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Posted by : a June 27, 2013

بِسْــــــــــــــــمِ اﷲِالرَّحْمَنِ اارَّحِيم
السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ


Naruto Chapter 637 Prediction
The new Madara
Obito : Gedo Rinenetensei no jutsu!!

Naruto : This is bad .He is going to use Nagato's jutsu.

Sasuke : So that's his true identity.

Now the the king of hell/the samsara of heavenly life statue appears in the battlefield.
And a green aura comes out of it's mouth and go towards Madara's edo body.
After that the samsara of heavenly life statue disappear.

Madara : Finally....
Obito : [ He has been using me. I wasn't able to do what I wanted.]
Obito collapse down.
Madara : It's look like he won't have chakra to do reaper death seal. But I have other pawns....

( I assume Madara and Obito know about RDS. )

Then kakashi come out of from other dimension. Kakashi see Obito.
Kakashi : Obito
Edo Minato leave his place to a clone of Hashirama to guard the barrier.He reaches near Obito. Looks at him with a sad expression.
Kakashi : Sensei !!?
Obito :??
Madara : Kuchiosen no jutsu !
Suddenly the juubi disappear and summoned near Madara. All the juubi clones disappear.
Minato grabs kakashi and Obito and teleports away from juubi.
Tobirama : He is able to summon it!
Hiruzen : This barrier is for joke.
Madara : I can't use Obito for RDS since he run out of chakra. But since you are here you will be better than him.
Then spiral zetsu appear in front of Madara.

( I assume Madara and Obito know about RDS. )

Spiralzethsu : It has been long time. ... It was too boring to live in his body.
Madara : No time to waste. Do the seals of shikkifujin !
Spiralzethsu : It's my duty.
Suddenly a kunai with lightning thrust spiralzethsu and sand covers the Madara's body.
Madara : Sand ?
Raikage : One is down.
Ohonoki : It won't kill it. Prepare for next attack.
Gaara : Desert coffin !
Gaara's sand crush try to crush Madara use shinratensei.
Mei uses her acid against juubi and Tsunade lands near Mei.

Naruto : Tsunade no ba chan and Gaara.

Sasuke : [It's look like Orochimaru was able to rescue fifth and Other kages.]

Bee : Braso !

Leaf ninja : Kages!

-END-
Madara's patience By: Onimusha madara
TIRED OF WAITING!!!!

Obito: UWAHHHHHHHHHH Madara you planted rods in me?!?!?! I never trusted you not even for a second.

Madara: Do you know how long i have waited for this?!?!?!!? DO YOU!?!?!? You cannot fathom the amount of effort it took for me to plan this out. I do have to thank you for being such a useful pawn.

Obito: UWAHHHHHH!!!!!

ALL HELL BREAKS LOOSE!!!!

Oh No

Naruto: WE GOTTA STOP THAT THING!!!

Alliance/kages/team7: ?!??!

Naruto: That's pains jutsu. It revives the dead who knows what is going to happen. Whatever it is it cant be good at all we need to stop it now!!!!!!!

* The whole alliance rushed the rinne tensei beast.*

Obito: Think you can control me do you madara !?!??!!?

* Obito gains control for a quick instant.*

Obito: If you want your body fine...... but with every ounce of my strength * He grabs a konoha fodder.* Whoever is the strongest in this man's memory will be your undoing

In the end ill try to be
A Good Boy...

RINNE TENSEI

STOP HIM!!!!!!!!

Not So fast

Hashirama: MY JUTSU!!!!!

Naruto: AS IF!!!!

Sasuke: Inferno style: Blaze control

Madara clones: susanoo

* The clones block the flames and from the sky.*

Kiba: Cerberus : riptide

* Clearing a few clones out of the way.*

Choji: Whole expansion jutsu: bring down the town

* Lots of the Madara clones are being killed.*

Naruto: Almost there

Madara: nuisance

Naruto: sasuke we gotta stop him

Sasuke: gotcha

LETS KILL THIS BASTARD!!!

* Madara rushes naruto and sasuke.*

Sasuke: Black flames of hell

Madara: * clads himself in susanoo and goes past sasuke.*

Naruto: Im gunna kick your.....

RIGHT PASS HIM!!!!

Naruto: m?

Madara: the ten tails will be mine!!!!

* a blue orb hits madara a giant light shines blinding the entire army*

Naruto: oh no....

The Man
Who cut his umbilical chord with a samurai sword
MADARA IS FLESH AGAIN!!!!

Madara: Huehuehuehuehuehue Shinra

Naruto: Everybody run get out of---

Madara: tensei

* The force of the almighty push is too great and the ground beneth the barrier begins to fall the 2nd and 3rd lose balance and the barrier dampens a little just enough so that madara can get in.*

Madara: MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE !!!!!

???: Not today

Madara: who are you?

KING OF THE SNAKES

Orochimaru: Someone who doesn't want you to be alive the past should stay in the past

Madara: As if you can stop me You aint S*** and you aint never going to be S***

Orochimaru: Summoning jutsu: *in thought* ( Well i dont have manda anymore oh wait i know.) FORTINBRAS

Madara:!?!?!?

THE GREAT SERPENT GOD

Fortinbras: ahhh madara it seems you have revived the ten tails it seems ill have to crush you for trying to attempt what we all have feared

Madara: tsk

Orochimaru: Lets go

Madara: I dont have time for this * Fuujin tomatose Onijin: Uchiha hidden techinique.*

* A bunch of little fire demons surround orochimaru and madara runs off.*

??? Summoning jutsu: bring down the house

* Madara is crushed by gambunta.*

Madara: * clad in susanoo* So many inturuptions.

IM BACK!!!!!

Jiraya: I dont fully undertstand whats going on ...... but i know that you're against naruto and anyone that threatens my student * makes gambunta jump* Shall feel my wrath

Madara: I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THIS!!!! * so this is the man obito summoned back.*

Jiraya: Well then lets make some

* Madara's arm turns into a giant cannon.*

Madara: Asura path: Big gekky cannon * A giant blue beam hits gambunta and madara runs towards the juubi he manages to reach the top of it.* Yin/Yang style: Beast control

* Madara disappears inside the ten tails.*

ALMIGHTY POWER!!!

???: To truly understand what all must never know you must first comquer the inside to unleash the anger on the outside.

Madara: ?

Ten tails: Defeat the pieces of me and you shall have my power

Madara: whatever it takes. I am a patient man.

Ten tails: very well come former ways of myself

* The junchuriki's appear and are about to attack madara*

Lets get this popping

* The shell of the ten tails begins to break and the gates holding the ten tails begin to become nothing a ginat black tornado of chakra appears and the juubi fodder all disprease but whats left is.*

A NEW MADARA

Madara: Let the moons eye plan begin.

HOST OF THE TEN TAILED BEAST!!!!
Pure Evil (By Hoonaninator)
Obito: UWAAHHHH!!!!!!!!! (Forms hand seals for Rinne Tensei)

Minato: ?!! That's..Obito!

Madara: It is now time... (Smirks) Rinne Tensei no Jutsu!!

Naruto: (Thinking)...What's going on?! That's Nagato's technique!...

A flash of light enters Madara!

Obito: (Coughs blood) Guh!! (Collapses onto the ground with half of his body in black)

Madara: (Looks at his hands) This...

Tobirama: ?!! Impossible...Madara's chakra feels different!...

Hashirama: I know! That's no longer an Edo Tensei!...He is fully revived!

Madara: (Turns at smirks at Hashirama) This is true power!!!

Juubi: GWOOAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

The Juubi attempts to break free while all the Juubi clones begin to attack more aggressively!

Obito: ...Madara...you bastard!...

Madara: (Approaches Obito) From the time I saved you, you were already under my control. I injected some of my will into you, the same as what I put into Zetsu.

Obito: I did everything to achieve our goals...why?!...

