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Posted by : a November 07, 2013

بِسْــــــــــــــــمِ اﷲِالرَّحْمَنِ اارَّحِيم
السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ

NARUTO CHAPTER 654 PREDICTION
Forgotten
The hole he thoughts he had filled...
PAGE ONE

[First scene shows Obito laying in the hole made in ground with his hand extended towards sky while dust fall down around]
Obito: Rin...
Obito(frown his forehead and closes his eyes): What should I do ? (clench his fitst)
[Obito get suddenly some flashbacks recalling in his mind]
[Flashback]
[Flashback of young Obito crouching down over ground holding Rin's dead corpse]
Obito: I see... I am in the hell !

Madara: The longer you live... The more you realize that reality is just made of pain, suffering and emptiness
[/Flashback]
Obito: That right, I can not stop now...(still keep his eyes closed with clenched fist)
PAGE TWO

[Naruto and Sasuke are shown dispeling Sussano's and Kurama's shroud around them]
Naruto: (spot tailed beasts being free) It worked ! We won ! (throws his arms towards sky in joy)
Sasuke: I knew that we could win (cold expression)
[Entire Alliance of Shinobi Army is shown enjoying their victory by smilling, jumping with hands up.]
A: We did it !
Onooki: Alright !
Tsunade: Great Job everyone (looks around while noding his head)
Mei: The war's end is close (smiles)
Gaara: Another step towards new future (keep grip on Shukaku's chakra)
PAGE THREE

Gai: Yosh !!!! (explode with his youth energy)
Rock Lee: We did it ! (follows after his master)
Ten ten: *For you Neji* (smiles)
Kiba: Now I can really become Hokage, can't I (cocky smirks while puting his finger close to his nose)
Shino: Do not fool yourself, Kiba. (emotionless look)
Hinata: (Looking at Kiba arguing against Shino ) Everything will return to normal *Thanks to you Naruto*(smiles)
Shikamaru: Great Work everyone ! (rise his hand in triumph's gesture)
Chouji: That right, Shikamaru
Ino: Our teamwork is the best (smiles)
PAGE FOUR

Sakura: This nightmare finally ends (smiles)
Darui: Finally I can rest (fall down slowly on rock sitting down.)
Kitsuchi: This is the end of this war (confident look with smile)
Shizune: Our World is saved (breath with relief)
Minato: We could not fail *Great work Naruto and everyone* (keep his smile)
Hiruzen: It was great to fight along rest of Shinobi World for once
Orochimaru: .... (emotionless expression with narrowed eyes) *So Obito is done... what will you do now Sasuke*
Tobirama: This guy is finished (smirks) *It looks like you were right my brother, the day people will understand each other is very close...*
PAGE FIVE

[Giant Perfect Sussano is shown clashing with Shin SuuSenjuu]
SFX: CLASH !
[Madara is shown inside Perfect Sussano's shroud]
Madara: ?!(spot tailed beasts free with no sign of Obito) *I was playing too much, shit !*
[Hashirama is shown standing on Shin SuuSenjuu's statue ]
Hashirama: ?! (spot tailed beasts free with no sign of Obito) *They really did it... together !*
[Perfect Sussano and ShinSuuSenjuu are shown both pushing each other away in opposite directions]
Madara: Tsk ! *Did I really fail with my plan ?!*(angry look)
Hashirama(look confident towards Madara): It looks like your student failed, only you are left for me to deal with and then peace will finally come.
Madara(focused as he closes his eyes): ?! *No... I still feel his chakra... he is alive but very weak...*
PAGE SIX

Hashirama: ?! (approaches Perfect Sussano with Madara inside) give up, Madara.
Madara(focused and serious expression as he opens his eyes): No, I am not done yet Hashirama.
[Perfect Sussano dissolves completly in thin air as Madara floating is shown]
Madara: It is now or never ! (forms handseal)
Hashirama: ?!
Madara: Animal path: Summoning technique !
[Smoke burst out as Many strange animals emerges out of it ]
Hashirama: *summoning animals... why even bother with that*
[Huge Shin Suu Senjuu's thousand arms are shown moving towards animals summoned with Rinnegan]
[Suddenly Animals scatter in different directions trying to get out of Thousand arms's range with some of them being hit and puffed in smoke while scream]
PAGE SEVEN

[Madara is shown avoiding terryfing thousand arms's incomming attack by flying up]
Madara: *Flying technique of deva path is not easy to control... so Ten tails chakra boost Rinnegan techniques I see* (extends his both arms) Asura Path: Cannon of destructions !
[powerfull beams of chakra shoot of from Madara's both hands connected with barrage of missles flying around it comming towards Shin Suu Senjuu arms]
Hashirama: Shit ! (Shin Suu Senjuu arms are hit by chakra blasts followed by missles)
[Huge explossion occurs around battlefield]
[Huge dust cloud forms covering upper part of Shin Suu Senuu completly.]
SFX: Cover !
[Madara is shown falling down on ground exhausted from chakra usage]
Madara: Damn... even as Edo Tensei I have my limit *But anyway my chakra regenerates so fast that I can use next technique just in next few seconds*
PAGE EIGHT

[Madara lands on ground then extends his one arms towards sky]
Madara: Now... Deva Path: Great Bansho Tenin ! (extends his one arm with opened palm towards sky ) *I have to distract Shinobi alliance with something and make them busy while I act*
[Dust clear up around Shin Suu Senjuu Statue. Almost all Wooden arms are shown broken completly]
SFX: Clear Up !
Hashirama: ?! Impossible ! He even managed to break wooden arms of statue *The Rinnegan is very powerfull indeed*
Hashirama: ?! (spot Rinnegan controlled animals approaching him from all sides) Wood release: Human hands !
[Giant massive hands made of wood are shown catching all Rinnegan controlled animals.]
SFX: Catch !
[Suddenly great disturbance can be feel in the sky as the clouds shake and get torn apart by something ]
SFX: Emerges !
PAGE NINE

