijuudama
Naruto: Hinata, when I blow that rock up, can you push the remianing rocks away from everyone with your wind palm?
Hinata: With this much chakra, I guess I can..
Naruto: Alright!
Naruto fires his bijuudama, it destroys the meteor
Hinato jumps on Naruto's back and Naruto jumps into the air
Hinata uses her wind palm in hitting all the falling rocks away from the army
Kiba: Wow, hinata sure packs a punch with Naruto's chakra.
Sakura: Amazing...Hinata and Naruto really work well together..... (flashback of Sasuke's face) I wonder how he's doing....
---------------------
Scene changes to the Kages
Raikage puts hit shirt on Tsunade upper half body
Onoki: She gave her life to save ours, as expected from the hokages, always sacrificing themselves for others.
Raikage: She even gave me my arm back...
Mei: What about you Katsuya, what will you do?
Katsuya: I will follow lady Tsunades will, and pass myself to her successor.
Gaara: The last of the legendary three has died.
Orochimaru: Oh I don't know about that.
Kages: !??
Orochimaru stands high on a tree left my Madara
Mizukage: That's...
Gaara: Impossible...Orochimaru?
Onoki: I thought that punk Sasuke kid killed him?
Sasuke walks up beside Orochimaru
Raikage: !? SASUKE!
Sasuke: What are the kages doing here.
Juugo: According to my birds, they were in combat with Uchiha Madara
Orochimaru: *I see...so our little Madara experiment became strong enough to defeat the 5 kages...how delightful.*
Sasuke: Where is Madara.
Juugo: He's north from this location, a couple miles.
Orochimaru: Sasuke, you wanted to kill Madara correct?
Sasuke: Yeah, why.
Orochimaru: Good...but can you pull it off?
Sasuke stares at him with the Eternal
Sasuke: Are you questioning my power.
Orochimaru: No, I'm merely proposing a safer path in approaching this situation.
Sasuke: And that would be..
Orochimaru: If Madara was capable of all this, then so should you, that is if you want to defeat him. So why not test your power...
Orochimaru looks at the kages
OrochimaruL Against them!
Gaara: Sasuke! Madara is our enemy as well. He's too powerful. If you engage us here, you won't gain anything.
Onoki: He's right boy. There is a war going on, this is a fight for another time.
Sasuke: What's that smell?
Onoki: !?
Sasuke: Oh...it's fear.
Raikage: Damn you! You little shit come at me!
Raikage powers up
Mei: Raikage-sama don't! Look at his eyes. They're different from before. Remember what happened in your last fight with him.
Raikage: You dare mock me woman! He's still a threat to the shinobi alliance! If anything he's still working with that masked man! Our duty is to stop that. On top of that, he's got Orochimaru with him. It's out duty to stop him.
Onoki: ...he makes a point.
Gaara/Mei: !?
Onoki: Naruto and the others are dealing with the other Madara and perhaps the real Madara now. We can't give them more weight to deal with. We do our part here.
Mei: ...
Gaara: Agreed.
Orochimaru: Then it's settled. After this...we will go to our original location.
Sasuke: Fine. This should only take a few minutes.
Sasuke jumps towards them with his hand on his sword
Chapter end.
A crippling blow
Naruto and hinata are holding hands when suddenly Hinata finds herself standing next to naruto in front of the kyubi. Hinata is terrified at first but then she

Naruto: "Its ok I have brought you into the mind link here with me and the kyubi. We need to make a plan to take down the juubi cause its obvious now we can't beat it with power so only strategy will allow us a victory."
Kyubi: "I do not have enough chakra yet to do a major attack so what ever we use must be without usage of a bijuu ball."
Hachibi: "If you need a bijuu ball you can leave that to us."
Naruto: "Are you two ok after that last attack?"
Bee: "It hurt but we got the job done. Yeah."
Naruto: "Well the reason I have brought hinata in here is I have a new strategy we can use, we deprive the juubi and obito of the chakra they need to carry out their plans."
Kyubi: "But you have seen what the juubi has done thus far. We can not afford to have another one of those attacks take place."
Naruto: "We are gonna need to use the full power of the byakugan to carry this plan out maybe even take it beyond that."
Hachibi: "If that is the case allow me to get us some additional assistance."

Suddenly several members of the hyuga clan all appeared at once.