Madara: ...My goals. I only needed you to revive me. You were nothing but a pawn.

Obito looks shocked, before an expression of regret and remorse shows on his face. Tears begin flowing down his cheeks. With great will, Obito rises to his feet.

Madara: Amazing...you can still last so long even after using the Rinne Tensei.

Obito: I...(Thinks of Rin, Kakashi and Minato)...I will use my last remaining energy to stop you! (Stares angrily at Madara)

Obito charges towards Madara with a pole!

Madara: In the new world, there is only one man at the top.

Madara's Susanoo appears and attempts to stab Obito with its blade!! All of a sudden, a flash consumes Obito and he disappears!

Madara: ??...

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Minato's Kage Bunshin carries Obito and lands beside the real Minato.

Obito: Se...Sensei?....

Minato: I thought you were dead, Obito.

Obito: I...I'm sorry...That night...I was the one who attacked the village...

Minato: ...

Obito: All I wanted...was a world without peace. My biggest mistake was believing Madara...I...I...

Minato: It's ok Obito, it was partly my fault. I didn't do my part as a sensei.

Obito: You have to stop Madara...He is...pure evil.

Minato: (Turns and stares at Madara)

Naruto's clone arrives beside Minato and Obito.

Naruto: What happened to Kakashi-Sensei?! Where is he?!

Kakashi: Kakashi??

Obito: ....(Looks down in remorse)

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Hashirama: Madara!!!!

Madara: (Looks down at Hashirama) It'd be a pity not to fight you Hashirama...but completing the Moon Eye Plan is more important.... My time has arrived! (Smirks)

Juubi: GWOOOAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

4 Edo Hokage: ?!!!!

The Juubi breaks free of the Myoujinmon!!!!!
Minato steps in
This is my first prediction

Obito: UWAAHHHH!!!!!!!!! (Forms hand seals for Rinne Tensei)

Minato: ?!! That's..Obito!

Madara: It's time... (Smirks) Rinne Tensei no Jutsu!!

Tobirama:You sick bastard.He is He is......

Hashirama: Alive??

Obito: ...Madara...you bastard!...

Madara: (Approaches Obito) From the time I saved you, you were already under my control. I injected some of my will into you, the same as what I put into Zetsu.

Obito: I did everything to achieve our goals...why?!...

Madara: ...My goals. I only needed you to revive me. You were nothing but a pawn.

Obito looks shocked, before an expression of regret and remorse shows on his face. Tears begin flowing down his cheeks. With great will, Obito rises to his feet.

Madara: Amazing...you can still last so long even after using the Rinne Tensei.

Obito: I...(Thinks of Rin, Kakashi and Minato)...I will use my last remaining energy to stop you! (Stares angrily at Madara)
Rinne Tensei no Jutsu???


Madara: How can it be done twice.if only i knew(Izuna we could have ruled together)

Madara's Susanoo appears and attempts to stab Obito with its blade!! All of a sudden, a flash consumes Obito and he disappears!

Madara: ??...

Minato:I fell different? am i alive..........

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Minato's Kage Bunshin carries Obito and lands beside the real Minato.

Obito: Se...Sensei?....

Minato: I thought you were dead, Obito.

Obito: I...I'm sorry...That night...I was the one who attacked the village...

Minato: ...

Obito: All I wanted...was a world without peace. My biggest mistake was believing Madara...I...I...

Minato: It's ok Obito, it was partly my fault. I didn't do my part as a sensei.

Obito: You have to stop Madara...He is...pure evil.This is the least i can do sensei.Good Bye.(smiles and thinks finally get to see Rin)

Minato: (Turns and stares at Madara)

Kakashi arrives beside Minato and Obito.

Kakashi: Obito.....

Obito:Kakashi take my other eye

Kakashi:But

Obito:Sakura transplant my eye to kakashi.Good bye kakashi and naruto do not lose your dream

obito dies with a smile on his face

Naruto:father you are alive

Minato:Madara its time for you to die
(minato forms hand seals his chakra level raises above everyone)

Minato:Its uzumaki clan's jutsu possible to use if kurama is sealed inside you

Madara:Hashi i think i will play with him .sorry

Minato:i will become juubi's host

everyone shocked

Madara:lets see about it

minato versus madara showdown to became juubi's host
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Minato:This is for you obito
Ultimate Jinchuuriki
Obito struggles to control his body as the hand sign to confirm his death is forcefully maneuvered by his own hands via the sinister Madara Uchiha!

Obito Uchiha: Grrr... Madara... [Blackness overcoming his body]

Madara Uchiha: [Arms Crossed] Oh spare me the spite, Obito. You had this coming after all those sly remarks you made to me, earlier.

Minato Namikaze: [Shocked] Obito! I thought you were dead! How come you're still alive? Why are you with that man?!

Obito Uchiha: Heh. Minato-sama. So it was you I felt.

Hiruzen Sarutobi: Obito, what is going on?! You were such a good young boy who truly believed in the will of fire. What happened to you?

Obito Uchiha: I grew up.

Naruto Uzumaki: Where's Kakashi-sensei?!

Obito Uchiha: Sleeping.

Kakashi is seen on his side within the pocket dimension. He's barely breathing and blood leaks profusely out of his wound.

Sasuke Uchiha: Grrr... Tobi!

Obito Uchiha: Hm. Sasuke. So it seems you sided with Naruto.

Sasuke Uchiha: I know everything now! That you were responsible for the attack on Konoha all those years ago! You were responsible for our clan becoming so distrusted!

Obito Uchiha: Yeah? So what? I did what I had to do. So don't lecture me about my actions. What are you up to anyways, Sasuke?

Sai: [Suspecting Look]

Sasuke Uchiha: ...

Obito Uchiha: Heh, either way, you'll get to see your clan soon enough when Madara initiates the Infinite Tsukiyomi.

???: About that.

Obito Uchiha: !!! [Looks at Madara]

Madara Uchiha: It's time I shattered your little Fairy Tale ending; my plan involves no such thing as an "Infinite Genjutsu".

Obito Uchiha: [Heartbroken] ...What?!

Madara Uchiha: It's time I announce my true goal; World Domination and control. By using Obito's dimension, I will contain a certain amount of prisoners within it. Then, using the Juubi's power, I shall project my eye off the face of the moon and use Amaterasu to burn the planet away. Afterwards, I will use Izanagi to create a new world and release my loyal subjects to be ruled underneath me.

Naruto Uzumaki: !!!

Sasuke Uchiha: [Disgusted]

Hashirama Senju: !!!

Tobirama Senju: !!!

Obito Uchiha: What are you talking about?! We discussed this, you bastard!

Madara Uchiha: Indeed we did. And I'll have you know that I played you right into my old hands, Obito.

Obito Uchiha: [Angry]

Madara Uchiha: I was in control of the Mist when they input the Three-Tails inside of Rin. It was all my doing in order to get you to trust me.

Obito Uchiha: !!!

Madara Uchiha: I never imagined it would work so well. Young-lings were always such a sucker for love, after all. Isn't that right, Hashirama.

Hashirama: [Mito]

Madara Uchiha: Either way, your dream world you will see in the afterlife... if you don't go straight to hell. [Evil Smirk]

Obito Uchiha: Madara!!!

Madara Uchiha: Enough of this foolishness. [Hand sign]

Hashirama: Not on our watch!

The four Kage jump towards him but he activates Perfect Susano'o and swats them away like flies.

Obito Uchiha: Guh! [Blackness Overwhelms Him]

Madara Uchiha: I implanted that within you in our earlier meeting. Spores from Black Zetsu that lingered within your body for years. Now! Grant me my mortality back!!!

A giant white head emerges from the ground behind Obito. It stretches several feet into the air and it's mouth opens wide. A single soul emerges and flies out, colliding with the body of Edo Madara. A blinding light envelops the area and the Allied Shinobi Force look on in terror. As the brightness fades, a figure stands triumphantly. Uchiha Madara has returned back to the land of the living!