[Giant shadow fall on ground at exhasuted Alliance Shinobi's army]
[Some people sense something odd and rise their heads towards sky.]
[Terrified look of exhausted Alliance Shinobi Army's faces is shown ]
Shinobi 1: Oh no !
Shinobi 2: Shit !
[Tailed beasts are shown looking around then at each other]
One tails: Hell Yeah ! I am free finally ! (screams)
Two tails: It looks like we are free
Three Tails: Nice to be out again
Four tails: So... he really did it (smiles)
Five tails: He proved his worth
Six tails: Yeah
Seven tails: huh
[Naruto and Sasuke tired and panting are shown on ground.]
Naruto: ?! (look towards sky as he feel something) Oh no ! this again (scared look)
Sasuke: ?! (rise his head towards sky) Shit ! (scared look)
PAGE TEN

One tails: Let's destroy something and wreck a havoc here, YEAH ! (crazy roar)
[All tailed beasts with Kurama and Gyuuki essenses are showng standing in One tails's way towards Naruto]
One tails: ?! (suprised look)
Two tails: I can't allow you to do that my sibiling
Four tails: He is reincarnation of you father and creator
One tails: (Recalls his meeting with Sage of six paths)Old man ?!
Five tails: He was the one who tried to save us and he did it.
One tails: ... *That child back then... he was old man all the times...*(widden his eyes)
Gaara: Not only him, I was your host back then but I will to free you if you are no against us (serious honest look)
One tails: ?! Even... Gaara... *It seems Humankind changed a lot exactly how our father foresaw it* Very well ?!
Four tails(: (sense something then look towards sky), Hurry up brother and sisters we have to stop this assault !
All tailed beasts: Yeah ! Let's do it
PAGE ELEVEN

[Huge couple of meteorites are shown passing through clouds and becoming visible to eyes ]
Naruto(try to stand up): Ugh !
Sasuke(rise to his knees): Damn ! *It seems new Sussano takes a lot of chakra from me...*
All tailed beasts: You don't need to do everything yourself Naruto, leave it to us (smiles)
Naruto: Thanks, guys (stand up while puffing)
Sasuke: ... (glares at tailed beasts)
[All tailed beasts are shown charging tailed beast bombs towards Sky]
SFX: Charge !
[Meanwhile Madara is shown flying towards Hashirama]
Madara: *It should work * (focused)
Hashirama: ?! (spot Madara incomming) (forms handseal)
Madara(extends both his arms with opened palms towards Shin SuuSenjuu Statue): I will show you my power ! (black rods emerges from Madara's opened palms) Deva Path: Great Shinra Tensei !
[Branches emerge out from Shin SuuSenjuu as they approaches Madara then suddenly get crushed as very bright light covers everthing]
SFX: Blind
Hashirama: ?! (cross his arms in front of his face as defence)
PAGE TWELVE

[Huge shockwave occur affecting entire battleground from impact of attack]
SFX: Schockwave !
[Dust clear up and Hashirama is shown unaffected with black rods impaled all around his body]
Hashirama: Huh (lower his arms carefully) *Is that all* ?! (feel something crumbles)
[Shin Suu Senjuu statue is shown deformed and very damaged as it begin o crumble]
SFX: Crumble !
[Shin Suu Senjuu statue completly break apart into pieces cause Hashirama to falling down ]
Hashirama: Impossible ! *My strongest technique* ?! (feel disturbance in his chakra) Ugh
Hashirama: (try to control himself) I am loosing control over my body (spot Rinnegan eyes behind him) What the ?!
[Hashirama's eyes flashes to Rinnegan]
SFX: Turns !
PAGE THIRTEEN

[Madara is shown with smirk on his face]
Madara: Finally it worked...
[Madara is shown dashing in fast speed in Obito's direction with Hashirama following him up.]
SFX: Dashes !
[Tailed beasts finish charging their huge tailed beast bombs as they aim them at incomming big meteorites.]
SFX: finish !
All Tailed beast: Full power Tailed beast bomb !
[Huge disturbance occurs in air as massive chakra filled black spheres are shoot off towards incomming meteorites]
SFX: Shoot off !
[Everyone try to get away and run]
[Meteorites clash with tailed beast bombs]
SFX: Explosion !
PAGE FOURTEEN

[Huge Eplosion occur at the sky shown from Obito's point of view]
Obito: Tsk..., I
[Flashback of young Obito holding Rin with his arms ]

Words reflecting from all sides: In a dream everything goes the way you want...
You can even make dead people come back to life...

Young Obito: I want to create the world of just that
Young Obito: I will...

Young Obito: I will create a world where you are alive !
Young Obito: I will change the fate of this world !