Hyashi: "What is this place?"
Naruto: "You are inside the mind link with hinata, the hachibi, the kyubi, and myself."
Hyashi: "The hachibi said you had something to tell us. What is it?"
Naruto: "Im gonna need all of you for this but if it works we are about to deal a massive blow to the juubi."

Suddenly all of hyuga clan members gathered together with naruto and hinata. The hachibi moved in behind them.

Kakashi thinking: "Something must have just happened between them."
Naruto: "Everyone ready? NOW!"

All of them suddenly grab hands and instantly kyubi and hachibi chakra flows through all of them. Naruto summons several hundred shadow clones that charge towards the juubi.

Madara: "He really doesn't learn does he?"

Madara fires several fire blasts destroying clones when suddenly one of the clones transforms into a hyashi who immediately jumps up and hits the leg of the juubi with a massively over powered gentle fist attack that immediately staggers the juubi. The juubi lets a scream of rage and pain as the attacks from several hyuga members hit its body in multiple places. Madara repeatedly attacks at the clones with fire blasts but despite his efforts he can't seem to hit a single hyuga clan member or naruto.

Obito: "Damn it! These attacks are starting to make it harder to control the juubi. What ever they are doing we have to stop them right now."
Madara: "That's what Im trying to do."

Madara summons several wood clones that start fighting the clones. Suddenly a huge bijuu ball slams into the juubi from behind catching obito and madara by surprise.

Obito: "Damn it where did that come from?"

Madara turns around to see the hachibi behind them obviously exhausted. Obito turns around when suddenly he sees something in the corner of his eye and turn faceing forward to see naruto and hinata standing in front of him. Obito tries to strike naruto when suddenly hinata appears in front of him revealing the hinata next to naruto to be a shadow clone.

Hinata: "This is for NEJI!"

Hinata hits several dozen extremely fast gentle fist attacks into obito who screams in agony spitting out blood as hinata's strikes hit his whole upper torso. Obito staggers backward causing madara to turn around in surprise as he sees obito fall off the juubi and land on the ground.

Madara: "I see what you have done there. Clever but with obito who is gonna control the juubi."

Naruto tries to attack madara with a rasenshuriken but he flees off the juubi landing on the ground amongst his clones.

The juubi lets out a scream as it roars in anger and pain.

Kyubi: "Naruto I think we have just succeeded in taking control of the juubi out of the hands of obito but I think we just made the juubi very very angry."

The juubi lets out a massively loud roar as it causes tremors around the whole area.