Obito Uchiha: [Collapses]

Madara Uchiha: Now... the fun begins. [Reaches out Hand]

Juubi: Wooooooaaaaahhh! [Barrier begins to crack]

Hashirama: Oh no! It won't hold! Everyone get away!

A massive explosion on the Earth is seen from space. As the smoke clears, a giant figure sits like a dog from hell. The Juubi has entered it's final state which is too ominous to put into words. Shielding the Allied Shinobi Alliance is a giant snake with reinforced sand and lightning armor. The Kage have arrived.

Karin Uzumaki: Sasuke-kun!

Suigetsu Hozuki: Oh shit.

Tsunade Senju: Grandfather!

Orochimaru: Kukukuku... right on time. [Tongue slithers out]
Redemption
[Madara continues to increase his will over Obito while he is screaming in Agony]

[Obito writhes on the floor, he punches into the ground and screams some more]

Naruto - [what is going on where is Kakashi]

[He jumps down closer to Obito's direction]

Naruto - OI, WHERE IS KAKASHI !!

Sasuke - [I see, thats where he...]

[Minato, [while with the kage], turns his to Naruto direction]

Minato - [Kakashi?...he is alive?]

Remembers learning of Kakashi's passing away during the pain invasion


Naruto - I ASKED YOU WHERE IS KAKASHI SENSEI !!!

Madara - He can't hear you any more boy

Naruto - .....

Madara - It's time to stop playing and begin the real dance

[Madara concentrates further and the Blackness shrowding Obito increaseS]

Obito - GHWAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRH !!!

[Obito coughs up blood]

Naruto - What...But he's your....what are you d-

Madara - Im taking over his Body

And i will revive myself using him

Sasuke - .......

Madara - I will become the host for the Juubi and end this world

Kurama - [Naruto]

Naruto - [! Kurama, it's not the time i ha..]

Kurama - [Idiot, Listen]

Naruto - [..I have to find Kakashi]

Kurama - [Naruto, the Juubi is almost complete we have to think logically, FOCUS, if we don't think of a plan to stop it, we are all dead]

Naruto - [......If he dies then Kakashi]


Naruto - You don't even care for your own...

Madara - Tsk, your a child

You don't understand

Nothing matters

not Obito,[Panel of Obito on the floor]

Minato - [!]

not the Uchiha, [Panel of Sasuke]

not the Senju, [Panel of Tobirama and Hashirama both struggling with the Juubi but Hashirama is also focusing on Madara]

Not This Shinobi world [Panel of the Chaotic Battlefield]

Hashirama - [Madara you really have...]

Madara - All that matters is the end of all this


[the Juubi shatters through all restraints]

Juubi - Roooaoaaaaaaaarrrrrrr


[Madara Temporary loses focus on Obito due to the shock of the Juubi]


Tobirama - IT'S BROKEN THROUGH !!

Sarutobi - I cannot contain this !!

Hashirama - THATS TOO MUCH POWER !!


[The Juubi releases a blast from the release of Chakra]

[The Hokage's are sent flying from the showckwaves]


[Hashirama extends a branch that catches Tobirama and plants a branch into the ground and uses the momentum both him and his brother on the rocks adjacent to Naruto]


[Minato while flying back throws a shuriken at Sarutobi who is also being blown away, and a shuriken at Naruto's direction]

[He catches the Shuriken next to Sarutobi , and grabs Sarutobi]

[He then uses the momentum to spin and vanishes and catches the second Shuriken behind Naruto and lands with Sarutobi]


Sarutobi - Thank you Minato

[Minato stands then stares at Obito]

[Obito, wounded,blood pouring from his body and mouth, is struggling to stand and pulling against the rods sticking out of him]

[He catches eye contact with Minato, ]

Obito - .....

Minato - It really is Obito....[what happened to him]

Madara - Hmph

You ought to thank Hashirama boy

Those cells are keeping you alive for now

[Obito stares down Madara]
[Obito remembers Madara vowing that Obito would return and thank him]

Madara - BUT....

[Madara raises his hands for seals]

[Obito is panting]
[Panel Rin , Minato and Kakashi]


[Obito's Sharingan begins to swirl]


Madara - What!..

[A Susanoo arrow pierces Madara from behind]

[Madara drops down and looks behind him and sees Sasuke]

[He begins regenerating, and fires a sword from his Susaano at Sasuke]

[Sasuke avoids the sword and lands near the group]

Madara - Fool, you are delaying the inevitable


[Obito begins to strain his Kamui]

Obito- nnnnnnnnaaaaaggghhrrrrrrhhhhhh

[Suddenly Kakashi is brought in and lands infront of Obito]

Everyone - !!!

[Kakashi seems unconcious and isn't moving]


Naruto - Kakashi Sensei !!!

[Naruto attempts to flash down to Kakashi, however is stopped by Minato]

Minato - Wait Naruto


Obito - This world

My Life....

[Obito begins to slowly perform hand seals]

Madara - Damn you Obito

[Madara fires a Susaano sword at Obito, which is re-directed by Hashirama]

[Hashirama Lands closer to Madara]

Hashirama - Your fight is with me now


[Obito looks down at Kakashi]

Obito - .......

[Obito tears up, then smirks]

Obito - sorry Idiot Kakashi, looks like i will go to see Rin first

[Obito performs the final handseal]


Madara - Obitoooooo !!!

Obito - Rinne Tensei no Jutsu!
Unexpected Meeting
Madara's Cruelty !!
PAGE ONE

[Obito struggles to control his body as he put both his hands together in handseal preapring Rinne Tensei]
SFX: PUT !, CLAPS ! CONNECT ! FORMS !
[Blackness keep overflowing Obito's entire body as his right side is completly blacked ]
SFX: OVERFLOWS !
[Obito try to withstand Madara's will in form of blackness]
Obito(struggles to repel Madara's will): ARGHH !
[Small breeze blows around Brushing through Obito's hairs]
SFX: WIND ! MOVES ! BLOWS!
[Madara is shown sitting as he keep handseal with malicious look in his eyes]
SFX: GLARE !
Madara: It's no use trying to withstand my will Obito(serious look) Heaven Control: Takeover !
PAGE TWO

[Shots of Edo Hokages are shown with different face expressionos as they are stuck to keep chakra barrier intact]
Minato(uneasy look): *That figure... (spot entire Obito's figure from back's profile) seems familliar*
Hiruzen(distracted): *It can't be...(glance at Uchiha Symbol on Obito's cloak)*
Tobirama(confused): *Another Uchiha ?!*
Hashirama: *(spot at Uchiha symbol on Obito's cloak)Uchiha(moves his eyes and lock at Madara) What are trying to reach, Madara...*
[Cracks appear under Obito's feet and spread in all directions in 3 meters radius]
SFX: CRACK CRACK CRUMBLE !
Obito(begin to loose to Madara's will): *Cursed Madara(glance at Madara emotionless face) ?! (Spot new four people) All Hokage ?!*(Minato, Hiruzen, Hashirama and Tobirama are shown)
Obito(turns his face to Edo Hokages): Edo Tensei..., but how, who ?! How can you be there, Minato-sensei ?! (focus back on fighting against Madara's will)ARGHH !
PAGE THREE

Minato(recognizes Obito as he is totally shocked): We were summoned by Orochimaru via Edo Tensei but... You can't be..., Obito ?!
Hiruzen(schocked): It may seems impossible, but there is no doubt, that is Obito...
Obito(turns back to Edo hokages): That me, Minato-sensei and Lord Hiruzen(send them evil smirk)
Tobirama, Hashirama(in unison totally clueless): Who is he ?!, (turns to Minato and Hiruzen)Do you know him ?!
[Wind moves Madara's hair at side]
SFX: WIND ! BLOWS !, MOVES !
Madara: oh... What a beautifull reunion we have here(smirks) *I let them talks for now*
[Back to Edo Hokages]
Minato(with sad but serious look): He was my student, Great Shinobi of Hidden leaves village...(questioned facial expression)
PAGE FOUR