[/Flashback]
PAGE FIFTEEN

[Obito rise up on his feet as he glares at explosion in background]
Obito: I will finish what I have began long time ago -! (Get interrupted)
Obito(Blackness emerges on Obito's skin as it began taking over one of his half): ?! This again ! ARGHH !
[Blackness takes over completly half of his body then begin to flows at another half of Obito's body]
Obito: Shit ! (forms handseal) I refuse *Damn you Madara... I forgot completly about you*
[Madara is shown along with Hashirama controlled by black rods impaled all over his body]
Madara: I said it once, It is time for pay back, Obito ! (serious look)
Obito(turns his head back towards Madara while forming handseals): *Bastard !* ?! (spot Black Markings forming on madara's forehead and around his eyes as cracks disappear while Madara's body is enveloped bu light) *Sennin mode... how*
[Hashirama controlled body is shown with one black rod impared in Madara's revived body]
PAGE SIXTEEN

[Cracks begin to fade away complety peeling of his skin as Light around Madara's body begin to fade away]
Obito: No... (forms last handseal)
[Obito Fall down on ground with his arms lowered]
Madara(fully ressurected is shown): It is great feeling to be alive again after all these times (smirks)
[Madara looks at Obito with delighted look]
Madara: You filled your purpouse Obito, Now I can end you life once and for all (extends black rod from his opened palm)
Obito: ... *rise his hand to his eye...* No...
[Madara moves forward to finish Obito but it pass through Obito's body]
Madara(Narrows his eyes): Kamui... *I could finish him anyway, especially with the Rinnegan Kamui is no problem but I can't loose any time here. They may deal with my meteorites about now and then attack me.*
[Madara dashes away from Obito as Hashirama out of Sage mode with Rinnegan eyes is shown standing still]
PAGE SEVENTEEN

[Dust clear up and everyone is shown alive along wit tailed beasts being very tired]
Naruto: You did it, my friends !
Everyone: Thanks beasts !
Sasuke: (restore his calmness and normal rate breath) *Should I attack them now and finish them... even after they saved us along with this world* (inner conflicted)
[Scene changes to Madara piercing black rods comming from one of his opened palm into dying God Tree.]
Madara: ?! *It is slowly dying... It is bad* ?!
Madara: *Yes Senin mode uses nature energy as God Tree uses nature energy... maybe I can fill it up with it so it won't die*
[Small signs of God tree moving and reacting to Nature energy in Madara]
SFX: Reacts !
PAGE EIGHTTEEN
[Suddenly Main trunk opens up making hole inside as roots shoot towards Madara enveloping around him]
Madara: Shit ! (try to withstand)
[Madara is dragged inside dark hole as Main trunk closes completly after dragging him inside.]
SFX: Drags !
[Hashirama is shown suddenly loosing Rinnegan eyes as he snaps out. Obito is nowhere to be seen]
[Suddenly many roots shoot off from Tree God and envelops around Tailed beasts along with two comes after Naruto and Killer Bee. Naruto avoids in last second while Killer bee is too slow and get caught.]
[Killer bee along with rest tailed beasts get absorbed into God Tree but before Naruto bump fist with Shukaku and Gyuuki as he recieves some chakra from them.]
SFX: Absorbed !
[Last scene shows New God Treen turns into small devil/demon figure resembling Madara's body]
Ten tails possesed Madara's body: Your judgement finally came ! (dark tone voice)
RENEWED HOPE
[
NARUTO : ( observing Obito's reactions ) If Rin were still alive, She would probably say... " Stop putting up that front... and trying to hide behind it... Remember.... I'm always watching you. "
OBITO : ( lowered head ) .....
( Naruto extends his left hand towards Obito )
NARUTO : " Don't try to be anyone but yourself. You can stop running... ( Obito raises his left hand and looks at Naruto with widened eyes ) we're all waiting for you on this side... "
OBITO : [ On the other side... ? ]
( A transparent image gets created which is layered on top of Naruto )
OBITO : ( shocked expression ) Ri..n?
( Obito faces Rin's transparent image in place of Naruto's solid image with the same posture )
( Obito's left hand trembles as he moves his left hand towards Rin's left hand )
RIN : ( worried ) Stop putting up that front and don't hide behind it... Remember... I'm always watching you. Don't try to be anyone but yourself. You can stop running... We're all waiting for you on this side.. ( smiles )
( Rin is shown with a smiling face with her right hand at her back )
RIN : Saving you is the same as me saving the world.
SFX : GRAB
( Obito grabs Rin's hand )
OBITO : ?!!
( Obito views a transparent image of his good side standing in his place layered over his current image and grabbing Rin's hand )
( Transparent image of Obito is shown in Konoha's uniform with his left side of face covered with a cloth )
( Rin moves her left foot towards left and then turns towards left holding Obito's hand )
( Obito moves his right foot towards right and then turns right holding Rin's hand )
( Both runs towards the Shinobi Alliance )
OBITO : ( looking at Rin and Obito running ) ....
( raises his head a little in eagerness to approach them )
( Obito blinks his eye for a split second )
OBITO : ?!!
( He could not see them around anymore )
( turns suddenly looking at his front )
( Naruto is still standing with his extended left hand )
( Obito's face is covered with sweat )
OBITO : ( confused ) .....
( remembers Rin's serious face )
[
( An echo )
RIN : I'm always watching you.
RIN : I'm always watching you.
RIN : Show me how you'll save the world.
]
( Obito lowers his left hand )
OBITO : No. No! No!! I can't.
NARUTO : ?!!
OBITO : I've promised Rin that I will save the world. I can't step back. I am going to create a world where I can see her again. She'll-
NARUTO : Do you think she'll watch over you?
OBITO : ?!!
NARUTO : The promise you made with her, you think you're keeping it? Can you face Rin in the afterlife?
OBITO : ( confused ) ....
NARUTO : The dream you're approaching will only be an illusion which will try to comfort you according to your own needs. Will you be able to feel the warmth of her skin the moment she holds your hand? She'll be a mere puppet whose strings will be pulled by you. How can you expect a puppet to believe in you and correct your mistakes?
OBITO : ......
NARUTO : You still got a chance to change. Won't you agree to change if Rin would have asked you to come back? She's not anymore but what she hoped ... haven't faded yet. Her hope... can be renewed once again.
( Obito's confused face changes and he nods to Naruto's request )
NARUTO : Your friends are still waiting for you.
( Obito extends his hand towards Naruto )
( Naruto smiles )
( The Shinobis smiles )
( Obito smiles while extending his hand )
( Both the hands are close enough )
( An intense light flashes )
( Naruto's and Obito's smiling face disappears into the flash )
]
SFX : SLASH!!! SLAM!!!
( Dust emerges from the hole to the surface )
NARUTO : ?!! [ What happened? ]
OBITO : ( surrounded by the dust ) ?!!
( A huge Susano'o is standing on its knees holding a sword with a big cut in the ground )
SUSANO'O : Groah!!!!
( Susano'o is deactivated )
( a dark image approaches Obito in the dust )
OBITO : ?!!
SFX : GRAB!!
( The thing grabs Obito and slams him on the walls of the hole )
( The chakra of the bijuus' coming out of Obito's body gets stretched as Obito gets slammed )
( The thing is holding Obito still, blocking his legs and hands with a weird back )
OBITO : ( sees the clear picture of the thing holding him ) That mark.
( A dot inscribed into a circle is shown )
( Madara smirks standing on the ground with a cross look at Obito's location )
( Last Page )
( right rectangular panel )
MADARA : Let's continue...
( Left huge panel )
( Hashirama with no expression is shown blocking Obito with rods pierced in Obito's arms and legs )
( Obito with a shocked look is shown)
( Several rods are shown pierced in Hashirama's back )
( The whole scene is covered in dust )