617: Cries of rage...The juubi is unleashed.
REUNION!!!
NARUTO : Lets get this show on the road, Hinata!!
HINATA : !! [It makes me feel....safe...!!] Okay...!!
(Naruto holds Hinata's hands tightly)
SAKURA : Hinata....[She was always besides Naruto] (remembers)
[
Sai : (to Sakura) I think, Naruto loves you.
SAKURA : ?!!
]
KAKASHI : Sakura!! Don't get into the emotions now.
SAKURA : (looks at Kakashi and then down with a sad face).......(then feels happy for Naruto)
(Naruto goes in Kyuubi mode with nine chakra tails holding Hinata inside of it.)
HINATA : It feels like...
NARUTO : Lee!!
(Lee lands near Naruto)
NARUTO : Take Neji out of here and tell Kakashi Sensei to evacuate the corpses from the field.
LEE : [Neji....]?!!....(looks at Neji and feels sad and then holds him and moves back)
LEE : Kakashi Sensei. Naruto told to move away the corpses from the field.
KAKASHI : !! ...I can understand how must be he feeling right now. Okay. Kitsuchi.
NARUTO : Hold on, Hinata!!
(runs forward and scratches on juubi's body with its claws.)
(But the juubi's tails hold the arm and throws him on the alliance)
ALLIANCE : ?!!
(Naruto manages to stand among the alliance without hurting them)
NARUTO : Uncle Bee!! Are you alright?
BEE : Yo!! Kiddo!!
NARUTO : Then lets nail those bastards.
MADARA : Are they serious, Obito?
OBITO : (Ignores him) You still don't understand, Naruto!! I'll just have to make you feel the true despair by killing that girl standing beside you.
HINATA : ?!!
NARUTO : As if I let you, You moron!!
(Naruto and Bee dashes towards the Juubi)
(But they are thrown back because of the punches from the Juubi's tails)
NARUTO : Damn those tails or hands whatever. They're not letting us to reach near the Juubi.
KITSUCHI : Kakashi, why is he wasting the chakra on the dead. We can use it to fight the Juubi.
KAKASHI : I don't know. But he can't stand himself while fighting on their lying corpses.
(Kitsuchi moves away the corpses with the help of other earth style users)
KAKASHI : Shikamaru!!
(Shikamaru turns to Kakashi)
KAKASHI : Are you thinking about what I have found now?
SHIKAMARU : Yeah!! But we have to be careful.
KAKASHI : Yes. (looks at Hinata and Naruto) but we can't distract him now in the middle of the battle.
SHIKAMARU : Don't worry. We have our cards to play. Ino!! Choji!!
INO/CHOJI : !! (stands near Shikamaru)
KAKASHI : Choji!! guard Shikamaru and Ino.
CHOJI : Okay!!
SHIKAMARU : Ino, can you connect me to Naruto without your mind transfer.
INO : (remembers)
[
(Ino coming from a mission)
INO : (looks at her dad coming from the other way) Good evening dad!!
INOICHI : Good evening, Ino. How was your mission?
INO : (thumbs up) Mission Successful!! Today's mission was totally depended on my mind transfer jutsu. Thanks to my training.
INOICHI : Ino, you are progressing in your Mind Transfer Jutsu very well.
INO : Thank you, Dad. One day I'll perfect it.
INOICHI : But, Ino...
INO : What?
INOICHI : You can't rely on it when you are in a war, at least when your comrades are not around you to hold your body.
INO : But we will not be facing a war.
INOICHI : (laughs) No one can say that. We must always be prepared for... whenever time comes. War never gives a second chance. I'll teach you a jutsu. But you must be exhausted now. We will do the training tomorrow
INO : Okay dad.
(Next Morning)
INO : Dad, Which jutsu will you teach me today?
INOICHI : The first main objective of the War is to damage the enemy's mind. And as you know, our clan is specialist in mind related jutsu-
INO : But how are we going to attack those many enemies' minds. That'll be difficult. What if our body comes in their custody?
INOICHI : That's the main point of our jutsus. I'll attack you with one of it.
INO : ?!!
INOICHI : Be ready!!(makes a handseal)
INO : I'll just use my Mind Trans- (falls on the ground)
INOICHI : Hey, Ino. Are you alright
(Ino sits holding her head)
INO : That felt too much stress on my mind. Damn it.
INOICHI : I'm sorry child.
INO : But how did you do that? So quickly. I want to learn that jutsu.
INOICHI : (laughs) Yeah sure. But not today. I'll help you out. This jutsu is similar to Mind transfer but the speed of shifting from one body to another is within a blink of an eye and readily back to our own body. This even reduces down the probability of falling unconscious. And within that period of fraction of seconds you must disturb the mentality of your enemy. Got it!!