Hiruzen(pridefull look with sadness): That right, He was even called as The great Hero of Hidden leaves village among very few of our shinobi.
Hashirama: Then why is he appearing from nowhere now ?!
Tobirama: He is ally of Madara, isn't he ?!
Minato: I don't know even if he is, but(flashback to young Kakashi talking about Obito's death) He certainly died at Kanabi bridge battle against Hidden rock shinobi while saving his teammate(image of Rin) *Then why*
Minato(loud in high tone): How can you be here alive, What did happen to you and Why are you here, answer me Obito ?!
[Obito's body is shown with blackness almost all around his body ]
[ Left hand and left leg's Obito without blackness]
[Obito's struggling face expression changes to anger ]
Obito: you don't need to know anything, (screams)sensei !, but fine I will(get interrupted) ?!
PAGE FIVE

[Blackness keep overflowing Obito's body as he loose control over his body slowly]
[Madara's shown focused on handseal with his eyes closed ]
Madara(calm and firmly): He didn't die, he was found and saved by me.
Everyone: ?!
Madara(don't bother with suprised face expressions of Edo Hokages and other people): He was entrusted with my so called real plan to carry on with it. He has found criminal organization and gathered all tailed beasts to ressurect Juubi. That should be enough for you, I don't feel like need to go into details(smirks)
Everyone: ?!
Minato(lower his head then raise it with sorrow look): I see..., But Why didn't you come back to village, Obito ?!
[Obito's is shown with his face looking forward with his back turned to Edo Hokages]
Minato(trying to be calm and serious): Obito !
PAGE SIX

[Evil laugh begin to spread around battlefield as Obito's upper torso is shown shaking ]
SFX: HAHAHAHAHAH !
Obito: HAHAHAHAHA(slowly moves his face to meet Minato's eyes with his right's eye): You don't seem to understand how much I changed, Do you sensei ?!(smirks)
Minato(surpised): What do you mean, Obito ?!
Hashirama: He seems to be full of my cells in his body, be carefull Fourth !
Obito(looking at different face expression of Hokages): Very well, do you remember kyuubi attack on Konoha, Sensei(smirks)
Minato: No..., It can' be...
Hiruzen: I don't like the direction it is leading...
Obito(calm and firmly): Yes, The Masked man was me !(serious)
Everyone: ?!
PAGE SEVEN

Minato: No... I could suspect anyone besides you, Obito.... why ?!
Hiruzen: You was great Shinobi of hidden leaves village, why could you ?!
Obito(serious): leave you ?! I was left by you first changed so much ?! I grown up simply
Hiruzen: Grown up, just it ! There have to be more then that, stop hidding it Obito !
Obito(calm and serious): Very well....(pauses) It was because you left me in certain death, let Rin die. However I don't have any grudge against you. I have to destroy current World and create new !
Edo Hokages: ?!
[In the background Alliance Shinobi is shown fighting against Juubi's clones]
Obito: *It seems Madara may loose his focus...(look at Juubi) it will reach final form soon... I will talk a little more to deceive Madara* Look at Alliance Army, they are keep fighting against Juubi to save this worthless World, I am tired of that...*I need to find opening in Madara's doings*
PAGE EIGHT

Madara(serious and calm): Enough of talking, it is about time for me to act (strengthen his handseal)
Obito: ?! (loose control over his body) *Damn you Madara* ARGH !!! Ying Yang release: Recreation of body !
[Crossover of Madara's both Rinnengan glowing in purple color and Obito's Rinnengan glowing in purple color ]
Edo Hokages: ?!
[Obito's body is enveloped by very bright light then shot off in Madara Direction in form of stream]
SFX: GLOWS ! ENVELOPES ! GLOWS ! BLIND !
Edo Hokages(shout): Everyone, focus your attack at Madara !
[Many shinobi are shown charging straight at Madara]
[Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura are shown charing at Madara on their respective summons]
[Juubi's clones are shown chasing after Alliance Shinobi]
PAGE NINE

Naruto: We have to stop Madara ?! (feel something following after them, look behind himself, spot Juubi's clones) Look out, Juubi's clones are following after us !
Naruto: Wind release: Rasen Shuriken !(throws large Rasen Shuriken at Incomming Juubi)
Sasuke(serious with evil look): I will deal with them
[Sasuke's both eyes are shown bleeding as he focus his eyesight at Juubi's clones as some of them are overhelmed by many micro wind needles hitting them all over again]
Sasuke: Amaterasu !
[Black flames appear on Juubi's clones covering them completly]
SFX: BURN BURN BURN !
[Some Juubi clones are shown keep chasing out of black flames range]
Sakura: Leave them to me, Sasuke !
Sasuke: Hmpf !
[Sakura jumps down and slams her heel with great force in ground creating powerfull shockwave incomming at Juubi's clones]
SFX: SLAMS !, CRACK ! DESTROY, QUAKE !
PAGE TEN

[Some of alliance shinobi army is attacked by fast moving Juubi's clones]
SFX: PIERCE !, SLAMS !, HIT !
[Alliance Shinobi Army is shown stopping their's movement and fight againt incomming Juubi's clones]
Random Shinobi: GUAH! (trying to kick Juubi's clone)
Random Shinobi 2: Fire release: Fire streams !
Random Shinobi3: Wind release: sphere of vacuum !
[Juubi clones are shown hit by quite strong flaming sphere which is empowered by wind]
SFX: HIT ! CUT ! BURN ! SPREAD ! BLOWS ! BURN !
[Madara is shown smirking mallicously at Edo Hokages as stream of light disspear around him]
[Bones begin to forms laying on ground as some flesh creates around bones]
Madara: There is nothing you can do stop me !
[Edo Hokages shocked facial expression are shown]
PAGE ELEVEN

Edo hokages: Cursed Juubi's clones !
Hiruzen: We have to do something !
Tobirama: But we can't move or Juubi will be released and attack us !(glance at Hashirama)
Hashirama: Unfortunetly my clones are done as well and I can't disrupt my chakra now by doing more clones as Juubi is increasing in power by each second passed...
Minato: There is only one way...
[All Edo Hokages are shown looking at Minato clueless]
PAGE TWELVE

Minato: Obito ! Let's forget about Past and move on.
[Obito is shown struggling to don't let himself be under complete control.]
Obito: ?!
Minato: There is still hope for you, fight against Madara's will !
[Bones covered by flesh and muscles begin to forms in human shape]
SFX: FORMS ! FORMS ! FORMS !
Obito: I won't loose to Madara, but not for you...
Minato: Obito... There is still time... you could (get interrupted)
Obito: Return to Konoha, really ?! After I killed many shinobi including Konoha ones, after leading Kyuubi attack. Could you really forgive me and let stay in Konoha, answer me Minato Sensei !
Minato(lower his head): ....?!
Obito(spit salivia): Tsk... As I thought, You can't... noone ca...(get interrupted)
PAGE THIRTEEN

Minato: I... forgive you, Obito...(pauses)
Obito(totally schocked face): ?!
[Minato is shown serious while tears are flowing from his eyes]
Minato: I can't speak for everyone but...(struggle to speak)I will forgive you my death, My wife's death...
Obito(totally schocked): ?! Why(calmly and quiet voice)
Minato: Naruto could forgive Pain in the end then like son as father I will do that...
Obito: ...
Minato: To stop cycle of hate in this world which destroy this great world and blind us with hate.
Obito: ?! (flashback of himself talking with Minato)
PAGE FOURTEEN