( Madara played his trump card? Or he still... )
Clash of Obito's and Naruto's Will
Will Obito take that hand ?!
What is Obito's final answer ?
PAGE ONE

[First scene shows serious Naruto extending his right arm with opened palm towards Obito from Obito's point of view.]
Obito: ... (reaches out his right arm with opened palm to catch Naruto's hand)
[Flashback of young Obito crouching down over ground holding Rin's dead corpse]
Obito: I see... I am in the hell !

Madara: The longer you live... The more you realize that reality is just made of pain, suffering and emptiness
[/Flashback]
Naruto: ?! (notices Obito's arm stops then retreacting back)
Obito(serious face): No, you don't live as long as I am... you can't vow that you will never break.
PAGE TWO

Naruto: You are right... I am still young but...
Obito: ?!
Naruto(shouts with determined look)]: at least I don't make silly execuses to justify my own actions which are opposite to my dream and will !
Obito: ?! *Tsk * (clench his teeth)
Naruto: I repeat it once again... Stop runing away from reality and your true dream !
Obito(sad look): ....
[Flashback of young Obito holding Rin with his arms ]

Words reflecting from all sides: In a dream everything goes the way you want...
You can even make dead people come back to life...
PAGE THREE

Young Obito: I want to create the world of just that
Young Obito: I will...

Young Obito: I will create a world where you are alive !
Young Obito: I will change the fate of this world !

[/Flashback]
Naruto: ?! (spot new determined look mixed with anger on Obito's face)
Obito: I won't join your side... Rin promiesed me to be here and watch over me that why I can't keep my Hokage dream anymore unless The Rin is here ! (determined look)
PAGE FOUR

[Outside in the real world. Real Obito is shown floating high in sky as the tailed beasts are pulled away from him by Sussano armor wrapped around Kurama's shroud, Killer bee in Gyuuki from and Minato who is connected to everyone via chakra of Kurama.]
SFX: PULL !
Obito: ?!
Obito(struggling face expression): No... I won't loose to you. Not matter how much of you stand in my way...
Everyone: ?!
Obito: I will never break ! (chains of Outer path of the Rinnegan emerges outside )
SFX: Emerges !
[Chakra Chains of the Rinnegan rush towards Tailed beast chakra's being pulled then bind around them. ]
SFX: Bind !
Obito: I won't let you pull them out of my body (chakra chains squeeze tailed beasts chakra's hard as it pull them a inch back towards Obito's body)
PAGE FIVE

[Everyone is shown pulling with all their might]
SA: ?! (pull with all their might)
Obito: because I need this power to realize my dream !
[Naruto is shown snapping out in Kurama shroud pulling attention of Sasuke.]
Sasuke: It didn't go as smoothly as you thought (sighs)
Naruto: Unfortunetly no... he has very strong will even if opposite to mine...
Minato: Stop talking Naruto, Sasuke and focus on Pulling ! (struggling face expression)
[Tailed beast chakra is shown slowly being pulled inside Obito's body by chakra chains.]
SFX: Pull back !
PAGE SIX

Naruto(thinking): *Obito... He is very similliar to me, and he won't break down until he reaches his dream...*
Sasuke(struggling facial expression): Dammit ! (swings his big Perfect Sussano's sword at Rinnegan chains binded around tailed beasts chakra. )
SFX: Swings !
[Perfect Sussano cut slowly through chakra chains but then suddenly another pair of chakra chains emerges from broken part of initial chakra chain.]
SFX: Cut !
[New pair of chakra chains bind around Perfect Sussano sword stopping it's from moving]
SFX: Binds !
Sasuke: Shit ! (can't move his Perfect Sussano's sword as it is hold in place by chakra chains)
PAGE SEVEN

[Tug battle of chakra is shown between Shinobi Alliance on ground and Obito floating in the air.]
SFX: Pull !
[Naruto next to Sasuke is shown inside Kurama shroud]
Naruto: Damn it ! (notices Obito's catching Sasuke's Perfect Sussano sword)
Naruto: Dad ! We have to weaken Obito ! (forms black sphere in front of Kurama's shroud jaw)
Minato: GHAAA ! (struggling expression) Ok, let's combine our tailed beast bombs, Naruto !
[Minato enters Dark Kurama's shroud while charging tailed beast bomb.]
SFX: Charges !
[Naruto is shown holding complete Tailed beast bomb in front of Kurama's shroud jaw.]
Naruto: Let's do that, Dad !
[Naruto and Minato shoot off their tailed beasts bomb in Obito's direction at the same time.]
Minato/Naruto: Tailed beast Bomb !
SFX: Shoot !
PAGE EIGHT