INO : You mean to say you transferred in my mind and disturbed my mentality in that moment. I want to learn it too.
INOICHI : We can use it either way round to communicate with you comrades but partially splitting our mind. That's what I and our clan members do during the war. Giving orders to our fellow comrades on the battlefield.
]
SHIKAMARU : Ino, Ino!! Can you?
INO : I'll try my best.[Thank You, Dad.]
SHIKAMARU : That's good.
INO : (sits down) Mind Exploring Jutsu!! Shikamaru sit nearby. I'll connect you to Naruto.
(Ino puts her hand on Shikamaru)
INO : Alright!!
[
SHIKAMARU : Hey, Naruto!!
NARUTO : ?!! How are you?
SHIKAMARU : Listen up. You can see that Juubi's is not allowing you to reach near him.
NARUTO : Yeah.
SHIKAMARU : That's because of Hachibi's Bijuudama that he used it on the Juubi's Bijuudama to blast it inside of the Juubi.
NARUTO : Yeah. That was a cool plan.
SHIKAMARU : As knuckle headed as always. Listen Naruto. The Juubi's body is not yet recovered from the blast. It seems that the inner skin of the Juubi is weak compared to its outer skin. We must attack him from the inside.
NARUTO : (looks at Juubi's hanging stomach out of its shape) ?!! But we can't even reach near him. And you're telling me to attack from the inside. The tails are stopping us.
SHIKAMARU : That's a tricky one. I think the alliance can try to hold of some of the tails. You can try your luck at that moment.
NARUTO : But that's impossi-
]
INO : (Blood drips from her nose) ....Sorry..... Shikamaru.
SHIKAMARU : Doesn't matters Ino. I told him the most of the part. Thanks to you and Sakura.
INO : Thank You Sakura.
(Sakura is shown healing her and helping her to regain her chakra back)
Sakura : Your nose is bleeding. Don't worry.
KAKASHI : Shikamaru. Did you explained him.
SHIKAMARU : Yeah. But (looks at Naruto)
NARUTO : Damn it.
HINATA : [I'm still useless.] (looks sad)
NARUTO : (looking at her) Don't feel bad Hinata.
[
NARUTO : Kurama. You heard everything, right?
KURAMA : Yeah. I don't think the alliance will be able to hold the tails even for 5 seconds.
NARUTO : Can you do that?
KURAMA : Hmm...You're a devil Naruto. Okay, I'll do it.
NARUTO : Hehe (scratches his head).
KURAMA : switch over.
]
(Kurama takes the place and turns to the alliance)
HINATA : ?!! (feels the chakra in her)
KURAMA : (growls and runs towards the alliance with an angry look)
BEE : ?!! (shocks at Naruto running in opposite direction)
MADARA/OBITO : ?!!!
ALLIANCE : ?!! (gets a little scared)
SHIKAMARU : ?!! What is he doing?
KAKASHI : ?!! Naruto. Shikamaru!! contact him.
INO : I'm ready.
[
SHIKAMARU : Naruto?!!
KURAMA : Hey kid, Its me, Kyuubi. Tell everyone not to move from their place.
SHIKAMARU : But?!!
KURAMA : Do it!!
]
INO : ?!!
SHIKAMARU : ?!!
KAKASHI : What he said?
SHIKAMARU : He said not to move from the place.
KAKASHI : [Could it be?] Shikamaru. Do it!! Hurry up.(looks at Kyuubi)
SHIKAMARU : ?!!
(Some of the shinobis retrieves back to avoid the Kyuubi's attack)
ALLIANCE : He's gone mad!!
MADARA : ?!! Is the Kyuubi still not in full control of that boy?
OBITO : ?!! [That's!!] (remembers Kakashi's punch in the other dimension)
INO : (puts her hand on Shikamaru while Sakura heals Ino)
[
SHIKAMARU : Everyone!! Don't Panic. Stay where you are.
ALLIANCE : ?!!
(murmurs)
ALLIANCE : What is he talking about?!! What?!! Why?!! How can we..?!!
SHIKAMARU : Naruto has a plan. I guess
ALLIANCE : ?!!
]
(Kurama runs over and slams his hands and tails on the alliance creating a chaos)
MADARA : He's reducing our pain.
OBITO : He's not.
MADARA : Hmm?
(Kurama slams the Ino-Shika-Cho group too)
HINATA : Naruto?!! What are you-
KURAMA/NARUTO : Hey girl, you're next!!
HINATA : ?!! [His voice. What happened to Naruto?]
[
NARUTO : Kurama!! You scared Hinata.
KURAMA : I just gave her the orders what she has to do.
NARUTO : What?!!
KURAMA : Now then..
]
(The whole field is covered with dust)
INO : .....
[
SHIKAMARU : Kyuubi!! Thanks for the power up.
KURAMA : Thank me later kid, put the plan in action.
SHIKAMARU : ?!! Yeah alright. Earth Style Users(ESU)!!
ESU : ?!!!
SHIKAMARU : Try to hold as much as Juubi's tails stationary and others help them to achieve it. Make the way for Naruto!!