FLASHBACK
[young Obito finds Minato sitting on rock with worried look]
Obito: Minato- Sensei, are you ok ?!
Minato: ?! Yes, of course (smiles)
Obito: I really want to help you, sensei(unconvinced by Minato's explanation)
Minato: Really(smiles) Tell me How could you create everlasting peace in this world, Obito
Obito: Hmm... I will become Hokage and stop cycle of hate in this world which destroy this great world and blind us with hate !(honestly smiles with honest look in his eyes)
Minato: ?! That it, let's go to Kakashi and Rin, Kakashi may bore Rin with emotionless look
Obito: ok, Sensei !
[They are comming together while laughing]
/FLASHBACK
PAGE FIFTEEN

Obito: ..., Sensei...
[The body forming on ground can be finally recognized as exact copy of Edo Madara with clothes on]
[Back to Madara ]
Madara(smirks): About time...
[Obito weaves through few handseals, Rinnengan glows very strongly in purple color]
Obito: Gedo Rinne Tensei ! *so this is my end...*
Obito: I am sorry..., Minato-sensei (Last happy memories as Team of Minato flashes before his eyes) I am.. truelly sorry...
[Obito's body fall down on ground with tears tear flows from his eye]
[Stream of Light shoot off in air then fly at Madara hitting him ]
SFX: BLAZE ! GLOW !
PAGE SIXTEEN

Minato: ?!
[Minato's special Kunai is shown glowing]
Hiruzen: that singnal !
Minato: I know ! Reverse Flying Thunder God !
[Suddenly Orochimaru, Karin, Suigetsu and 5 Kages appear around Minato]
Orochimaru(looks around): so that is Juubi !(spot huge monster) ?!(moves his eyes to bright light which begin to fade away slowly) That my chance !
[Orochimaru pull out scroll then uneveils it's fast]
Orochimaru: Summoning no Jutsu !
[Kabuto's unconcionous body appear at ground ]
Orochimaru(claps both his arms): Forbidden technique: Temporary Life Transfer !
[Black markings appear on ground comming from kabuto's body to Obito's body which looses life force]
PAGE SEVENTEEN

[Madara's soul is shown ascending from Edo Madara's body as it slowly dissolves into gathering of dust]
[Madara's soul is shown descending into Madara's real body laying on ground.]
[Back to Orochimaru, Orochimaru waves through some handseals as everyone is blinded by green light comming from Madara's real body]
Orochimaru: Forbidden technique: Transfer of soul !
[Obito's body fall on ground as Orochimaru in snake shape comes into Obito mouth ]
Obito/Orochimaru: Transfer Succes !
PAGE EIGHTEEN

[Bright light fade away completly letting everyone to see again]
[Evil laugh is heard comming behind smokescreen]
SFX: STEP STEP STEP STEP !
Everyone: ?!
[ Smokescreen fade away completly revealing Madara ! ]
Madara: It is great feeling to be alive again ! (evil laugh)
[Evil laugh is heard around as it is reflecting from surroundings]
SFX: ECHO EFFECT !

Madara is alive again !
What will happen now !
[END]
Obito's Fate! {By VJ87G}
Obito notices that his half was turning black and rods was sticking out. Madara was forcing Obito to do the Rinne Tensei.

Obito: Aaah! What going on?! What's happening to my body?!
Madara: (coldly) It was seen that I don't need you anymore. I got other plans.
Obito: What?! But we agreed on creating a new world where I can see Rin, again! That there will be no more deaths, or heroes, and no hope.
Madara: My, how the foolish can easily be deceived. I didn't agree on what we said. Although, there is no hope or heroes. I wanted to create the "Infinite Tsukuyomi" for my own purposes.
Obito: ?!
Madara: You see I wanted to be the Ten-tails Jinchuuriki so I can perform the jutsu.

Naruto: ?!
Sasuke: ?
Sakura: ?

Madara: (points at Sasuke) You, young Uchiha, are the last of the Uchiha clan. But not for long. You see, Obito was the one who lied to you and he killed your clan.

Sasuke: (shocked) ?!?!

Madara: But I wanted the clan's eyes for my own.

Sasuke: So you saying that this Obito was the one who attacked the village, used my brother to kill the clan, and start a war? (EMS activated) CAUSE OF YOU?!?!

Naruto: ?!
Sakura: ?!
Konoha 11: !! ?!
Edo Kages: ?!
Madara: (very coldly) Yes.

Sasuke gritted his teeth with anger. He shed tears while his eyes. Naruto,, Sakura and Konoha 11 looking at Sasuke.

Sasuke: I don't know who's the real Uchiha traitor around here. But just like Obito Uchiha used me, you used him!!
I know who my real enemy is, and that you!

Madara: Now, now, Young Uchiha... you do realized that I want your eyes, as well.

Sasuke charges at Madara. But Obito stopped him.
Obito: Sasuke, it seen you...
Sasuke: You! You're Tobi...Obito! Why did you do all of this?! WHY DID YOU MAKE ME AN ENEMY TO EVERYONE?! YOU ALSO TO BE TO BLAME!! FOR EVERYTHING YOU DONE TO ME!! AND MY BROTHER!!

The alliance murmurs with questions.
Alliance member: So what he saying that Obito uses Sasuke? I thought Sasuke was our enemy.
Alliance member: But why will a Uchiha betrays their own?
Alliance member: So this...Obito used Sasuke to attack the kages. But why would he...?
Alliance member: But then that means...that Sasuke Uchiha isn't the real enemy... but Obito and Madara?


Naruto: Sasuke, It's true that he was the one who attack the village, kill my parents and your clan, he used you and Itachi. He was the responsible, but Madara put him up to it.

Sasuke: ?!?!?!
Konoha 11: ?!?
Edo Kages: ?!
Ninja Alliance: !?!?!?

Sasuke: Madara... I don't know if this make amends, but I will make sure you won't be revived, even if it'll cost me my own life!!! (activating Chidori and charges at Madara)

Naruto: SASUKE, DON'T DO IT!!!

But Sasuke wasn't listening. He eyes, with EMS, filled with tears. Flashbacks of Sasuke's clan, and itachi. Falshbacks of him on Team 7, Orochimaru, Suigetsu Karin and Juugo.

Sakura: (tears in her eyes) SASUKE-KUN, NOOO!!!!!!!

Kohoha 11, shocked and upset to hear that Sasuke was being used all this time, by Obito and Madara and more shocked to see Sasuke charged at Madara, by himself.

Juugo: I got stopped Sasuke before he gets killed by this Madara.

A shadow appears in front of Sasuke.
Sasuke: ???

(sound of Stabbing)

Sasuke saw Obito got impaled by him.

Obito: My fate...is seal.

Naruto, Sakura, Konoha 11, Juugo, Edo Kages and the alliance with shock looks in their faces.

Sasuke also was shocked. He pulled his hand out and pull back when Madara stepped in. Sasuke saw Madara grab Obito with Susann'o.

Sasuke: (thinking) that bastard. Even he got Susann'o.
Aoda: Sasuke-sama!!
Sasuke: I'm fine. (hopped on Aoda)

Madara: even if you alive or dead, you will perform Rinne Tensei. And I will be the Ten-tail Jinchuriki.
Close-up to Madara's face with a evil cold look.

End
ultimate battle
Obito is struggling to keep control of his body



Page 1

Obito : arghhhh ! you basterd . i won't let you control me .
Madara : stop struggling obito . it's time to use rinne tensei and revive me.
Obito :noooooh . i won't . (take his left hand away from his right hand)
Madara : no . you will obito . (thinks) bring your hands together and perform it now .
Minato : is it you obito ?
Naruto : (shouts) madara ! he's your partner . why are you doing this to him?
Obito : (Looks at minato then at naruto) minato-sensei (in pain)uwahhhhh .
Sasuke : let him die naruto . he is the one who made us suffer .
Naruto : but sasuke madara used him . just like obito used you and nagato .