[Tailed beasts bombs are shown flying towards Obito]
Obito: AGH!!! (notices Tailed beasts bomb) I won't let you do as you wish (black fluid emerges from Obito's hand as it forms giant shield covering Obito's)
[Tailed Beasts Bombs of Minato and Naruto clash with Obito's black fluid shaped shield]
SFX: Connects !
[Tailed Beasts bombs are shown keep moving further cracking black fluid shaped shield.]
Obito: Shit ! *I am too focused on pull tailed beasts chakra back via chakra chains... * (black fluid shaped shield harden as it pushes a bit both tailed beasts bomb backwards)
Naruto/Minato: ?!
[Suddenly huge Typhoon caryying huge mass of water forms around Obito crushing him under pressure and slashing him at the same time.]
Obito: Arghh ! (try to withstand typhoon power)
PAGE NINE

[Tobirama is shown with his arms clapped together with Hiruzen weaving some sequence of handseals]
Tobirama: Water release: Mystical water God technique ! *He is tough one*
SFX: Executed !
Tobirama: Saru ! (nods towards Hiruzen)
Hiruzen: I know Fire release: Breath of Dragon ! Earth release: Igneous rocks ! Deadly Rain of flaming rocks combination ! (claps both his arms together)
SFX: Shoot !
[Rain of ignited rocks are shown flying towards Obito covered by Typhoon]
[Chakra of tailed beasts are shown in half way pulled back inside Obito already with remaining left slowly being pulled back as well.]
Obito: ?! (sense something while regenerates and try to push typhoon further from his body)
PAGE TEN

[Thousand of Ignited rocks moving at great pace passes through typhoon hitting hard Obito's body]
SFX: Hit !
Obito(closes own of his eyes in pain): ARGH !!!! *I see this water is special... it actually drains my life force and weaken my body that why physcial object ignited with fire can wound me so bad*
Obito: Damn you !
[Back inside mind dimenssion where Naruto is still standing in front of Obito]
Naruto(closes his eyes): I see..., so you refuses to join my side while keep clinging to your dream.
Obito(determined look): that right.
Naruto(Open his eyes): My respect towards you then only rise up even more. It is really worthy of admiration.
Obito(confused): ?!
Naruto: However I am more interested in what you said to me just moment ago...
Obito(cofused even more): ....
PAGE ELEVEN

Naruto: You mentioned something about if The Rin was here then you could still keep your Hokage's dream.
Obito: And what about it (annoyed look)
Naruto: That is silly of you, you can't depend fate of you dream on someone other then yourself. Yes you can hold them dear and their help is much appreciated but you can't depends entire on them.
Obito: Is that so ?! (smirks) then why you keep saying same bullshit about someone who can't save one friend can't become Hokage, eh Naruto ?
Naruto: ?! you mean
Obito: Yeah, I mean Sasuke Uchiha, your friend.
Naruto(lower his head): ...
Obito: How could you depends fate of your dream on your friend, friend who is only trying to kill you stop you from reaching your dream. At least Rin could be here to help me fulfill my dream. Answer me Naruto (annoyed with determined and serious look)
Naruto: I will become Hokage even if I can't save Sasuke !, but also I promise that I save Sasuke from darkness before I become Hokage !
Obito: Childlish attitude as always... you need to grow up, Naruto.
PAGE TWELVE

Naruto: you think so (turns serious)
Obito: ?!
Naruto: but your Hokage's dream is not lost yet...It always bothered me why you the Rinnegan wielder can't ressurect Rin if you are capable of using this ressurection technique which Nagato used, tell me Obito.
Obito: ?! I couldn't do it... (lower his head and try to avoid eyes contact)
Naruto: Is that so..., I know you are hidding something away from me, Obito...
Obito: Tsk... Fine, I could ressurect Rin and even live with her... but...
Naruto: You are afraid that she would be dissapointed by you and doesn't approve your actions. That why forcing dream world would allow you to manipulate everyone, even Rin would be forced to accept your new self, am I right ?!
Obito(shock cover his face): ?!
PAGE THIRTEEN

[Huge Wooden statue with Hashirama standing on it and Perfect Sussano with Madara inside moves towards each other cause great impact on the ground.]
SFX: Charge !
[Pefect Sussano pull of four swords as Huge Wooden Statue move forwards it's thousand arms. ]
SFX: Prepare !
[Hige Wooden statue moves all of it's arms pointing in direction of Perfect Sussano while closing them all in fists.]
SFX: Prepare !
[Perfect Sussano swings it's all giant swords at Incomming Thousand arms of wooden statue expelling incredibely powerfull slashes in "X" form creating huge disturbance in air while powerfull slashes travel towards Wooden statue carrying amazing power at great velocity.]
SFX: Swings !
[Wooden Thousand arms of statue are shown striking at full force towards Madara's Perfect Sussano carrying amazing power which create huge shockwaves comming along with them.]
SFX: Strikes !
[Huge explosion occur as the schockwave of impact is shown spreading covering great area in dust.]
PAGE FOURTEEN