ALLIANCE : Roger!!!
]
MADARA : What is he up to?
OBITO : ......[They won't be able to scratch our plan even if they recover]
(From the dust where Naruto/Kurama is standing, several shinobis leap out from it in the air)
(A confidence is shown in their eyes)
MADARA/OBITO : ?!!
(Juubi growling)
(The shinobis land ahead of the dust area and runs towards Juubi)
MADARA : Little flies dare to buzz around
(The shinobis stops in a hurry in front of the Juubi and makes the handseals)
ESU : Earth Style : Devil's Arm!!!
(A bunch Huge arms rises from the ground from the center and grabs the tails of the Juubi)
ESU : Use your full strength!!
(The arms holds the tails and separates on either sides giving an opening to attack the Juubi's body)
OBITO : Damn you!!(Holds a seal)
KURAMA/NARUTO : Now's my chance.
HINATA : ?!!
(Kurama runs towards Juubi for the attack)
(Two-Three Juubi's tails frees itself from the arm's grip and tries to block the attacking Kurama)
(Some of the Water style users attack)
WSU : Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu!!
(The dragons attacks the blocking tails and tries to separate them.)
(Shinobis rains explosive Kunais at the blocking tails creating a huge cloud of smoke along with steam formation)
KURAMA : Hey girl, hold yourself.
HINATA : Okay!!
[
KURAMA : Naruto!! You rest and build up your chakra for now.
NARUTO : Huh?!! What do you mean?
KURAMA : You'll know it soon. Hachibi!! Are you ready?
GYUUKI : Whenever you are!!
]
(Kurama dashes towards Juubi)
HINATA : ?!!
INO-SHIKA-CHO : ?!!
KAKASHI/SAKURA : ?!!
ALLIANCE : ?!!
(Everyone with a stunned face, What are the chances for the hit? Will they succeed in their plan?)
(Kurama runs through the smoke with full speed to attack the Juubi)
(As he passes through the smoke, on the other side, sharp claws emerges out with an orange colored fur on whole hand)
(As the chakra covered body passes through the smoke, on the other side, the face of the devilish Kyuubi with sharp canines emerges out)
(As the whole chakra tails pass through the smoke, on the other side, the bunch of tails emerges out and then spreads out)
(The Kyuubi enters the battlefield with a roar)
(Kurama runs at the Juubi violently)
MADARA : My pet is out to bark.
OBITO : ......
(Hinata is shown near Kyuubi's ear holding his fur and using the chakra at her feet to stand)
(Kurama reaches near Juubi's stomach and attacks with his claws on his stomach to tear apart.)
(But the claws don't go much deeper)
(Juubi, in pain, attempts to attack with his only hand to stop the Kyuubi's claws but Kurama blocks it with his tails and attempts several more attacks to worsen Juubi's wounds)
(Hinata runs back from Kyuubi's head to tail and jumps off from there)
(At the same moment, Kurama jumps high in the air looking in Madara's eyes directly with anger)
(At the same moment, Hachibi comes into the picture from behind with a huge Bijuudama)
(Hinata lands on Hachibi's head)
(Several Hyuugas along with Hiashi jumps on Hachibi from back and runs along the way towards his head)
HIASHI : Hinata!! Are you alright!!
HYUUGAS : Lady Hinata!!
HINATA : (looking at Hiashi) Yes!!
HIASHI : Ready!! Bee!!
HACHIBI : Here we go, Take this one!!! Motha....f**ka!!
(Launches the Bijuudama straight onto Juubi's stomach but is about to rebound back)
HIASHI : (stretches both the arms) Air Barrier Palm!!!
HINATA : Air Palm!!!
HYUUGAS : Air Palm!!
(Hyuugas standing on Hachibis head with Hiashi at the center, pushes the Bijuudama with all might through Juubi's stomach)
(Juubi screams in pain as the Bijuudama is pushed inside)
(One of the tails attack the Hyuugas)
HYUUGAS : (still holding their attacks) ?!! Damn it!!
???? : Gatsuuga!!!
???? : Gatsuuga!!!
(Gatsuuga pushes out the tails away up to certain limit to prevent the attack)
(Kiba, Akamaru, his mom and her partner lands on the Hachibi's back)
KIBA : What did you thought? heheh. Keep going Hinata!!
HINATA : (assures) Yes!!
(The Bijuudama is pushed further and a big hole is created through in the Juubi's stomach with the flesh burning at the edges)
(Juubi screams while staggering at his place)
(Kurama, with a grin on his face, fires another Bijuudama on Madara and Obito while in the air)
OBITO : ?!!
MADARA : (looking at Kyuubi) What a reunion?!! (smirks)