Page 2
Sakura Thinks) that's so crual . how can he do that to his partner .
Shikamaru : why He attack him ?
Sai : sakura !
Hashirama : who's that?
Tobirama : another uhiha i thought they were sluaghtered by that itachi .
Sasuke : he is the one who helped itachi to kill my clan .
Sakura and sai: what ?(thinks) is that what happened .

page 3
Minato : why did you do that obito ?
Obito : i don't want to answer you sensei .....
minato thinks) it doesn't matter (says) it doesn't matter obito i will save you
Obito in more pain as madara taking control of him and shocked) but why i'm the one who killed your wife and one made everyone suffer .
Minato : No . this system is what made you .(turn to naruto) naruto come with me i need your help .
Naruto : yeah . dad !

Page 4
Sasuke little shock) did you call him dad ?
Naruto : yeah . sasuke can you take care madara for a while ?
Sasuke : (thinks) it does matter i can still beat you . naruto .(coldly) sure
Naruto : let's go save him dad .
Sakura : naruto you gonna save him . one make you suffer this much .
(In one panel)sasuke goes on susano'o (other panels) minato and naruto rushes to save obito)

Page 5
(in kamui demension)
Kakashi : (thinks) i must use kamui one more time but it will make me weaker.
what should i do . yeah . sakura could heal me and restore my chakra(swirls back)
(kakashi come back at battleground and fall to the ground)
Kakashi sees madara trying to take over obito's body) what happening here ?
(Sakura rushes toword kakashi)
Sakura : sensei . are you . ok .(Thinks)that wound and he's almost out of chakra(to katsuyu) heal him katsuyu-sama
Katsuyu : yes .(begins healing)

Page 6
Kakashi : sakura . what happening ?
Sakura : madara trying to take over his body and naruto and his dad trying to save him .
Kakashi shocked )sensei,naruto ! how can they forgive him . even he's was doing that because of rin .
Sakura : who is this rin you talking about and that guy ?
Kakashi : she is my and obito's team mate . he loved her before he died .
Sakura : died . how can he be alive then ?
Kakashi : madara must had saved him and i killed rin that's why he was doing it (sad look in his face) before he was l ike naruto .
sakura : you killed her why ?

Page 7

Kakashi looks at sakura and remembers rin )she was made into jinchuraki of 3tails .She gave her life to save village they were just like you and naruto . obito loved her so much . he can't forgive this world for killing her .
Sakura : (thinks) will naruto be like that if i die . (looks at naruto who trying to save obito) you understand him aren't you naruto ? (turns to shizune)shizune-senpai ! can you take care of kakashi-sensei . while i help naruto ?
Shizune and kakashi : (thinks) sakura ! you .
Sakura : naruto i will help you too .

Page 8

(naruto looks bihind while minato cuts rods that holds obito but they grow back)
OBito : (thinks) this girl is lot like rin .(looks at naruto)kakashi is right . you are lot like me .(says)sensei,naruto you can't save me just go . it's too late .
(madara and sasuke fighting with thier susanoo's)
Sasuke : i will beat you . you are disgrace to uhiha clan .
Madara : uhiha brat . youre strong as that nine-tails brat but in front of me youre nothing . shinra tensei
(as madara uses shinra tensei obito uses it as well on minato,naruto and sakura send four of them flying . minato diappear with naruto and sakura while juugo catches sasuke)
Minato : are you ok .(naruto and sakura nods)
Juugo : sasuke . are you hurt .
Sasuke : no . thanks juugo

Page 9

Minato : i'm sorry obito . i couldn't save you .
Obito give a painful smiles at minato) rinne tensei jutsu
(madara's body become alive)
Madara :at last .(looks at obito) thanks obito . before you die i must tell you something .i'm the one who did everything to that girl you loved
(Obito fall to the ground)
Kakashi angrily) youre the one who did that to rin .(stands) enough shizune
Shizune :kakashi-san
Kakashi : you gonna pay for what you done . madara .
Obito : madara ! you think i'll die easily (standsup)you will pay for what you have done .rinne tensei jutsu


Page 10

(king of hell appears and begins sending souls out)
Obito : i'll rewrite what i done in this war .
Kakashi : obito you ?
Obito : Kakashi .you're right about one thing . you said i'll die .i live
like trash and die like trash and protect naruto he is different than
me . there's another gift for you other rinnegan eye of nagato use it for good .
(Madara stabs obito with a chakra rod)
Madara : you will be used against them . even they be revived i'll kill them again .that gift wouldn't'enough to stop me 64 seal of gedo
(juubi disappears from the barrier and madara's rinnegan eyes becomes red with nine tomoes)
Madara : i'm a real god now . no one can stop me . i'll rule the world and bring order to the world .

Page 11

(scene changes)
karin thinks) that chakra i feel is imcompareble . orichimaru-sama
Orichimaru scary look in his face)i feel it too . this gonna be bad .
Suigetsu thinks) i havn't seen orichimaru this afraid .
Orichimaru : let's hurry .
(scene changes to kages)
Tsunade : this do you guys feel it too ?
Mei : what is It .
gaara : It's coming from 1 o'clock direction .
Onoki : it's madara .
(Katsuyu clone on tsunade's shoulder)
Katsuyu : yes . madara killed masked man and become the jinchuraki of ten -tails

Page 12

A : what did you ? then it's end for us .
Tsunade : my grandfather is there . if we join them we still can save world .
All together : let's go .
(orichmaru with karin and suigetsu arrive where madara is)
Orichimaru : so your are madara ?
Madara : who are you i feel similarity to one who summoned me .
Orichimaru : i'm his teacher .
Madara : so what you gonna do join me ?
Orichimaru : i'm not interested in this war or your plan but i'm gonna fight
Along with alliance .

Page 13

Madara : i'm uhiha madara . you dare to defy me .
Orichimaru : kuku . this will be interesting .
Suigetsu : (melts)
Karin : (shake in fear how demonic madara's chakra is and thinks) how can someone be that evil . it's more worser than(shouts) sasuke-kun
sasuke : what is it karin .
Karin : he...he's pure evil .
Naruto : sasuke . we have to stop madara no matter what .
Madara : not so fast .
(obito stands up )
Obito : you gonna fight me .


Page 14

Naruto : how can he survived that .
Kakashi and minato : no . naruto ! madara controlling his dead body .
Naruto : huh . it's just like pain nagato did it .
Sasuke : naruto . i'll take care of him .
Naruto and sakura : no we are coming too .
Kakashi : i'm coming too .
Minato : we hokage will help 1st to fight madara .
Madara : how can you possibly defeat me . i'm immortel .


Page 15

Tobirama : you have been revived and you can die now .
Madara : hm .
Hashirama : you been haste . i have never seen you that haste .
Minato : we can kill you now .
Hiruzan : everyone focus on madara .
Alliance : yeah .
Madara madly smiles) hahahah . you can kill me how can you get close to me

Page 16

Hashirama : madara i'm coming .
Madara : come hashirama . shinra tensei .
(hashirama gets push away but use a wood branch to hold to the ground)
Hashirama : (thinks)what power
Madara : why hashirama afraid of me .
Hashirama : not at all . you have become very strong But
(releases lot of his chakra and ground begins to tremble)
Madara : your are strong as ever .

Page 17

(tsunade and kages come closer to the battlefield)
A : (he feels his body shaking) what is this
Onoki : (thinks) it's 1st hokage .
Gaara thinks) how terrifying chakra
Mei : (sweat appear on her head)
Tsunade : it's probably My grandfather (thinks and smiles) old man you're always like this
Katsuyu clone : your right tsunade-sama . he's fighting madara but madara looks like isn't using that much of strength .