Naruto: No matter what you says, That Rin couldn't be true, just false puppet without emotions and feelings. What about your friends, Obito ? Could you really enjoy living rest of your life among puppet people without emotions and will !
Obito: Stop it, Naruto ! Nothing you do can affect me..., your words won't reach me. I am not fool !
[Back in the real world. Obito is shown with small bruises over his body as he regenerates]
SFX: Regenerates !
[Tailed beasts chakra was pulled a bit by Shinobi Alliance using weakness moment of Obito]
SFX: Pull !
Obito: ?! *I won't let you win!* (Chakra chains harders grip of Tailed beasts chakra as they are pulling back into Obito)
[Naruto and Sasuke are shown inside Sussano armor wrapped around Kurama's shroud]
Naruto(struggles): Damn it ! It is not use !(watches as his and his dad tailed beast bomb are hold from Obito by black fluid shaped shield)
PAGE FIFTEEN

[Hashirama's clone along with Tsunade and Sakura are shown pulling tailed beast chakra with all might]
SFX: Pull !
Tsunade: HAAA !! *He is very strong... even left alone against entire army*
Sakura: Shaanaroo !!!! (pulling with all her strength while slamming her feet into ground)
Hashirama's clone(struggling to attack): Everyone ! attack him with all might !
[Panel shows thousand of different attack flying towards Obito]
SFX: Income !
[Back Inside Obito vs Naruto mind struggle.]
Naruto: that right, will and emotions of people is what make them dear to us. It is what allows us to create bond with them... and the most important...
Obito(hidden his curiosity): ?!
Naruto: The will and strong emotions allow us to have dream and keep going until fullfiling it while overcoming all obstacles in our way. It keep pushing us forward !
[Naruto's figure is shown with determined look as Obito as Hokage image is shown overlapping over him while saying all these words above. ]
Obito: ?! *Me*
PAGE SIXTEEN

[Suddenly Image of Rin, Kakashi and Minato appears around Naruto's image overlapped by Hokage Obito. They are smilling looking with great admiration towards Hokage Obito.]
Obito(widden his eyes): *Rin, Kakashi, Sensei...*
[In the last moment Entire Shinobi Alliance is shown around Hokage Obito's image overlapping on Naruto standing in front of him]
Obito: Everyone, I (put his arms on his head as in pain) am...
Obito(denying while struggling mentally): No... I refuse. They are not real, they are really not here ! (glares at Naruto with deathly intent)
[Outside in the real word. Shot On Hashirama motionless body]
SFX: Restrict !
[Shot on Black rods impaled all over Hashirama's bodies]
SFX: Impaled !
PAGE SEVENTEEN

[Shot on Madara's face covered with his hair while turned towards side ]
[Shot on Madara's face turned towards us with Senjutsu markings forming around his face as the Rinnegan glows violently]
Madara: Time to fullfill my dream, Obito (evil smirks)
[Shot on someone's legs straight forward]
[Shot on someone's upper torso ]
[Shot on Kakashi's face uncovering his Mangenkyou sharingan with his rigth arm moving away]
Kakashi: Finally, I am going back Obito ! *wait for me, there my friend... I help to save you from darkness*
[Last scene shows Naruto with Obito as Hokage's image overlapping around him alogn with all friends including Rin pointing their fingers at Obito's chest]
Everyone(in Obito Imagination)/Naruto(outside of imagination): You are wrong Obito. We(as Obito see)/They(as Naruto says) are all alive in your heart (points finger at his heart)
[Obito's shocked expression is shown as tears forms in his eyes.]
END

Rinnegan power boosted by Senjutsu is about to be revealed !
Naruto's words finally reach Obito as Obito's hole in heart is finally filled !
Kakashi makes his come back !

655 - Conclusion
Madara's Back-up Plan!
Lights streak across the night sky like shooting stars. They launch into different directions, attempting to resurrect the pour souls that lost their lives. Obito's hair begins to fade into a snow white as he struggles to maintain the Jutsu.
The Allied Shinobi Force observes silently as bright shadows dance across their faces.

Madara: (Frustrated)

Hashirama: Don't you see? The Will of Fire can never be forgotten. It continues to linger in the hearts of those even so deep into darkness...

Elsewhere

Shukaku: Huh? What the hell... we're at HQ!

Inoichi: That's strange. I could've sworn me and my mother were having a conversation.

Chouza: Who the hell cares, ya'll?! Someone brought us back! The question is; who?

Back at Battlefield

Neji: (Cough, cough)

Hinata: Neji-san!

Ten-ten: Oh my god! Lee, Gai sensei!

Neji: Huhh? Whatt haaapened?

Hinata: (Cradling him) Naruto... (Tear) Naruto saved us all.

Dead Shinobi begin to slowly rise, dazed from their quick journey out of the afterlife. Some jump up with joy to be alive while others try and make logic out of the current situation.

Obito: (Puffing) (Collapses) ....

Naruto: Oi! Obito! Are you okay? Obito!

Obito: I can hear you, idiot.

Naruto: (Smiles)

Obito: . . . Thank you . . .

Naruto: No... (Everybody behind him) Thank you!!!

Different Dimension

Kakashi: (Observing through shared vision) It seems like you do have a heart Obito. Well, time for me to get back there. (About to use Kamui, see's something) ... what the hell is that? (Trots over to edge of block he's standing on) (Peers down and eyes widen in absolute terror)

A giant pit is lodged in the center of the bizarre world. It seems to be kilometers deep and is surrounded on all sides by the rectangular fixtures. Kakashi stares in confusion as he tries to make sense of this seemingly black hole.

Kakashi: This is... a hole of some kind. What's it doing in the middle of this place?

Battlefield

Hashirama: It's over now. You can't possibly win. Just allow yourself to be sealed, so this doesn't have to drag out too long.

Madara: (Straight Face)

Naruto: Yeah, it's over Madara. It's time for you old people to leave the present alone! ... Eh, no offense old Hokage's.

Madara: You all seem to think our game is over. You see, it's only begun. And thank you for accelerating my goals by essentially immobilizing Obito.