(Madara stands smiling at the Kyuubi's attack!!!)
(What are his limits?)
Met Elders
Outside Konoha, 20 jonins are dead. We see snakes retreating, implying Oro killed them.
Sasuke: ... Let's get this over with.

Suigetsu: We'll wait with you Sasuke, I don't want to be around this pedo-snake!
Jugo: ...

Orochimaru: We're here, Sasuke-kun. Are you sure you want to go in?
Sasuke activates EMS and looks up The elders are coming this way... (memories from Itachi's flashback flood his own memories)

Sasuke's expression becomes angry and he closes his eyes. Opens eyes with EMS.

Sasuke: I'm going to say this once, come out of the bushes.

The elders walk out and seem unphased to see Sasuke

Granny elder: Orochimaru! You're supposed to be dead. How dare you return here?
Grandpa elder: Sasuke-kun... look at how far you've fallen. (shakes head) Itachi really did die for nothing.

Orochimaru steps forward but Sasuke commands him to stay back. He tells Jugo and Suigetsu to keep an eye on them and go retrieve what they're after.

Suigetsu: But I don't wanna go with this guy!
Jugo: Let's go, Suigetsu.
Orochimaru: I'm hurt you don't trust me more, but in time you will see the truths of this world, Sasuke-kun.. He licks his lips in that creepy way of his.

From the bushes we see Konohomaru and his twerpy little buddies hiding. He's shaking when he sees Orochimaru's eye.

Sasuke activates Tsukuyomi and traps the elders in genjutsu. and pierces the grandma elder. Itachi's voice is heard talking about sacrifice and the village. Sasuke shows them Itachi's painful memories and the elders seem shocked at what Danzo did.

Grandpa Elder: Sasuke that's enough! Can you really not understand your brother's feelings?

The images continue to flash by and suddenly the elders are in Tsukuyomi-land being repeatedly tortured and questioned about the village.

The grandpa elder comes to and has a bloody kunai in his hand. Sasuke made him kill the old woman. He demands answers from the old man and tells him he can make him talk with Edo Tensei if he wishes.

Orochimaru finds the remains of the Naka shrine and enters, alone, to retrieve the tablet. After they talk about the tablet, Suigetsu and Jugo are bound by Orochimaru snakes.

Orochimaru returns to Sasuke with them bound

Suigetsu: Sasuke make this creep let us go
Jugo: .... (He struggles but cant get free)

The grandpa elder is on the ground, clearly his brain has been fried by genjutsu and he has a twisted expression on his face.

Sasuke: I trapped him in a genjutsu where Itachi is torturing him. He'll wake up soon.
Orochimaru: I'll need to wait... he's become far stronger than I anticipated

Sasuke: Do it now, Orochimaru.

Orochimaru snaps the grandpa elders neck as Konohomaru stands from the bushes. Orochimaru performs the seals for Edo Tensei and reanimates the elders. Jugo and Suigetsu are both sacrificed.

Konohomaru: Stop right there! Rasengan!

Sasuke is hit but turns into a clone log. He flips around in the air and with chidori nagashi takes Konohomaru out in one hit, turning his blade to the blunt end while back-flipping into the air. He's laying on the ground bleeding and unconscious. The Edo Elders round up his friends, who are knocked out and overcome easily Moegi and Udon (yes, I looked up the name lol).

Orochimaru: Oh, touching. You're sparing their little lives.
Sasuke: They're more useful as hostages... Naruto likes this kid if he taught him Rasengan. That's useful. Did you get it?

Orochimaru motions a snake to puke out the tablet, which Sasuke immediately opens and begins scanning with EMS. Sasuke reads the tablet and doesn't comment on it. This is bad. Clearly it's been modified here at the end by someone. I was meant to read this.... Madara... you bastardThen he looks up and asks the Elders

Sasuke: Why were the Uchiha planning the coup? Who planned the massacre? What really happened after Madara lost at the valley of the end? Tell me everything!

We see side panels indicating the Uchiha ancestor leaving the Sage's bedside. Years of warfare, Madara and his brother training again. Hashirama found Konoha. The Uchiha exiling Madara for his extremism. We see Madara with an angry expression standing over his brother's deathbed. Uchiha clan ancestor glaring at his brother. Madara watching Hashirama being inaugurated, clearly buttmad. Madara writing the tablet, Madara's exile and his visit to Izuna's grave. Later his death at valley of the end. Hashirama sealing the 9 tails in Uzumaki ancestors. The attack. Uchiha being forced into the corner of the village. Sasuke's father and a young Itachi, the father is arguing with the elders about rights. The elders don't listen. The massacre. Itachi leaving, threatening the Third. The elders saying that Itachi is a true hero.

Sasuke seems very angry by the end of it. Orochimaru looks pleased. Suigetsu's sword is nearby, eerily reminding us of the price Sasuke paid for answers.



In the hastily constructed emergency shelter, she sits along with crying women and children. The guards warn them to not go outside because its just too dangerous. The kids continue crying.

Karin: Sasuke-kun... he's so confused. Suigetsu and Jugo's chakra vanished all at once. And that other chakra is... Orochimaru?!

She escapes undetected and follows Sasuke and Orochimaru into the woods. Edo Elders are carrying the brats. Konohomaru is unharmed.

Sasuke: Let's go, we're going to deal with this Uchiha Madara directly.
Orochimaru:

وَ السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ

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