Page 18

Naruto : (thinks)what a power 1st is realising .
Sasuke thinks) he used little power there . what power
Sakura : (Thinks) what a power . he's many times stonger than yamato .
Naruto : (feels some chakra closing in and smiles) heh
Sakura : why do you smiling . naruto !
Naruto : granny tsunade and others are coming
Sakura : tsunade-sama is coming .
(tsunade and others arrive in the battlefield)
(chapter ends with hashirama looking behind to see his grand daughter)
The end .
Obito's Defiance
[Obito is shown holding the seal and yelling in pain as the black matter spreads throughout the right side of his body. Madara can feel his power overcoming him. Violet flames ignite in front of Obito, signaling the summoning of the King of Hell. Everyone stares at it and the shinobi from Konohagakure seem to remember it.]

Obito: "MADAAAARAAAAA!!!!! You treacherous bastard!!! You planned this from the beginning!?"

Madara: "Sometimes sacrifices must be made in order for things to work out accordingly. You should know that Obito..."

Hashirama: 'Madara, you monster! You used him like this!?'

[Obito drops to his knees and coughs out blood, shifting his gaze to the Juubi. The Hokage look on and continue to hold the barrier up but Minato is puzzled. He cannot believe that his former student was the man in the mask all along]

Minato: "Obito!? But why!? Why would you do this!?"

Hiruzen: "Obito Uchiha? That boy was thought to have to died!"

Tobirama: "The Uchiha working along to bring chaos to the shinobi world! Typical!"

Hashirama: "Silence brother!"

Madara: "Enough of this chitter-chatter! The time has come!"

[Madara channels his chakra through the rods and forces Obito to switch into the final seal. The Juubi then suddenly roars, calling it's spawns to it's body. Where a foul and dark chakra envelops it.]

Hashirama: "No! It's entering it's final form! Stop it all cost!"

[The Hashirama clones hold seals and the gates holding down the Juubi grow larger. Tobirama strikes a look at a group of watching shinobi.]

Tobirama: "Do not stand there! Take this Obito out before he completes the jutsu!"

Obito: "AAAAAAGRRRRRRRRRH!!!!!"

[The shinobi take in the command and rush towards Obito with weapons drawn. Madara, however, intercepts the path and cuts them down with Susano'o, protecting Obito.]

Madara: "No one will touch him...."

Onoki: "Wrong Madara!"

[Onoki, the four other Kage, Orochimaru, Karin, and Suigetsu stand atop a massive sand platform. Onoki is charing up a Jinton attack and fires it at Obito. Madara acts quickly and shoves Obito back, jumping away as well where he is met by a wave of sand. Madara's Susano'o slashes the wave and collapses it.]

Orochimaru: "So Obito was the one behind this? And the Juubi is going final form? Interesting timing."

Suigetsu: "Interesting?? We're screwed!! We have to get out of here!"

Karin: "For the first time I actually agree with you!"

Madara: "So you are back?"

A: "Back to defeat you Madara!"

Tsunade: "So Orochimaru was right. The Juubi is here and it looks to be transforming...We have to hurry!"

Madara: "Hmph. Pointless. Your fate has already been decided."

[Obito struggles and is almost forming the last seal. He then has a memory of Rin again. What this world is. What everyone has done to make this world a hell. The fact that Madara would do this to him just to get what he wants. The black matter begins to shrink slowly as Obito's will begins to overpower Madara's.]

Madara: "Hmmm? So you are fighting back?"

Obito: "This world....I'm tired of it!!! I will not die here now!!!!!!"

[A massive explosion occurs within the barrier, shattering it from the force. The summonings are sent flying back with team 7. Sai holds onto Sakura to cushion her landing. Naruto is sent rolling along the ground. Sasuke lamds on his feet, the Susano'o activated in it's latest stage to protect him from the blast.]

Sasuke: "......"

[From the smoke emerges the most sinister being to exist. The massive ten tails lashing about and creating tornadoes. It gazes at the alliamce and grins, showing the set of sharpened teeth.]

Juubi: "Humans.....How sickening.."

Kurama: "Damnit! It reached the last stage!"

Madara: "Obito!!"

[Obito chuckles and forms a seal. With the last bit of energy he has he uses Kamui to transport himself closer to the beast. With his left hand he rips the top piece of his garment off, revealing Kanji markings on his stomach. It's a seal! Madara's eyes widen]

Obito: "Hahaha!!!! I won't let you stop me from bringing Rin back!!!!!"

[The seal rotates and opens into a dark hole, beginning to suck the Juubi into Obito. The Juubi in a natter of seconds is transported and sealed into him, resulting in the closing of the seal.]

Obito: "AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGH!!!!!!"

[Obito's covered in the dark chakra and releases a shockwave of power! His wound begins to close. He is the Jinchuuriki!!]

Minato: "Obito..."

Obito: "Prepare yourselves...."

[END]
Rejuvenated [by Amarusboobs]
The Manga starts with Obito on the ground, crouching over. Blood is pouring out of the hole in his chest. He is coughing out blood.


Obito: GAH! Damn you Kakashi…

[Madara’s Cells start to take over his body]

Obito Thinking to himself: Madara must be controlling me. I do not have my free will!

[Obito Forms a Ram Seal, then a Snake seal]

Obito thinking to himself: No! I don’t want to die this way!

Obito: Rinne Tensei!

[The King of Hell Appears]

Madara with Rape Face: YES! YES!

Naruto thinking to himself: I’ve seen this before, when Nagato revived Konoha, what is he planning to do… Wait!!

[The Mouth of the King of Hell Opens, A souls comes racing out]

[The soul hits Madara, he is suddenly rejuvenated]

Madara: Finally, it has been to long… fight me Hashirama

Hashirama: I should have seen through this. He would not just sit there and mope around for no reason…

Tobirama: He is sinister indeed, if we don't stop him he will beceome jinchuriki of the juubi, he will have unbelievable power... it is a nightmare...


[Kakashi comes out of the Kamui realm, he is worn out, and his stamina is low]

Kakashi Breathing heavily: Where… is… Obito…

Naruto: He is over there, he seems to be on the brink of dying…

Kakashi thinking to himself: Something in me still wanted to save him… but I guess it can’t be helped…


Madara: Kuchiyose no Jutsu

[The Juubi is summoned outside of the Barrier]

Tobirama: Damn!!

Hiruzen: Are you serious?!?

Madara smirks: Damn fodders, do you really think you will be even more of a challenge then those other Kages. You are even more fodder then they are!!!!

[The Gokage appear]

Onoki: Haha, that was only round 1!

A: Haha, Yellow Flash, we meet again!

Minato: Haha, even though we left on bad terms, it is good to see you again, and it’s also good to see that you are allied with Konoha…

Tsunade: Yea haha, we are gonna kick your…

[Tsunade freezes]

Tsunade: Grandfather, Uncle??

Hashirama smirks: You have grown into a fine woman Tsunade.

Tobirama: Indeed, but we need to focus on this battle.

Tsunade: I understand

[A manga panel is show with all the Kage standing next to each other in battle stance]


Obito: Shit... looks like this is it for me…

[Naruto is a far way away from Obito, he is staring at Obito, he is laying on the battlefield on his back, He is coughing out blood]

Juubi clone: Aaaaaarrrgghh

[Naruto dodges the attack, he uses his strength to punch it towards other clones, knocking some down]

Naruto thinking to himself: Damn this good nature of mine, something makes me want to save even scum like himself…

[Naruto rushes over in Obito’s direction]

Sasuke: Shit Naruto, where are you going now!?!

Kakashi: Wow, his ninja way doesn't fail him even now...
New Sage of the Six Paths
(Chapter starts with Obito being taken over and forced to make the hand sign.)

Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!

Naruto: What's going on? Where's Kakashi Sensei?

(Kakashi warps out to the real world.)

Sakura: Sensei! (She runs over to Kakashi and starts healing him.)

Kakashisees Minato and Sasuke) Sensei and... Sasuke?

Sakura: Don't worry. They are on our side.

Kakashi: Wow.

Minato: Obito? Is that you?!

Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Sen-sei?

Minato: Obito!!! (Minato remembers how the masked man 16 years ago used the same swirling space time jutsu.) (To himself: Could that possibly have been Obito?)

Hashirama: Who is this person 4th?

Minato: He was my student long ago, but he supposedly died in a war. I don't know how he stands before us now.

Naruto: Dad, he's no longer the person you once knew. Obito is on Madara's side!

Minato: What!!!!!!!!? (Thinking: So that was Obito 16 years ago. But, why?)

Hashirama: If he's on Madara's side then...(looks at Madara) Madara what are you doing to him?

Madara: (shouts) I will live again Hashirama!!!!! Obito was and is simply my pawn! I only have one use for him now, and that is to have him resurrect me! In a few moments, I will come back to life! Obito will then die.

Minato: !!!!!!!!

Hashirama: Madara, how could you do such a thing to your partner!!!?

Madara: You're too soft Hashirama!


Random ninjas:Come back to life? How is that possible?

Naruto: (Remembers the conversation that Madara and Obito had when Madara first got to this battlefield. He remembers how they stated that Nagato was supposed to use rinne tensei to revive Madara.) Crap!! Everyone, we have to kill Obito before he gets completely taken over by that black stuff! If we don't, he'll revive Madara with the power of the rinnegan! Charrrrrrrrge!!!!!!!

(All the shinobi charge at Obito who is about 60% taken over.)

Madara: Not on my watch!

(Madara jumps down in front of Obito, forms his normal susanoo, swings a susanoo sword and chops up a lot of ninjas.)

Sasuke: Naruto, I'll handle Madara!

(Sasuke goes into his full susanoo and charges at Madara with an amaterasu sword in one hand, his normal sword in another hand, the shield that can function as a bow in another hand, and the orb of black flames in the last hand. The 2 susanoos clash with their swords continuously. One of Madara's susanoo's empty hands then tries to punch Sasuke's susanoo in the stomach, but Sasuke blocks the punch with his shield. This action however, left the head of Sasuke's susanoo unguarded. With Madara's susanoo's other empty hand, it punched Sasuke's susanoo in the face. This sent Sasuke and his susanoo flying backwards.)

Naruto and Sakura: Sasuke!

Sasuke: I'm not done yet! Blaze release: Kagutschi susanoo!

(Sasuke fires 2 amaterasu arrows at Madara. Madara blocks them with his 2 susanoo swords, but both swords break and a huge amaterasu explosion ensues. Some of the shinobi even get burned. Madara and his susanoo go flying a considerable distance back. Ironically, they bump into Obito while flying backwards. This knocks Obito backwards just as the other shinobi were about to reach him. This does not really hurt Obito though, and therefore does not help the alliance. At this point in time, Obito is about 70% taken over.)

Naruto: Sasuke, don't attack our own troops! Dial it down!

Juubi: Roaaaaaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!!

(The ground starts shaking and rocks start rising. The barrier around the juubi starts faltering.)

Madara: Heh, just on time.

Kurama: (Thinking: This feeling, oh no!) Narutoooooooooo! The juubi is entering its final form!

Naruto: Crap!

(The shinobi start getting closer and closer to Obito, but then...)

Madara: Wood Style: Nativity of a world of trees!

Hashirama: He has my power!!!!

(Trees start growing out of the ground and stabbing many of the shinobi.)

Madara: And as for that little Uchiha brat, yasaka magatama!

(Madara throws about 20 magatama at Sasuke.)

Naruto: Sasuke!

(Naruto stretches out a big chakara arm to knock away the magatama. He knocks away 15 of them, but 5 of them hit Sasuke's susanoo. The magatama cause a massive explosion on contact. This damages Sasuke and destroys his susanoo and knocks Sasuke back even further. Sasuke coughs blood. At this point Obito is 80% overtaken. A tomoe gets added to the juubi's eye, so it now has 7 tomoe.)

Naruto: Madara, you'll pay for that!

(Naruto tries to punch Madara's susanoo in the face with a chakara arm, but 2 of Madara's susanoo arms grab Naruto's chakara arm, pull Naruto over to Madara's susanoo. The susanoo then punches Naruto in the face with one of its other free hands. This sends Naruto flying into Sasuke, thus hurting them both. Madara then has his susanoo grow legs in order to make his susanoo taller and have a better range with its sword swings. Madara chops up more shinobi.)

Hashirama: Darn! They're getting killed out there!

Naruto/Sasuke: Grrrrr! Gamakichi/Aoda (for Naruto and Sasuke respectively) lets go!

(Naruto, Sasuke and their summons charge at Madara with Naruto and Sasuke on top of their respective summons. Madara makes a wood clone clad in susanoo. One Madara slashes Gamakichi in the face and then kicks him away while Naruto jumps in the air and prepares a rasenshuriken. Meanwhile, the other Madara kicks Aoda in the chin and slices him in half while Sasuke jumps up and goes into susanoo. The Madaras then release susanoo so they can use rinnegan. Naruto throws his rasenshuriken and Sasuke throws enton yasaka magatama at the Madaras, but...)

Both Madaras: Shinra Tensei!!!!

(Naruto's and Sasuke's jutsus are dispersed and Naruto and Sasuke are repelled a far distance. They hit the ground with a hard thud. Obito is 90% overtaken at this point. The juubi gains an 8th tomoe.)

Kiba: Darn! Even Naruto and Sasuke are getting owned by this Madara. He's just too strong!

Shino: Shut up Kiba. Why you ask? Because you complain too much and are not even helping.

(Kiba is left speechless.)

Kurama: Naruto, I'm ready, but we must hurry!!

Naruto: Right. (Goes into bijuu mode) Everyone get away! I'll end this now! Bijuu-dama!!!!! (Thinking: Obito is almost completely covered. I can't let this go on any longer.)

(Naruto launches the bomb towards Obito as everyone else flees.)

Madara: Nice try, but...

(Madara and his clone jump in the way and absorb the bomb.)

Hashirama: Since when can he absorb chakara!!!!!!?

???: Since he awakened the rinnegan at the end of his life. He survived your battle grandpa!

Tobirama: That is...

(The current 5 kage as well as Orochimaru and the rest of Taka lands on the battlefield.)

Hashirama: Tsunade!!!!

Madara: (looks at Obito and then the juubi) So you kage are alive. Heh, no matter.

(Madara releases his wood clone and runs towards the juubi.)

Naruto: Where is he goi... (looks at Obito and sees that he is 100% overtaken) Noooooooooo! Quickly, everyone shoot your most powerful attacks at Madara!

Madara: Kuchiyose no jutsu! (The juubi disappears from the barrier and appears outside of it.)

Hashirama: What!

Kurama: This feeling.

Obito: Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Rinne Tensei no jutsu! (The king of Hell statue appears and launches the green light. Obito then falls and dies.)

(The army fires a barrage of jutsus and explosive kunai at Madara. Naruto even throws in continuous tailed beast bomb. This all results in a massive explosion that engulfs Madara. Even the edo hokages have to flee their positions. The smoke clears. Madara looks unfazed. His body no longer has cracks. The juubi is gone though.)

Kurama: We're done for.

Hashirama: Where is the juubi?

Madara: Heh heh heh. Why don't I show you where the juubi is instead?

(Suddenly, a dark menacing super sayian like aura explodes around Madara.[When picturing this aura just think about an ssj aura except make it black, large and put lightning around it.] The earth shakes and crumbles. Countries all over the world are suddenly reduced to rubble just due to the effects of the aura alone Some of the random shinobi just suddenly die due to simply being near Madara! Ten tails emerge from Madara's back.)

Madara: Tremble before the power of the new sage of the 6 paths!!!!! (He says as he turns completely into a now final form juubi with nine tomoe and the appearance it had when it was silhouetted.)

The Ultimate Nightmare Begins!
وَ السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ

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