Naruto: Why?! You're gonna try and take over his body again and make him revive you?! It's too late for that! He's already done the jutsu which means he's out of chakra and can't help you!

Madara: Quiet you loud mouth brat! Watch and learn as the master chessman make his moves! Ha! (Prepares Hand sign)

Obito begins to yell on the ground as his half turns dark once again. Naruto grimaces and screams, "Stop it! There's no point in just torturing him!". Madara laughs and somberly says, "I do everything with a purpose. Beating a dead horse does NOT serve my agenda." The black half manifest into a new Zetsu which springs upward, shocking everyone near it. It jumps toward Madara and merges with him who stretches eagerly.

Madara: Ahhh. Now that's that done.

Naruto: !

Sasuke: !

Obito: !

Madara: Rinne Tensei

Oonoki: Whaaa!

Ay: The hell is he saying!

Tsunade: This is impossible!

Hashirama: Madara, what are you doing!

Madara: Can't you see? (Giant creature rises behind him) I'm resurrecting myself. (The Beasts' mouth slides open and a single soul is administered to Madara who's body is engulfed in light. It's cracks disappear and Madara comes back fully alive.)

Sakura: But... how is that possible?!

???: Simple. Since he was basically immortal, the Rinne Tensei couldn't take away his life.

Shikamaru: DAD!!!

Shukaku: No time for schematics, son. Madara just used his immortality to grant him mortality. But in doing so, he made himself a lot more vulnerable.

Naruto: I thought that technique couldn't be used on people who had died so long ago.

Shukaku: We should all know that the regular rules don't apply to Uchiha Madara.

Madara: (Crazy Smile)

Sasuke: So all we have to do is kill him now. (Full Susano'o) Should be simple enough.

Madara: Don't get ahead of yourself brat. You're a hundred years to early. I still have the Rinnegan, Sharigan, and Mokuton at my leisure. So basically, I'm still one tough son of a' *****.

Hashirama: (Behind him) Take this!!! Huh?!

Hashirama phases through Madara who quickly counters the attack once he gets all the way through.

Everyone: Whaat!!

Madara: And here... I take this man's Senjutsu.

Hashirama: What the hell! (Black Rod pierces him begins draining some of his chakra. He falls on his knees, huffing as Madara stares at the rod before him)

Madara: Hehehe... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! (Rips off armor revealing Hashirama's face) (Stabs himself in it)

Sage energy begins to flow through Madara's body as it surges through his veins, capitalizing it's strength, expanding the valves as his chakra nearly explodes.

Madara: This is the end!!!
Hashirama's defeat
[ Chapters opens at Naruto extending his arm to Obito ]

Obito ( Shocked ):.....

Obito( Regains his composure ) : Don't be silly Naruto , there is no way i can go to be my old self and live in the village after what i've done.

Obito : This is the path i've chosen , i can't abandon it know when i'm so close to its closure even if i starts to regret it.

Obito : I lived longer than you , i can't be convinced by words after what i witnessed in this rotten world , if you truly want to convince me that your path is the right one , then you should do it by actions and not words.

Naruto ( Smiles ) : You really are just like me , fine then i'll show you that nothing is impossible as long as you work for it , i'm going to bring true peace to this world !!

[Scene change back to the battlefield ]

Obito ( Serious expression ) : I won't go down easily Naruto !

( Obito puts his hand on the Bijuu's Chakra and starts absorbing it )

Obito : Gakido !

Random Shinobi : He is absorbing the Chakra !

Gai : That's a Rinnegan power !

Naruto ( Smiles ) : don't worry everyone , we can do it !

[ Panels shows random SA regaining their spirits ]

Naruto : Well then , pull !!

SA : Yea !!

[Scene change back to Hashirama and Madara ]

Hashirama : Your student is losing over there , you should give up Madara , i don't want to beat you a second time.

Madara's clone : So you didn't notice anything back then ?

Hashirama : What do you mean ?

Madara's clone : You never killed me , the one that you stabbed was a double that i created right after you stopped the Kyuubi.

[ FB showing Madara performing the Fission Jutsu in the final fight ]

Hashirama( Shocked ) : What ? then why you didn't come back after that fight ?

Madara's clone : Because i already got what i wanted from that fight.

( Madara points at his Rinnegan )

Madara's clone : And i'm gonna use it to defeat you right now !

Madara's clone ( Serious ) : Bansho Tennin !

( Hashirama gets pulled suddenly )

Hashirama : * What the hell is this attractive force ?! but i won't let him beat me ! * Mokuton: Sashiki no Jutsu !

( Madara's clone gets pierced by multiples wooden spikes )

Hashirama : Your were too cocky Madara , now to seal you my old friend !

( But Hashirama gets suddenly grabbed by 3 mechanical arms )

Hashirama : But how can you ?

Madara's clone : I've deliberately let you stab me so that...

( Suddenly Hashirama is stabbed by black rod in the chest from the back )

Madara : i can beat you the same way you beat me 80 years ago.

( The clone grabbing Hashirama starts dissolving )

( Hashirama's eyes starts slowly to turn into Rinnegan )

Hashirama: So... this...was..a...clone ,but...when...did...you ?

Madara ( smirks ) : When the Shinju was attacking us.

( Madara looks at Obito's direction )

Madara ( serious ) : Time to end this , Obito !

End.
Irony
Naruto asks obito to come to his side . what will obito do ?

( chapter starts with naruto holding his hand for obito to take it )

Obito : ( thinks ) he is ?

Naruto : will you take it obito uhiha ?

( Obito moves his hand toward naruto's but stops )

( flash back )

Madara : Until then you are madara uhiha

( Disconnect himself from shell of juubi )

Obito : ( thinking ) I can't trust him although what he saying is true . I won't gonna resurrect you . i will create my
own dream world .

Naruto : Obito ! i'm asking you for last time . will you take it ?

Obito : ( think for while and answers ) you have to defeat me first . let's see who's will is stronger . mine or yours .

Naruto : Is this what you really wants ?

Obito : yes . if you can defeat me ( pause ) i will give up or I gonna go with my plan .

( both stare at each other with determined look and disappears )

( Outside shared subconscious )

Naruto : ( thinks ) if this you wants obito uhiha ( to everyone ) Pull everyone . give all you got .

Obito : Don't think i gonna go easy on you naruto because you are like me .

Sasuke : hmph .

Minato : something is different on obito than before ?

( obito pulls tail beast chakra with all his might and some ninja holding Minato's chakra gets thrown away )

Ninja 1 : ( holding his leg ) damn . my leg

Ninja 2 : ( his shoulder is dislocated ) my arm

Ninja 3 : ( holding a wounded kunochi ) we need help .

( Katsuyu clones comes and begins healing them )

Sakura : Tsunade - sama isn't it time for us to join them ?

Tsunade : ( smiles ) naruto can handle it besides everyone there to help him .

Sakura : but i promised to myself i gonna be with him . i mean with others .

Tsunade : ( smiles ) go sakura ! i will handle this for now and tend to wounded .

( naruto and others losing the grip of tail beast chakra )

Obito : Look like you are weaker than i thought naruto !

Naruto : Hold on everyone .

( they can't hold it as obito absorbs it back to him )

( someone lands in front of naruto )

Naruto : Sakura - chan !

Sakura : Pull with me . naruto !!

( sakura starts dragging tail beast chakra along with others )

Naruto : ( grins ) OK . everyone let's show him our will of fire .

Obito : That girl ?

( remembers rin along with him )

Obito : rin . do you think i went wrong way ?

( suddenly hashirama comes in sage mode and stabs obito with large wood branch )

Obito : ugh . ( coughs blood and looks at hashirama's eyes ) Madara ?

( we can see hashirama's wood clone has become just a wood )

Madara : That's right obito . it's me .

( he is hovering over the tail beast chakra and comes down with a susano'o sword slash cutting tails beast chakra in to two )

( obito stays hovering . while naruto and others gets thrown away )

Obito : ( coughs blood ) bastard !

( Kicks hashirama right on the face and sends him flying )

Minato : That looked similar to what i did to kurama ?

Naruto : dad . what do you mean ?

Sasuke : hm .

Sakura : ( she has fallen over naruto ) Ah . ( stand fast ) what you mean ?

Minato : Madara separated ten tails in to ying and yang that's why .

Naruto : that means i have half of tail beast chakra ?

Obito : i gonna kill you madara .

( Hold s obito with bansho tenin )

Madara : i'm edo remember obito besides you can't fight with a rinnegan wealder .

( make a one handed seal and extracts tentails out )

Madara : now you have only the old shell of yours . now revive me .

( obito's right side becomes black faster and perform the seal fast Reviving madara )

Obito : ( falls down ) Uwaah .

Madara : You fight them while i become the jinchuraki .

( Controlled Hashirama is standing in front of madara ready to fight the alliance )

Madara is ready show his full power

( Can alliance handle these two most powerful ninja's of their era at once )

The End

Next time Naruto and Sasuke Vs Madara and hashirama
Despair and Hope
Obito looks at Naruto's hand .

Obito : Joining your side you mean ? Don't be foolish .

Naruto : Why... ?

Obito with a fearsome look : Listen , this world is completely worthless , you expect me to live in this twisted system ?

Naruto : I'm pretty sure if Rin was alive , she would hate you .

Obito surprised .

Naruto continues : Yes ... she would hate you . What you've become now is the completely opposite what she wanted . What you're doing is against her . She died to protect the village , yet you're destroying it .

Obito : You're right , I'm creating a new world of peace .

Naruto angry : I'm tired of your bullshit !! What you're doing is wrong !!

Obito confident : No ! You should know by now that the world is hopeless . People will never understand each other .

Naruto : I will make them understand !!

Obito : You're pretty naive , just like me when I was young .

Naruto : Back then , I watched Kakashi sensei almost everyday going to your "grave" , and I thought that "Obito Uchiha" is truly a hero , he died by protecting his friends . I did really admire you back then .

Obito is speechless .

Naruto continued :But then you turned out to be the cause of many horrible things that happened .

Obito : Reality made me like this . Time changes people , Naruto .

Naruto : I really did thought you as a hero !!

Obito : I'm that person who is the victim of this system .

Naruto : ...

Obito : Like hell I'm joining you !

Naruto : Are you really serious ?

Obito : Indeed .

Naruto : If you really think like that... turning your back to your friends ... are you really sure... ?

Obito doesn't talk...

Naruto : Friends are what will fill that hole in your chest .

Obito gets astonished .

Flashback

Rin : Obito , do your best !!

Obito : Yeah , I will win this match for sure !!

After a while .

Obito : Damn , I got beat again... I'm really hopeless .

Rin healing him : Don't give up , I'm pretty sure you'll be stronger !

Kakashi arrives and says : Don't give up so easily too , Obito !

Iruka and Gai arrived : Kakashi's right !!

Flashbacks ends

Obito thinking : I-I see ... my friends ...

Naruto smiling : You realize that now ? You said to me that loneliness is the worst thing , and you did want me to response . Here it is : Don't ever forget you friends !!

Obito shocked : You... Those... words...

Obito looks to Naruto .

Naruto : That's right... Kakashi taught me those words !

What will Obito's answer be... ?
وَ السَّلاَمُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ اللهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ

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